Jarvis Langley 477 Posted September 27, 2019 15 minutes ago, OmoRaven556 said: Absolutely gorgeous! 😍 Thank you! People seem to like this one most out of all the omo stuff I've drawn, ahah. Quote Link to comment
BlueRaven 212 Posted September 28, 2019 (edited) On 9/26/2019 at 11:59 PM, Jarvis Langley said: Thank you! People seem to like this one most out of all the omo stuff I've drawn, ahah. I'm not sure about everyone else, but what sells it for me is the look of absolute relief on his face after experiencing a true, genuine loss of control. This image is a perfect follow up to the last one where he was full to the point of tensing up and literally holding his breath while precariously trying to stop the urine filling his poor bulging bladder from escaping, while also trying his best to avoid instinctually jamming his hands into his crotch by clenching his hands at his sides. However, The long sigh of relief is what takes it further and closes in the gap between the two images. It's the fact that he's already soaking his shorts before he takes that big sigh (given we can see and even imagine hearing the exhalation effect while he's peeing in force) that implies that he didn't realize it was coming out until it was too late, that his immediate, instinctual reaction to tense up and grab his crotch wasn't enough to stop the flow, and that he had no choice other than to give up. Also, the details in his expressions are priceless. In the last one, it's the sweat dripping from his hair and the gritting of his teeth that shows us that he's at his absolute limit, and in this one the subtle tears in his eyes and the blushing on his face that exemplify how long he was holding it, how hard it was to do so, and how embarrassing wetting himself is. However, even he can't help but give in to that powerful feeling of immense, near-orgasmic relief, despite how embarrassed he feels. His accident is a genuine loss of control, which is something I have yet to experience and can really only fantasize over. Anyway, I should be the one thanking you, as I wasn't fully confident about posting on a request thread given how new I am to fully embracing this side of me, particularly the furry part. I wasn't sure about it all, but when you posted this it made my day, and your art in general continues to do so. It's honestly what led me to make an actual username and find a profile pic. What can I say, I'm a fan! 😄 Edited September 28, 2019 by OmoRaven556 (see edit history) Sonador 1 Quote Link to comment
Jarvis Langley 477 Posted September 28, 2019 14 hours ago, OmoRaven556 said: [ lots of words ] Oh wow, I wasn't expecting such a detailed response. XD Thank you for that, though, since hearing a detailed opinion from somebody tells me what I've done right so I can pay more attention to that in the future and all. I haven't experienced the total loss of control myself either, so I'm always unsure of how well or terribly I'm depicting it. Happy you really think I succeeded with this, though! And flattered that I have a fan, hehe! 😄 Sonador and BlueRaven 2 Quote Link to comment
BlueRaven 212 Posted September 29, 2019 (edited) 7 hours ago, Jarvis Langley said: 21 hours ago, OmoRaven556 said: [ lots of words ] Oh wow, I wasn't expecting such a detailed response. XD Thank you for that, though, since hearing a detailed opinion from somebody tells me what I've done right so I can pay more attention to that in the future and all. Yeah, I guess I did write a lot lol... Anyway, there was a thread in the omo general section that I saw earlier this month that gives some signs of a genuine accident. It gives some nice details, and might be helpful to look into. Here's a link to it: https://www.omorashi.org/forums/topic/52887-signs-of-genuine-loss-of-control/ (I kinda had the delayed reaction aspect in mind when I went into ultra writing analysis mode) 😝 Edited September 29, 2019 by OmoRaven556 (see edit history) Quote Link to comment
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