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This is outstanding!

Hi Chico, glad you enjoyed my story! It is already on here in the fiction section, and has been for a while. Check out my other stories too!. I just posted it on XHamster recently as I am quite active on there and have come accross a few people with a pee interest.

Thanks for bringing this back to the top, its excellent!

For me, it has to be as the result of desperation. I love any aspect of desperation, but I do particularly like the idea of a girl being denied permission by someone in authority. I love the idea of some girls being allowed to go, whilst others or forced to hold, for whatever reason. Queues are always welcome too.

Great story with great desperation, can't wait to see more from you!

Absolutely outstanding!

I personally don't think that first time posters on a website, sharing experiences regarding a fetish such as omorashi, have any intention of ever being an artist. For a lot of people it would take a lot of courage to even join such a site, let alone post an experience, or a fiction. The poster didn't ask for opinions, or feedback, they merely stated that if we approve, they will post more stories and experiences. I am firmly of the opinion that a first time poster should be encouraged and made to feel welcome, to encourage future posts. I'm sure they are not pursuing a career in literature, rather just exploring an often demonised fetish with like minded people. My initial post may well have been boring, but it was intended to be encouraging. I know when I posted my first fiction on here, I appreciated every single person that told me they liked it. It really encouraged me to write and share more. That's all I was trying to achieve.

Way to encourage a new member to post again! It's really daunting joining a site like this, and to actually bit the bullet and post, rather than just being a lurker, takes bottle. It is also clear that English is not their first language. Is it perfect, no, but for a first post, I, for one, am keen to see more. Ripping it apart can do nothing but put them off posting again. Jeez, if you've got nothing nice to say, don't say anything at all. There is plenty on this forum that does nothing for me, but I don't comment all of it telling people that!

I'd love to hear more from you. Thanks for sharing!

Oh wow! This is great! What a first post. I would love to hear more from you, your writing is brilliant!

Thankyou so much, I'm on it

I know I've commented on this before, but I have revisited it several times over the years, it really is one of the best stories on here. Deserves bringing back to the top, easily in my top 10 of all time

Despcatcher, would you consider uploading your vids to another streaming site such as XHamster or XVideos. You've got some sensational material on VK, but I've been banned and can't get a new account as they link to your mobile number. I can see your vids, but can't watch anything over 20 mins

Frankly, I don't care if its true or not, (although I love that is!), the event sounds like something I would very much enjoy reading about, and I, for one, can't wait for you to share it

Thankyou so much. I definitely think we're on the same wavelength! Would love to read anything else you have, or chat by PM if you're interested