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  1. I echo the other comments here - a well-written story (from the point of view of convincing characters, realistic reactions etc) is far more important than the exact type of content. Reading various stories here, I’ve come to realise that I have a very narrow set of topics that are my top preference and are always present in my own fantasies, but so narrow that there’s hardly ever a story posted here that precisely matches them. But a well written story will entice me away to enjoy things that I don’t consider my true preference. To the case in point for your question: for me, desperation should always end in a wetting (and the character should enjoy it), but if you have built up a character who doesn’t think that way, then it’s just going to sound wrong if you tack on an ending to suit me - much better to write the ending that suits the character and situation. If I really want to, I can imagine the alternative ending myself, but much more often I will enjoy the story for what it is. And of course I’m in no position to tell you what to do - readers here owe a huge debt of gratitude to those who make the effort to write and post, so you should write what makes you happy.
  2. I look forward to it! Certainly makes more sense as a separate story as Brittany doesn't run with the same crowd, and perhaps the content will be a little different. Maybe not quite as nonchalant as the others have become, at least in public? Your productivity puts almost everyone else to shame! I have a story I started writing several years ago that's still not ready to post....
  3. Well, you'd pretty much telegraphed that Alicia was coming, and then you pranked us with the "only 5 places" thing so we had no time to think of Nadia before she'd arrived. The unexpected bit for me was that Tori and Lilly turned up - I thought you'd sent Alicia to a different college, but I went back and checked and you didn't say that, I must have just assumed it! Then there's Tori's aunt, who I'd almost forgotten about when she didn't after all take a significant part in 'Told to'. Is Tori finally going to interact with her? Does this bring the Soccer girls in contact with the P team and maybe reconcile with Alicia?
  4. Well, that's kind of a two-way street: the more coverage they get, the more chance we have to grow to like them. So if you'd asked this question a few chapters ago it would have to be Mary-Ann because it was really her story. But then Karenna's character got more developed and right now she's my favourite: her life is more complicated and really shows her character as she tries to deal with what life throws at her, while Mary-Ann is now in an easy groove - nice boyfriend, able to indulge her fetish at will, loyal staff all do what she tells them, no real challenge. But who knows, maybe Mary-Ann will make a comeback. I don't think Cassie will ever be my favourite, though that doesn't mean she deserves less screen-time as her story is beginning to get interesting.
  5. It seemed unlikely that Karenna/Cassie would have gone from being rude to each other to all friendly in such a short space of time, so some kind of dispute was called for; the "shut up" did seem rather abrupt, but I put that down to Karenna's judgement being impaired by her desperate need to pee, so it was actually good. Mary-Ann/Tyler feels like she hasn't really "fallen for" him yet, but the potential is there. Nothing wrong with Anna's scenes, and an interesting twist, but I do wonder how you are going to make her fit in. Will she be upset if she discovers that Mary-Ann enjoys it which devalues the gesture she apparently made in support of Anna. Not to mention finding a bunch of people who enjoy the thing that makes her life miserable. Very tricky to write a nice outcome - but I am sure you can do it!
  6. My reaction to this sort of question is that you should write whatever fires your imagination rather than artificially inserting scenes to suit other people - the result is likely to be of higher quality, and if it doesn't happen to match my tastes, that's my problem not yours; it will probably suit someone else instead. I find that I can enjoy a poorly-written story only if it's exactly matching my taste, but well-written stories I can enjoy over a much wider range - to an extent, the quality of the story matters more than the content. But as it happens, the current rate of omo suits my taste - what counts for me is new unique scenarios rather than the total number of scenes, and that often takes a bit of setup to get there.
  7. Definitely. I always like those stories - the omo equivalent of the classic "coming of age" storyline that drives so many movie plots. And even Brittany has promise - while I was angry at her for the double-cross, we know she likes it so perhaps she's continuing to indulge, while keeping it oh-so-secret from her sorority peers?
  8. OK! So we still don't know Cassie's story, but enough hints to know that there's a story to be told and more insight into her character. All good stuff. Meantime Sarah is being lined up as the villain.
  9. Hmm! It was just a feeling, but now you're making me analyse it.... I think it's because she's being rude and disrespectful to the other characters (who we've already come to know and like), but without any purpose: it's not because she's engaged in some evil plot, she's not a total slacker who never does any work for anybody, she's not doing it because she's ultra-competitive, maybe she thinks she's better than Karenna but if so we've not been given any reason why she should think that way; conversely she's not resenting others for being better than her. Essentially she's just got this nasty attitude and no reason for it. But as I say, it's early days and the reason may become clear - or her attitude may soften and she comes to respect the others (or she gets fired...). Or maybe I'm grumbling over nothing and the story needs an annoying character for contrast with the likeable ones. Certainly trust your own judgement over mine - I wouldn't have dreamed of commenting if you hadn't asked the question!
  10. I think Cassie is bordering on being annoying, but I have faith that you made her this way for a reason - that she's leading up to a "bad girl made good" storyline, or going the other way turning into a villain that we will love to hate, or some other twist I haven't thought of. She's only just appeared in the story, too early to make judgement yet. And I agree with everyone else that Karenna's situation is very well written - we feel for her in making difficult choices.
  11. Whilst I'm hugely enjoying this series and wouldn't presume to tell you how to write it, can I put in a plea for slightly more acknowledgement that they are actually enjoying it? Part 18 in particular had rather a "don't know why I'm doing this but I'm doing it anyway" feel to it - which was entirely appropriate for the early parts of Tori's tale and when new characters are being introduced, but now we have Tori and Lily who have been doing it for long enough that if they didn't really enjoy it they'd have given up, and they are talking privately so don't have to hide their enjoyment. Enjoyment doesn't have to be explicitly sexual if that isn't how it grabs these characters, but a little more joy in what they are doing would be nice (especially if it counterbalances the darker material you have warned us of coming up). Many thanks for your hard work in bringing us these stories.
  12. She has form on that - seems pretty clearly an excuse. Evidently she's more cautious with Lilly around - with Tori, she'd gradually worked up from the "unavoidable accidents" to the "better than the alternative" situations and finally reached the point of setting out with a clear plan to wet (on the shopping trip). These subtle interactions are the joy of this series - very nicely done.
  13. Good to see that their traumatic experience in the field hasn't put them off the things they enjoy. Probably a wise move skipping the timeline on a bit, but there's a slight continuity error: 5 months from start of lockdown on 20th March would take it to 20th August and they'd be on summer holidays. So I'm assuming it's more like 3.5-4 months and they are near the end of the summer term. Not that it really matters of course. I'd love to hear Rosie's reaction to finding out that Lula was actually peeing when the teacher told her off for yawning, but I'm not sure if Lula is going to tell her. I'm also itching to find out more about Sakura - I'm sure she's more into this than she has admitted so far. That comment about "I need to pee, what would you do?" was really trying to lead Rosie on, before the plot veered off in another direction. Still, we've learned with this story that good things come to those who wait! Many thanks for your continued work on this.
  14. Because we were too excited to get a couple of new chapters in a few days? I did think when I read the first one that you were being bold keeping the story in contemporary real time - it might have been easier to take the story off into a parallel universe where COVID never happened. But by the time I was reading the second chapter I'd forgotten and didn't notice the error (and reading it again, it could just as well have been Lula & Rosie having forgotten that school was off).
  15. Of course we understand if you don't have the time or motivation to write, but never think it's not wanted. We want more Lula!
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