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  1. I can agree with the 9thersmostly, but I'd say we don't plug her until we've had her hold it on her own for at least a while. That way, she may actually want to be plugged just to help her hang on.
  2. First one should be easy, right? What would you like the contest to be like? Do they fight it the longest or the most? Or both? Should they wear anything specific? Are there ways they are allowed to make it more difficult for their opponents?
  3. @DespMely @John Cena69 @Night Rain @Melificentfan @WildRoseBaby @TheGreatNobody @sicarius4 @GhoSt @mynameissteven @wedgeantilles @Thar @Luna @MysteryGirl373 @gorcq @Mrt2004 @DanDaren @trololo @alpheus @Maxine @Batman007 @EmmieChu @peepeepants @Tali'zorah @Markj9494 @gfaroank @McMango @OmoCommando As always, a quick heads up to people who previously stated they liked this story, as I had you wait for an update way too long once again.
  4. As always, this took longer than we all would have liked it to, but here it is: CHAPTER 16 “H-Hermione,” Ginny whispered in a panicked voice when both girls they were working with stopped paying attention to them once again. “I can’t hold it much longer. What do I do?” Seeing her friend was really panicking now, Hermione saw no other option and quickly got the largest flask she could find from her bag. “Pee in this,” she whispered. “No one will notice if you do it beneath your desk right now.” Ginny turned crimson at the thought of what she was about to do, but a new spasm of her bladder caused a spurt of pee to run down her leg and reminded her of the fact she was out of other options. She moved to the front of her chair and reached beneath her skirt to pull her soaked underwear to the side before placing the bottle between her legs. She was already losing more spurts, which made it easy for her to locate her peehole. She pressed the flask against it and relaxed just enough to let a constant stream come out of her. It hurt but she did not dare to relax completely as she was afraid she would not be able to stop in time anymore if she did and she knew the flask was much smaller than her bladder. Soon, way sooner than she would have liked, Ginny filled up the flask. She had released a quarter of her bladder's contents but it was enough to allow her to regain control for now. She just hoped she would be able to hold the rest until after class. Still afraid of being noticed, Ginny quickly put a stopper in the flask, pulled her fairly wet underwear back up and put the flask in her bag. Hermione was glad she had been able to watch that show until the end, because just seconds later, professor Snape called her to his desk. After she explained her plans to him in detail, he told her she had set herself a real challenge and he expected her to fail, but he went on to help her anyway. “I agree with you on the options you found to improve the potion's effect. Also, a magical human being should do for a magical influence present at the brewing. However, I am afraid it may need to be closer to the potion, possibly in it as an ingredient, but you can't put a human in a potion for obvious reasons. Maybe a hair or something like that could do, but you will need to look into that more.” “In addition,” Snape continued, “the way of mixing ingredients does indeed matter in some potions, but this goes only for ingredients that come from animals. Hagrid should indeed be a good source for ideas on that, but asking professor Sprout would just be a waste of her time. Now see if you can learn more from the student from my house you are working with.” Over the years, Hermione had learned to ignore comments like the last one coming from Snape and she went back to her place. Just like Ginny had been doing, she tried to squeeze any useful information out of her partner, but that was futile and her partner did not even bother to ask her any questions. Therefore, the remainder of the class went by pretty uneventful for both girls, until Snape called Ginny to his desk just five minutes before the end of class. When Ginny sat down at Snape's desk, she felt her bladder throb in response to the sudden increase in pressure, but she knew it was caused by sitting down and not by her bladder actually getting that full again already. Knowing that changing positions would only make things worse, she just ignored it and hoped Snape would hurry up. “You seem to be on the right track with combining multiple potions. Your work should focus on figuring out the anatomy for now as you suggested,” Snape said. “Madam Pomfrey doesn't like to come up with creative ideas ‘though. You'll have to think this through and ask her to confirm the changes you intend to make are safe. I'll make that a requirement for combining any of these potions too, for your own safety. I know too little about human anatomy to help you with that.” Just as Ginny prepared