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  1. Because we were too excited to get a couple of new chapters in a few days? I did think when I read the first one that you were being bold keeping the story in contemporary real time - it might have been easier to take the story off into a parallel universe where COVID never happened. But by the time I was reading the second chapter I'd forgotten and didn't notice the error (and reading it again, it could just as well have been Lula & Rosie having forgotten that school was off).
  2. Of course we understand if you don't have the time or motivation to write, but never think it's not wanted. We want more Lula!
  3. Amber is bound to ask Chloe if she made it, and there's Amber's own story to be revealed. Not to mention that dodgy zipper which is bound to cause trouble at some point... Really looking forward to how this all plays out.
  4. A really good set of stories - I missed them the first time around as they were tagged male desperation and that isn't my thing, but in fact so well written that even the male ones were worth a read. I particularly liked the little twist in the tale at the end of many of the stories - my favourite being February where we hear at the beginning of Fred's friendly offer to call in case of trouble, then at the end we learn what sort of trouble he is really hoping for.
  5. Excellent stuff. You had me going with the first couple of paragraphs - silk curtain and smell of apples? That's odd inside a car? Oh, the story's moved on to another scene - damn, I was really looking forward to how the car journey worked out. Oh, it is still the story inside the car! I do like stories like this where everybody's in the same (desperate/wet) situation, yet the each have their own way of looking at it.
  6. The fans will be anxiously waiting for the prequel, the spin-off miniseries etc. Not sure about the merchandising opportunities... Much enjoying the story so far.
  7. Many thanks for taking the trouble to make your story available to those of us who can't read Dutch. I certainly enjoyed it! I could only spot three very minor errors in the english, two of which look like spell-checker damage: you wrote "stared at her in disbelieve" when you meant "in disbelief", and you wrote "for a few instances" when you meant "for a few instants". Finally, "she didn’t have the slightest perspective to reach toilet facilities" should probably be "she didn't have the slightest prospect of reaching toilet facilities". looking forward to the next t
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