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  1. Ok, I've looked at it a bit, I've thought about it, and I've considered what I feel like doing. The thing is, I want to be a better writer, as writing is the only thing I can reasonably do in life that can be beneficial as well as entertaining. Plus, it's one of the few things where I won't "kill" anybody on my not-so-happy days. I've also decided that a more routine lifestyle and learning to write under pressured times, plus making a priority list, are all positive things I need to do. Why am I mentioning this? Because that's where this story comes in. I know I'm a bit distract-able and somet
  2. I'm still iffy, and the whole lack of focus and attention thing really doesn't help. I've been away for a while. Between my many self-problems, they want to add another to the list (T.T) so I'm still waiting on this and that. Seems like I'm always waiting, but I guess that's the fun part... Oh, also, my laptop keyboard decided it hates working, and is now busted. No clue what happened, since it was working fine till I STOPPED using the computer for two days... Now I have a wireless so I can type at least... Got quite used to it. Sorta forgot about this story. I'm not sure what I'm going to do
  3. I remember FMA. I used to watch that. Reading this made me want to go watch it again, but it won't be half as interesting as this story. :) I'm surprised you haven't had any comments yet. It was really interesting, and Ed is perfect for Omorashi. Actually, I wouldn't mind reading more desperation and wetting by him, but I couldn't find anything good. Alas, I shall ever so long. Anyways, good job and Blessings.
  4. Ok, it's been forever. I was struggling weather it was worth it to continue, but alas my happily creepy fantasies in my head are still there, and it turns out they need an outlet. Also, it's past 4 am. There's always good news. It's raining. What better time to write Omo? This one is pretty standard, with (in my opinion) a sort of a look into Nile's head. He has issues. *Point's to the story* There's a part in there where it talks about well... I'll quote: "Who’s dirty, twisted mind thought up such a horrible place? When did this ever seem like a good idea?" Have you ever had those moment wher
  5. OK, finally another chapter. If I should continue let me know, of if this is getting old, let me know that to. It's hard to write something by yourself, especially for me who's so out of practice with writing. I don't want to keep this up if no one's interested. But if you are, then I'll try and keep on writing, because I do like this story myself. :] Anyways, the beginnings of more desperation! It'll be better once we get through this long weekend... Enjoy! =======================================================================================================================================
  6. Great chapter as usual, and I loved the way Draco felt remorse, and the way Remus was about it all. Good job, and keep them coming. Can't wait for the next one.
  7. No worries there. I wouldn't describe myself as "open minded" but not would I "close minded"As usual, I "have" to be the oddball. Haha.... What I was trying to say in that last part was... how to say it... I've learned to hate the sin, but love the sinner. It's impossible for me to hate any persons, or that means I do not love my God. He is a God of love. I would never hurt anyone. Even though I believe some stuff is wrong, yes such as gay and bi, and I don't agree with it in any sense, I would never see them as less of a person. I wrote a paper on Respect for class, and try to follow it the b
  8. Out of duty and respect to all Christians, I have to point out that there's a major league difference between REAL Christians, and FAKE/PHARISEE Christians, as well as what I personally call, FLAG Christians. I hate to use the terms close minded and open minded, because they leave out the truth of the matter, and only group things into two pathetic little piles, both bad, neither good. (I'm autistic, and it's hard to clarify what I mean, so before jumping me anyone, ask for clarity) Real Christians follow the Bible, the holy bible, and that's IT. They do as Jesus would do, Love every people, h
  9. I just caught up reading here recently, and am finally posting about the last couple of chapters. I loved them, as usual. :) Oh, and I actually liked what Snape did to Malfoy... Not in the bad way... bad wording.... I mean... I don't think that he was out of character much for your Snape. That's my opinion though. lol Anyways, Great chapters and keep up the good work, please! So many of us would be pained without our dose of "summer with snape" series. XD Thanks for putting in the time to write it, especially during summer. :)
  10. I guess I took another break. I'd like to say that some stuff popped up or I was busy in life, but honestly it was depression mixed with laziness. Hopefully I've got that squared away. :) Here's the long awaited update to the story. Hope you guys didn't forget it! If so... T.T I guess you'll just have to read it again. :) Haha... Anyways, I enjoyed this chapter, and have a really fun chapter planned for chapter nine. Hope you guys forgive me, lol, and definitely enjoy this chapter! =============================================================================================================
  11. Glad you guys are liking this so far! And to "Mr.MakeherWait", it will have female in it, as soon as this "weekend" is done, and that's in about... two or three chapters, since I don't know much about camping myself. Plus it is tagged male as well, first, and I don't know how to tag it with a blue tag... I don't think it's possible now that I already made the topic... Sorry. There's not much I can do, less there's something I don't know about... To the rest that read my story, and enjoy it, I'm glad you guys are liking it, and want to inform you I'm over my slump in writing. I finally found
  12. UPDATE I have to brainstorm ideas for chapter seven, and I decided I won't post a chapter on Sunday, being a holy day of rest for me. That, and a bit of stressing out over a couple things in my personal life... I need the relaxation. I will probably be back to writing on Monday, and post the next chapter then. For now... Enjoy the revised chapter 6! I had part of seven written, but i've decided I hate it. I don't like it. It has to go. :/ So I'll have to seriously think. It may be Tuesday before I can get the chance to just sit and write again, and have some good ideas. Anyways.... Enjoy!
  13. "quite a following of lurkers" :) I love the way that's worded. Haha... My little brother is... 11 I think. Haha... He comes over because I have internet, and he doesn't, plus there's a park at the complex, then his friends also live around here.... He claimed he came to visit me yesterday, and headed for the park! That's just how it is, I guess. :) Since my friends that are coming over tonight are much more nosy than my brother, one of which likes to peek over my shoulder, I won't have time to post or even check back for the rest of the day. They don't mean harm by it, but it get's annoyi
  14. I don't mind in the least. It's actually helpful for me to see if i'm doing my characters right, because I think the ultimate goal for any writer is to make the readers feel for, or connect with, their characters, to bring the readers to the character's side. Nile's bit of messed up personality is going to come out in this chapter. This will be the ultimate test weather you guys like this character or not, as, like I said, he does have a cruel side... And the desperation is in this chapter as well, so I'm hoping that it makes sense. It's hard to write male desperation, since I'm female, but fe
  15. Nile is more... dense in those areas. He is not that introspective, and is more the type to assume, or to be a little selfish conversation wise. Not that he's a bad person, he just has a bit of a cruel side at times, as you guys may soon see. Mostly, he gets lost in thought, and it happens to spew out his mouth as he's thinking. He's really good with people, though, so usually he can control himself to a degree, but he's the type to often think out loud if he doesn't watch it. Rain's personality is based around his brothers, since he's had to deal with him half his life. Their both good heart
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