to get up again and grant her bladder some relieve, Snape continued talking and Ginny could not help a leak from further soaking her underwear. “I noticed you're teaming up with miss Granger and I couldn't help but think your potion may be the solution for brewing hers. She may need access to strange parts of her body to gather ingredients. Go visit Hagrid with her and work out plans for the necessary changes to your bodies for both potions together. You'll both profit from that.” With that, Snape stood up, raised his voice and said: “Class dismissed!” Ginny almost jumped up and hurried out of the classroom, to the nearest bathroom. The moment she walked out again, she was greeted by Hermione, who had easily guessed where Ginny had gone. “Made it,” Hermione asked. “Sort of,” Ginny replied before leading her friend's hand under her skirt to let her feel the dampness of her panties. “Hmm, so naughty,” Hermione giggled when she felt that Ginny must have been leaking. “There's an hour left before dinner. Wanna come help me do something about my throbbing clit.” Ginny blushed fiercely, but replied: “Gladly, and I hope you can do the same for me. Not tonight ‘though. If I can survive sitting on my bladder, you can certainly deal with some arousal until tomorrow and then we'll have almost to whole castle to ourselves.” “Fair enough,” Hermione replied, despite biting her lip in frustration. It was going to be a long wait until next evening, but she would make sure it would be worth the wait. “In fact,” Hermione continued, “I really need to take a shower now anyway. We both do, I guess. Wanna come join me?” Ginny nodded enthusiastically and the girls hurried back to their dormitory, got each other some clothes to wear to dinner and took them into a shower stall; one single shower stall that is. Immediately after she locked the door, Hermione started undressing Ginny and Ginny joined in by stripping Hermione. Soon they were showering and Hermione's hand unconsciously inched towards her burning nethers, until Ginny stopped it, whispering: “Not yet. Tomorrow.” Hermione groaned but obeyed. Upon finishing their shower, the girls dried off each other's body and Hermione made sure to give Ginny's left bum cheek a good squeeze as she did. Ginny squealed in surprise as she felt a drip of pee flow down her leg despite not having felt even the slightest need to pee right before. “Hey! You made me pee myself a bit there,” she said, playing angry. Hermione laughed and just continued by getting Ginny into her fresh clothes. Soon, the girls were on their way to the great hall and Ginny told Hermione: “Snape told me to join you on your visit to Hagrid tonight. He said you might be able to use a potion like the ones I'm trying to brew to reach parts of your body you normally can't. Is it okay if I come and join you on your visit to Hagrid so I'll know what you’ll be talking about if you’ll actually have a question for me on this later on? You can join me to madam Pomfrey afterwards too if you'd like to.” “Sure, sounds like a plan and at worst we can keep each other company,” Hermione replied. "For now, let's eat ‘though. I'm starving,” she added as they reached the great hall. Dinner went by pretty uneventful, although Ginny made sure to hint Hermione about any liquids she consumed (a large glass of pumpkin juice and some soup) and Hermione in turn made sure to drink about twice as much (two large glasses of pumpkin juice, some soup and a slush puppie for desert). “So are we going straight to Hagrid's,” Hermione asked as they walked out of the great hall. She was not feeling any effects from all she drank yet and considered a bathroom visit unnecessary for now despite knowing she would definitely need to go later, as she had about a litre of liquids with that dinner. Ginny hesitated for a moment as she had been feeling her bladder start to fill up around the end of dinner, but she truthfully said: “Yeah, let's go. I'm fine now that I'm standing. And I don't mind having to deal with sitting for a while. We’re not gonna be with Hagrid all night are we?” “Probably not,” Hermione agreed, proceeding through the castle's exit, to Hagrid's house. “Hello there, girls,” Hagrid greeted them as Hermione and Ginny walked into his house. “Hi Hagrid,” they replied in unison. As Hermione sat down, the movement made her notice her bladder was filling now too, but it was barely noticeable for now so she just ignored it and accepted the cup of tea Hagrid offered her, as did Ginny, even ‘though she had had to clamp her thighs together to control herself as her bladder protested against the sudden increase in pressure on it. “What brings you hear tonight,” Hagrid asked. Hermione began to explain about their potions classes and her plan to brew perfect polyjuice potion and how she hoped to get something useful out of characteristics of the animals ingredients of the