pguy69

I'm a guy, so it's fine if you choose to ignore this message, but I know EXACTLY what you are going through, and I would LOVE to chat with you. Completely anonymously. Please feel free to message me at any time.

This is outstanding. Best new thing I've read on here in ages. Can't wait to see where the story goes!

Great work. Absolutely love the concept. Absolute desperation, can't cross her legs, can't hurry anywhere, and can't even pop a squat as a last resort!

I am very aware of Amanda's Agony. It's great, I would LOVE to hear more from you if you get chance!

Alison had been out on a hen do with her friends,and its fair to say it had been a heavy night. They'd met at 6, and here we were at 3AM. The girls were all absolutely wasted, but they were giddy and they were happy. The club was closing up, so all the girls left and went to a takeaway for food. The queue was crazy, and the girls were all laughing and joking, as they waited for their greasy, late night food. They'd left the club, probably some 20 minutes ago now, and, as the girls started to feel tiredness cutting through the hilarity, Amy, the bride to be, announced that she needed to pee. So

Thanks Jimmy, that means a lot. I'm glad that people are enjoying my work! have a new story I will post tonight! Always a bit dubious about posting things that aren't mine, even if I do ramp up the desperation in them! It feels a bit like cheating

I'm sure I will! I love your stories!

H compupro, thanks for the great feedback. I'm glad you enjoy my story! I have to say, I really love desperation, and much prefer "just made it" endings with overwhelming relief. I felt I had pushed the desperation to a stage in this where a wetting was inevitable though. Please feel free to copy and paste it and write an alternate ending to it. I do that to my fave stories, although I rarely post them, but I would love to see what you come up with!

This is superb, your best in this series, I love it! I have often fantasised about how desperate some of the girls must be, filled with alcohol in those LOOOONG queues that form after events!

Absolutely yes!! Particularly if a harsh sergeant denies the opportunity

She's great. She has some superb content!

I don't know why this story hasn't had more attention. It is superb, and one I have revisited many times!

Thankyou, I am glad you enjoyed it. I have been writing part 2 for a long time. It is a struggle between getting the desperation right and keeping it realistic. It is a story I will return to though! I love that mine is one of the stories that you revisit! I have a few of those myself on this site. See my reply above. It is a story I do plan to return to. Sorry it is taking to long.

This is excellent! I really hope you share more of your work!

Male desperation is not usually my thing, but all of your stories have me hooked, you are a fantastic writer, and build the desperation perfectly!