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Rexone_312

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    Rexone_312 reacted to FullBladder85 for a status update, Long time no news on The City Without a Ladies Room . Tonight I'm posting 2 big piece   
    Long time no news on The City Without a Ladies Room. Tonight I'm posting 2 big pieces of news about it, one not so great piece of news, and one much better piece of news. But first I want to thank all the fans who still occasionally bump the thread asking for the next part. I especially want to thank @watchingherhold & @Peter-P for their short story ideas they posted in the thread. I really enjoyed reading them both, looking back at them and re-reading them really help motivate me to continue working on this story.
    So the not so great news first. Remember how I said I had to split the last Chapter in half when I posted it? The second half of it was supposed to still take place in the diner.
    I've repeatedly tried to fit scenes in City Without a Ladies Room where other desperate women in the city illegally pee in front of Jeff & Erin. The scenes always ended up on the cutting room floor because I was never satisfied with them, and I didn't think others would like them either the way they were turning out. I feel like I just don't know how to write a scene like that.
    Anyway, I was trying to write the next chapter entirely around this concept, with other women illegally peeing at the diner (either Jeff finding them using the urinals in the men's room, or them pissing their pants at their table). But... after several months of working on the story off and on (through a lot of real life distractions), I've sadly come to the conclusion that the next chapter is simply not even close to my high quality standards. The thing that really convinced me that it wasn't very good was how I realized none of the paragraphs would make for an exciting teaser of the chapter if I posted it here (like I've done with previous chapters).
     
    So am I abandoning The City Without a Ladies Room? NO.
    Am I abandoning Jeff & Erin's story? NO.
    I'm scrapping the original Chapter 4 and continuing Jeff & Erin's story from when they leave the diner. I'm on a bit of a roll with the new chapter, I've already written nearly two pages in just the last two days, which I think is a record in productivity for me.
     
    As for the second piece of news, the much better news, there's another 1 chapter standalone story I've been working on along side the next Jeff & Erin chapter during this period, with completely different characters in the same city. Writing it has been going much better then the scrapped chapter. I'm not certain which order I'll be posting this or Jeff & Erin's chapter in, it depends upon how far my current momentum carries me, but I'm far enough along in this standalone story to feel comfortable with leaving you all with a teaser for it. Below are the first two paragraphs of the story which let you know where the story will be heading:
     
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