potion come from. She also explained Ginny was there to help if an animal would like the presence of a specific body part and having that accessible at the brewing could help. “Well then, let's go over the ingredients, shall we,” Hagrid suggested. Hermione got her notebook and quickly handed Hagrid a copy of the ingredients. “Lacewing flies, bicorn and boomslang,” Hagrid mumbled, quickly identifying the animals producing ingredients on the list. As he explained the basic characteristics of first bicorns and then boomslangs, Ginny quickly got bored, which did not help her deal with her rapidly filling, compressed bladder. Having learned from previous mistakes, she tried hard not to start wiggling in her chair, but she could not help squeezing her thighs together every once in a while. Hermione's bladder was not filling up any slower, but she was too focussed on the conversation to notice it for the time being. “That brings us to lacewing flies,” Hagrid finally said to Hermione's dismay. None of the characteristics of the other animals had seemed useful to potion making and she was starting to lose faith in this approach. Hagrid's next statement got her enthusiastic again however and even got Ginny listening again. “I kept discussing these creepy little creatures to finish with as they have some weird characteristics that may be just what you are looking for,” Hagrid said, “but some of which are also a bit gross to most people. I actually hoped you would have found your answer before we came to this point.” “They sleep in big piles, you see, all on top of and against each other as the enjoy being under a bit of pressure. They are literally compressed under each other's weight. And their days they spend looking for food and drinks. Drinks, yes, you heard that right. They tend to end up drinking water in nature, but people breeding them found out that's not what they're looking for. They fly straight by any pool of even the purest water when they have drunken recently enough to keep looking without getting dehydrated too much. Here's the point you see: these animals grow twice as big when you give them to drink what they actually like. According to your theory, that may be what the potion is missing. But what they drink cannot be bought, you can only create it as it is... it is... human pee. Urine. Waste liquid. And it needs to be fresh. Keep it more than ten minutes after... producing it and they don't want it anymore, you see.” At Hagrid's last comment, Ginny groaned inwardly and quickly crossed her legs as she was reminded of her, by now fairly urgent, need to pee. Hermione suddenly realised how full her bladder had become too and slammed her legs against each other and nervously started tapping her foot. “Thanks Hagrid,” Hermione quickly said, “I think that's all you can do. I'll have to see what I can do with this.” She quickly stood up and crossed her legs as she waited for Ginny to follow her example, which she gladly did and which greatly relieved her need to pee. After saying goodbye, they started walking back to the castle. “So what do you have in mind to do with this,” Ginny asked, “it doesn't seem like a organitinerosum can help here.” “I don't know Ginny,” Hermione replied in a strained voice. “All I know right now is that my need to pee was not increased by sitting on my bladder like yours and unlike you, I am still bursting to go after standing up.” Ginny giggled but did not complain. She wanted to pee before sitting down with Hermione and discuss what they had just been told herself too. Besides, she realised it might be a good idea to grant her bladder some rest before their holding contest with Luna the next evening. As the girls entered the castle, Ginny suggested discussing her potion quickly first to end the evening talking on the more interesting topic of brewing perfect polyjuice potion later. Hermione absentmindedly agreed and the girls aimed for the library to sit down together. Just before entering the library, Hermione rushed into the girls' room, followed quickly by Ginny and they both got some badly needed relief. The girls spent the next two hours studying and discussing human anatomy, until they had figured out a way to use bones, skin and muscles from the legs to design wings between the arms and waist. When they finished, Ginny suggested “Time for a quick pee break?” “But I'm so excited to discuss Hagrid's input on my potion,” Hermione replied, whispering “can't you hold it?” “I wanna be able to sit comfortably while we chat,” Ginny argued, “and I don't want to sit through class with a tired bladder under my bum tomorrow, so I need some rest.” With that, she walked off towards the bathroom before Hermione could argue more. Hermione knew Ginny had made a good point however, and quickly followed her despite not really needing to go yet. Granting her bladder some rest would be a good idea. Not that she