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female Passing the Rest Stop



"Pleaaaaaaaase!" Harlyn begged her sister from the backseat of their beat-up sedan.

"No!"  Lexie shot back.

"Just take the exit!  Please, please, please, please!"  She brought her boots up onto the seat as she pulled her knees to her chest. 

"You should have peed before we left!"

"No, please, you don't understand --- I'm literally about to pee myself!  I'll do anything!"  Harlyn whined in response with tears rolling down her cheeks.  Her hands squeezed at her womanhood as every bump and shudder jostled the rusted-out suspension.

The problem was simple: Lexie was pissed --- downright, bone-chewing livid.  It had been a three hour drive to get to the concert and they had been running late.  Why?  Because Harlyn had gotten caught up in some stupid game that  made them run late.  Lexie had been waiting all year for the band to finally appear at least within their state --- and considering said band was foreign, she was lucky that they had chosen to tour the states at all.  The tickets weren't cheap either...

Harlyn attempted to explain herself on their way there: she thought she was forty-five minutes early, while --- in fact --- she was fifteen minutes late.  Stupid math.  That explanation had at least kept her sister quiet and stewing for the drive.  They'd make it --- everything would be fine.

And they did make it before the band started.  This was strange, because they were at least a half-hour late.  They had to get gas, and care-free Harlyn had disappeared to fetch them some sodas adding another fifteen to the trip.

See, maybe Lexie was mad about being late...  But she was likely  actually upset about how the show had been cancelled due to the incoming storm.  (Oh how open-ceiling venues and fallible weather-reporting never mix...)  What an absolutely "shit-tastic" day it had been...  And while an explosive Lexie went to get a refund for the tickets, Harlyn tried to cheer her up with some mega-sized slushies.  She didn't want hers... go figure

So, now that it was four hours, a soda, and two mega-sized slushies later, Harlyn was in a predicament.  Lexie must have peed after getting her refund...  Harlyn, on the other hand, hadn't peed since before the game that made them late in the first place; she didn't want to make them even later, after all!

And oh sweet tortoise on a unicycle, Harlyn needed to pee.  This was the kind of need-to-pee that didn't fuck around.  Hot beads of sweat rolled down her forehead and dripped from her bangs onto her glasses.  Her body quivered as she strained against the violent call of nature.  She could count every pebble their shitty car hit  --- even the tiniest of debris caused her seconds of burning anguish.

She held on like she was dangling from a skyscraper.

"Please..." Harlyn squeaked from behind clenched teeth.

Lexie peered at her for a moment from the side of her eye.  Past Harlyn's window, the last rest stop for forty miles slid past and disappeared into the garbled darkness of the storm.


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Two mega sized slushies and a soda on top of that? No wonder Harlyn is in so much pain and her friend is really torturing her filling bladder here. There's going to be such a mass build up of urine in there that won't get relieved for a while. I'm curious, what's the volume of those two mega slushies and the soda that she drank to put her in this situation?

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On 7/15/2020 at 12:52 PM, cewengompol said:

I love this car perspective that you choose, was it an image reference from somewhere or did you draw this from imagination?

Thanks, lol!  I wanted to practice a pose where a girl was "balled-up" she had to pee so badly, and a car desperation scenario seemed to make the most sense; since a car interior is rather small, I decided on the 3-point perspective early on to fill out the scene.  As the edges of the image pass those points, you start to get that curving "fish-eye" effect (where it enters 5-point, I believe).  I didn't have a reference to work from for it, so it likely has some minor errors --- especially toward those edges.

Here are my construction lines, if they're helpful at all!  😅 
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37 minutes ago, Jailor Eckman said:

Thanks, lol!  I wanted to practice a pose where a girl was "balled-up" she had to pee so badly, and a car desperation scenario seemed to make the most sense; since a car interior is rather small, I decided on the 3-point perspective early on to fill out the scene.  As the edges of the image pass those points, you start to get that curving "fish-eye" effect (where it enters 5-point, I believe).  I didn't have a reference to work from for it, so it likely has some minor errors --- especially toward those edges.

Here are my construction lines, if they're helpful at all!  😅 
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I sometimes wonder if hoping into a 3D program to make the bases of the background makes my drawings take too long, but if this much reference is needed to make a 3D enviroment look good... yeah, I don't think it slows me down as much as I thought 😅

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15 minutes ago, Bombality said:

I sometimes wonder if hoping into a 3D program to make the bases of the background makes my drawings take too long, but if this much reference is needed to make a 3D enviroment look good... yeah, I don't think it slows me down as much as I thought 😅

I think it depends on what you can accomplish with what you know.  I've also used 3D in the past to set up challenging perspectives, though this one was more of practice so that I don't need to hop into 3D.  I haven't used it in a while, though I'm reserving the option for future projects where the scene is consistent, but requires shots from multiple angles.

To be honest, I think that 3D is an excellent tool to help you make art faster in situations like that, even if it does come at the cost of personally understanding perspective.  I suppose it depends on your goals: if you are interested in improving your art, 3D might be a bad habit because it gives you the solution to these "problems" automatically.  But if you are only interested in creating said art, then it's great to not have to use up so much brain-power and time getting it to look right.  I believe some DC comic artists use 3D as a base for some of their drawings because they need to get so much done within tight deadlines --- and I think that is a perfect example of a potential use-case for it!  And, of course, you have the entire "field" of 3D art, where it is the end result.

As for speed, I think I'm a little faster doing this stuff by hand, since it allows me to throw a thumbnail together even with broken perspective just so I can see if the composition works out.  However, if I were doing an entire comic featuring the interior of the same car, I think I'd rather go 3D...  I know I could do it by hand, but the consistency and speed of 3D "roughs" would just be so helpful!  Aside from game-development, I'm not as interested in 3D-only art, so for this kind of thing, I look at it as a kind of "tool" --- like a ruler, etc.

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On 7/26/2020 at 3:48 AM, cewengompol said:

Wow thanks so much for the three vanishing point perspectives. It's kinda nuts how much i improve my workflow and technical art knowledge from fetish arts hahaha

You know, I've been thinking about how this whole "hobby" has helped me improve as an artist, and my running theory is that it's due to never being "disinterested" in the subject matter!  🤣

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On 7/27/2020 at 10:36 PM, Jailor Eckman said:

You know, I've been thinking about how this whole "hobby" has helped me improve as an artist, and my running theory is that it's due to never being "disinterested" in the subject matter!  🤣

I can relate a little to that. I’ve always struggled with reading and writing. But since I’ve been writing omo fan-fics every once in awhile, I feel like I’ve actually been improving over mediocre story writing lol!

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