was worried about the classes of the next day, but she wanted to be able to put up a good fight against Luna during their holding contest that evening. And she was fairly sure that was Ginny's true motive too. When they got back in the library, Hermione quickly casted a notice-me-not charm over them and said: “That's just so we can laugh and tease over any ideas we may come up with without attracting attention and won't have to whisper. I want to brainstorm freely for a while and I don't want us to have to hold back on ideas on topics we may find... interesting.” Hermione quickly got her notes from their talk with Hagrid and continued: “So it's fairly obvious I could try to improve the effect of the lacewing flies in the potion. I remember they are also one of the ingredients that are expected to contribute to the transportation effect of polyjuice potion, so that seems like my best shot, doesn't it?” “It does,” Ginny agreed, “and it's also the most interesting option. They spend their days looking for pee.” “Yeah,” Hermione agreed giggling, “so the obvious possibility here would be to add urine to the potion. Or to replace some of the water by it, actually. The total amount of liquid in the potion cannot change. That could also be a way to add something coming from a magical human being to the potion. I should make sure the urine we use, does not come from a muggle, but that's easy given we are both magical, as is the rest of Hogwarts.” “You should make sure to add the urine last too,” Ginny added. “Hagrid stated the lacewing flies are interested in urine that was produced no more than ten minutes before.” “I guess that leaves us with the question how much urine should be added and thus how much less water I should add to the potion at the start,” Hermione concluded, completely missing her earlier conclusion that she had to look into the way of mixing ingredients for her potion just from being too enthusiastic talking about the topic. “Any ideas on that?” “Not really, but if this is how to fix this potion, I think it should transport you not far enough or too far if you would add too little or too much pee, so I think it doesn't really matter for a first try and you can add more or less another time if there is an effect but it's too small or too big.” “That sounds reasonable,” Hermione agreed. “I guess I'll just start with an amount we can easily make sure I'll have in my bladder near the end of potions class then?” “Okay, so let's try to predict that then,” Ginny agreed enthusiastically. “It's now too late to visit madame Pomfrey so we'll need to do that tomorrow morning before breakfast, as we'll have transfiguration class, lunch and potions class back to back after that. So I think we should have a pumpkin juice right after we get up. Then at breakfast you normally have two and then a fourth one at lunch. That means you'll have drunken a litre at the start of potions class and you will be well hydrated, so there should have flown about 800mL into your bladder by then. That sounds like an amount you can hold just fine, so I think you'll just have to pee right after we get up only, drink all that and start brewing the potion with, like, 750mL of water less.” “But Ginny, breakfast is at eight. If we're gonna talk to madame Pomfrey before that, it means we'll be getting up around half past six. I won't finish brewing until around half past three, that's NINE hours later!” “I don't see the problem,” Ginny replied with a devilish smile. “Okay I'll give it a go,” Hermione agreed, “but don't expect to get to pee more often yourself.” “Deal,” Ginny replied. “Let's call it a day then, shall we?” “I'll wake you at half past six,” Hermione reminded her as she got up. The next morning exactly at 6:30, Hermione was woken up by the alarm spell she had cast before going to sleep. She quickly waved her wand to silence the alarm ringing in her head and walked over to Ginny's bed. She may have had her last pee of the day a bit early the night before, but she had also woken up earlier than normally, so she wasn't surprised that her bladder was full, but not too uncomfortably so and used the opportunity to take her time to wake Ginny. She kissed her, first on her foreahead, than on her lips, in her neck, on her back and then – as she saw Ginny was still fast asleep – on her left buttock. As she had expected, that immediatly woke Ginny up. She squeezed her thighs together and her hand even slipped between them for a moment. “Morning, beauty,” Hermione giggled. She then walked back to her own bed, got dressed quickky and went into the bathroom. After visiting the toilet for what she knew would be the last time for a while, she took a quick shower before meeting Ginny again in the common room, where Ginny was standing with two glasses of pumpkin juice. “Bottoms up,” she said as she handed Hermione one and they each chugged their drink down. Not much later, they made their way into the hospital wing and sat down with madam Pomfrey. Ginny explained her plans to her. After thinking about it for a while, madam pomfrey agreed that Ginny's plan could work and would at least not hurt her. Breakfast went by pretty uneventful and Hermione thought self transfiguration was rather boring, enough so that during the last half hour of class her mind kept wandering to her slowly filling bladder and Ginny's subtle squirming. By the end of class, Ginny quickly stood up and gladly felt her need to pee subside. Hermione on the other hand, stood up carefully and quickly squuezed her thighs together for a moment as standing up made her need to pee only worse. As they walked towards the great hall for lunch, Hermione admitted: “I would normally go pee by now, or after lunch at the latest.” “Yeah, so would I,” Ginny giggled, “and I only had one glass of pumpkin juice with breakfast, so your bladder is probably fuller. On the other hand... you're not sitting on it.” “Only three more hours now, Ginny, you can handle it.” During lunch, both girls kept their legs crossed, squeezing them together whenever they sipped from their drinks, but apart from that they managed to hide their needs and soon it was time for potions. When they entered the dungeons, Ginny was glad to see Snape had set up the room without chairs as usual when they were brewing potions, as he believed brewing needed to be done standing up. That would make the comming hours much more comfortable for her. “I hope you are all excited, ‘cause today is your first class with time to actually work on your potions. Remember that while you all have no classes tomorrow morning, that is no time to play around. I expected reports on the work you do during this class at the start of your next class, tomorrow afternoon,” Snape said when everyone had found a place to work. “All commonly used ingredients for potions in general and those mentioned in your reports as used in previous attempts to create the potions you are trying to make are in the pantry. If you think you need anything that is not there, come talk to me to see if I think you will indeed need it and if we can figure out a way to obtain it, preferably before tomorrows class so you can continue your brewing attempts.” “If you have any questions, do not hesitate to ask me. If you think you have finished an attempt to create your potion, come see me so I can test whether it is safe to use and discuss with me how we can evaluate its effectiveness safely. That said, I won't waste any more of your time. Go ahead and start working.” Hermione was surprised to see that Snape seemed genuinly enthousiastic and quickly started brewing. The recipe that Snape had her make in class earlier did not differ much from the normal recipe for polyjuice potion except for the time to wait between steps and she was convinced that would have no other effect than making the potion work shorter. Therefore, she gladly reused that recipe now to experiment with, so not each attempt would take her a month. This obviously meant she would need only about two hours again, while class was three hours and 45 minutes longer, but she assumed she would have to wait for a while before she would get to talk to Snape when she finished, testing her potion would take some time and, most importantly, the final ingredient for her potion – her pee – would not wait forever to be added. Despite that sense of urgency, Hermione could not stop herself from quickly asking Ginny what she was going to do. “I'll brew the first few of the potions I need today and hopefully have all of them by the end of the week so I can test their combined effects then. We already know moving one body part at a time works, so there is no use in trying a single potion first.” Working with fluids did no good for Hermione's urge and while she brew she crossed and recrossed her legs and tapped her feet more and more often. Ginny was not much better off, but definitely not worse either. Until, suddenly just as she was finishing her potion apart from adding her pee, Hermione saw her bend forward and freeze with a pained face for a few seconds. When she was able to relax again, she whispered: “My bladder just moved back in place and there was definitely not much space for it to move over my hip under my skirt and panties. Are you almost ready to go collect our final ingredients together? I need the opportunity to pee and... change my panties.” Hermione giggled and replied: “Just a second... Done! Let's go talk to Snape.” The girls lined up behind two others at Snape's desk. Ginny was in a much better condition now that her bladder was back where it belonged and basically the only difference between her situation and Hermione's was that she had drunk a glass of pumpkin juice less. Hermione on the other hand, was trying to hide her need now that she was standing at the front of the room, in sight of most of their classmates, but not really succeeding in doing so. She could not stop herself from bobbing up and down in response to her now urgent need to pee. Ten minutes later, Snape finally addressed them: “Ladies, what can I do for you?” Hermione blushed, looking for words for a moment until Ginny jumped in, to her relieve: “We need to collect some ingredients for our potions that are not in the pantry, professor.” “And what is it you need, miss Weasel,” Snape asked. Now it was Ginny's time to blush as she replied: “Hairs, professor. Body hairs.” “And you need someone to help you collect these,” Snape asked. “Yes, indeed, professor,” Ginny answered. “Well then, and what do you need, miss Granger,” Snape asked, smiling. “Urine, professor, Hermione replied quietly, blushing even brighter. “From what animal,” Snape asked in reply. “And how do you expect to get that?” “H-human urine, professor. F-fresh, human u-urine.” Hermione was throughoutly emberassed now, which clearly enjoyed Snape. “And where do you expect to get that,” Snape asked, purposely making Hermione spell out what she was about to do.” “From my bladder, professor,” Hermione replied, giving up her attempts to be subtle about her plans. “Okay then. Don't forget to take a large flask from the pantry. It seems like you have quiet a lot of urine there, waiting to come out.” Glad to finally get Snape's permission, Hermione stiffly walked into the pantry and grabbed a one litre flask and some tweezers. As soon as she got back, Ginny left the room with her, heading for the bathroom. When the girls got into a stall in the nearest bathroom, Hermione quickly moved to pull up her skirt, but Ginny grabbed her arm to stop her. “Me first,” she whispered before quickly taking the toilet. “Your pee needs to be fresh,” she added, sticking her tongue out to her friend. As Ginny let go, Hermione gasped and quickly grabbed her crotch. “Ooh... hurry up, Ginny. I don't want to lose any.” Ginny laughed, but got up as soon as she finished peeing anyway. Hermione hiked up her skirt and took her thong all the way off. Then she hurriedly spread her lips and placed the flask right against her peehole, before letting go of a torrent of pee. As Hermione peed, Ginny took her still damp panties off. “At least I managed to keep mine dry,” Hermione giggled. After Hermione obtained hairs from different parts of Ginny's legs, Ginny asked: “Do I have time to run by our dorm for some fresh panties?” “I don't think so, Gin. I don't want Snape to start asking what took us so long. All these questions he just asked were emberassing enough already. Besides, I need to add this pee to my potion. You'll just have to make sure not to pee yourself again.” Ginny knew better than to argue with Hermione and liked the thought of going back to class commando, so she just opened their stall and walked back to the dungeon, followed closely by Hermione. Ginny quickly added her hairs to her potions and got in line to have Snape check her potions. Meanwhile, Hermione measured 750mL of het pee. She was relieved to find out she had peed more than enough as expected, although slightly less than the 800mL Ginny and her had predicted she would pee. After adding the pee and another of Ginny's hairs to her potion and flushing the rest of her pee through the drain, she too got in line to talk to Snape, right behind Ginny. Snape quickly allowed Ginny to drink her potions and while she was still gulping the last one down, Hermione saw her legs move up and outward until her hips connected to her wrists, and her ankles and her feet to her pelvis. It look ridicoulous, but that had worked. The skin from her legs turned out to be insufficient to fill up the space between her arms and chest, however, and her arms were left close to her chest without much space to move. Realizing she would not be able to do much for the next hour, Ginny put her hands on the ground, lifted herself up and walked back to her place on her hands. She would need to free up more material for her wings in a next attempt. And the next hour she would just have to fill with talking, as she could not even reach a table to write anything down right now. In the mean time, Snape concluded that Hermione's potion, too, was safe to drink. He instructed her to stand halfway between Ginny and the nearest wall and drink it. Hermione did as she was told, nervous about what would happen and then gulped down the potion. She was not surprised to notice it tasted not too bad. Potions tended to taste different than you would expect based on the ingredients that went in. She was not surprised either, to feel her thighs shrink a bit to resemble Ginny's. What happened, next, did surprise her, however. She felt like she was apparating for a moment and then suddenly found herself back in the same room, about a meter back, towards the wall, away from Ginny. Unsure what to think, she looked at Snape. After thinking for a moment, he spoke: “Congratiolations, miss granger. You moved only about a meter while miss Weasly was about three meters away, so the effect is not strong enough and you went in the wrong direction so an ingredient clearly is not happy with what you did yet, but you got yourself moving. You seem to be on the right track. Think of how you can make this effect stronger for next class and see what you can do to turn it around." Hermione walked over to Ginny and said: “Well, that didn't go bad for a first attempt if even Snape is happy with us. I guess we'll have to see what more we can use from your body to make your wings and have to get that idea approved by madam Pomfrey besides writing a report for you tomorrow?” “Yeah, and for you we probably have to think about what else we can do to make lacewing flies happy to turn the effect around. As for making it stronger I'd guess you just need to add more pee,” Ginny replied. “I thought so too,” Hermione answered. “I would like to try replacing all the water by pee, but I don't think I want to try having a litre of pee in my bladder halfway through potions class. If I can even hold that much, I would be grabbing my crotch. Would you mind helping me by collecting your pee too?” “Aw, is your bladder too small for that,” Ginny teased. “Off course I'll help you. Half a litre each should be easy even after tonight.” Questions for chapter 17: - The holding contest with Luna is next. What should the rules for this contest be? - What should Hermione change to her recipe as a next attempt to creat perfect polyjuice potion, apart from replacing all the water (thus more) with pee?
  5. Looking forward to it. This intermission certainly was fun, but now I really want to know how the rematch will go.
  6. I too would like to see this story continued. As a suggestion (just an idea I had since you asked for them): maybe this show could allow the contestants to change their clothes a number of times at a price (more water?), just to offer some splution for too tight waistebands. Also, maybe the (studio) audience could be involved in the show. E.g. the same amount of water distributed over the contestants could be distributed over the (,obviously much larger) audience. Or maybe the contestants could get to decide to give the water of a (small number of) round(s) to the audience instead of having to take it themselves. That would give them a way of dealing with a succesfull round (while keeping them at risk of other rounds turning out to even bigger amounts of water).
  7. Lets have Elizabeth inspect her location. If she spots another pixie, attack it immediatly now that she has her deck prepared for fighting one.
  8. 'Too confusing', not "to confusing" Don't take me wrong, I'm just trying to help and I just had to point it out here, but I'll enjoy this story whether you get better at this or not.
  9. Lovely story that I'll be glad to follow. Just some small constructive criticism: you may want to pay a little more attention at the differences between similar words. I was confused for a moment a couple of times when you wrote "to" where you meant "too" and "were" where you meant "we're".
  10. For the memo, I agree with wetfan3 on going with option D and would like to suggest the following text: I regret to inform you that the restrooms are out of service today. Please use the restrooms before or after any appointments you have outside our office today and make refraining from using the bathrooms in the office as comfortable for yourselves as possible. I can ensure you we are working to have this problem resolved as soon as possible and appologize for the inconvenience. For the moment, no drinking water is available, but I will make sure that water bottles are distributed throughout the building as soon as possible. For Amanda and Alyssa I suggest asking question C first. See if we can go get water bottles and distribute them first. We may even get lucky and find a bathroom in the store. If the answer doesn't allow this or they don't find a working bathroom while getting the water, go with option B. Hopefully the water company didn't find it necessary to shut down water for the whole block (including Amanda's house) to restore the water supply to the new office Also, I would like them not to buy diapers as wetfan3 suggested. That would make things too easy in my opinion.
  11. I agree that she should do these things, but I think peeing should be the last thing she does before leaving, just to make sure she leaves the house with an empty bladder and to make her morning just a little more interesting.
  12. How are the girls' bladders so empty when they have just woken up and only fought two monsters since?
  13. Certainly an interesting start. I'd gladly read more.
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