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Hey guys!  I was super busy this week, so I haven't really been on much.  The good news is that I got this page done and the pencils for the next one! 

From the album:

Off-Limits!

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"In the land of metaphor" lol

This was awesome. Reminded me of the Dexter's Laboratory episode where he fries his brain and the engineers have to shut it off.

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This is my favorite omorashi comic right now. I can’t wait for the next installment! 🙂

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Poor Girl, I hope she can do it. I got a suggestion though. First, she should talk to the teacher about the other girl bullying her (external) and then go to the bathroom. Anyway, hope to see more.

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1 hour ago, Ahmad Valentin said:

Poor Girl, I hope she can do it. I got a suggestion though. First, she should talk to the teacher about the other girl bullying her (external) and then go to the bathroom. Anyway, hope to see more.

Even if she gets the others in trouble, they'll spill that she cheated, and her scholarship will be gone regardless.

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@AkenoSama 😁

@OmoDommy Thanks!  I wanted to have a more detailed way of describing the inner-turmoil than just finding a million ways to say "she has to pee."  (Not that I'm opposed to doing that! 🤣)

@Focused Codis Yeah, having to pee really, really bad is one of those experiences I think everyone can relate with.  Even with the fetish, there are times when you don't want to be full-to-bursting, and yet still have to hold it, and they just suck in the moment.  But at the same time... the arched back, wiggling butt, and shifting legs are just too adorable to want to stop!  😋

@D_guy10 I loved that damn show when I was a kid!  Yeah, I was thinking about the Spongebob episode where Squidward tells him to forget everything but how to be a good waiter, leading the "office" in his mind to throw out the file containing his name.  I think the concept of a little being, or beings controlling the outer person is similar to the homunculus idea.

@lester Now there's even an entire team of metaphorical Dakotalets who would love for that to be the case!  ...But is it?

@Papergami I considered that, but decided against it for the sake of showing her in more "relaxed" poses.  Kind of as a contrast to her twisting and leg-crossing.  But, that might not be entirely out of the question if it were to serve as a way to show why the Dakotalets care about getting that bladder emptied!

@atlas veemo I'm working on the next page now, lol!  I intend to have it out before the next request image.  As for how many more pages I have...  I don't know.  But if I did, I probably wouldn't say, because it'd probably spoil the ending!

@TJC Thanks!

@Lost_Soul I don't know if she could physically stop herself at one drop, lol...  But, if she does leak a drop, let's hope it comes with enough time to let it dry before the next panty check!

@Quackduck Thank you!  I'm glad you're enjoying it!

@Ahmad Valentin & @wishfulomo0572 Yeah, wishfulomo is right.  If she tells any faculty what's going on, the other girls will reveal that she cheated.  If she fails, she probably won't be able to attend any college due to academic dishonesty, so her entire future relies on her ability to hold it in!

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11 hours ago, Jailor Eckman said:

I don't know if she could physically stop herself at one drop, lol... 

I didn't think so either. The terms were "if one drop escapes, we'll reveal you cheated", so if she does leak a bit, even with ample time for it to dry, I can see her subconscious going "Whelp, it's over anyway, might as well finish up."

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This is INCREDIBLY HOT!!! 

I adore this concept! It's an incredible way to really get across how dire and desperate her situation is! God this comic is always amazing! On the one hand I look forward to the day it's complete so I can read it cover to cover, but on the other I want it to go on as long as possible! 

Keep up the amazing work and please play with this metaphor idea more! It's so creative and arousing! ❤️ 

Oh and I agree with Paper Gami, it would be great if all the workers were as desperate as she is! 

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@wishfulomo0572  And now I have a visual metaphor for the "subconscious" and why it might do... certain things!  😁

@bibibibi & @Lapiiss Thanks guys!  I wanted to put a bit of a fresh perspective into this rather run-of-the-mill comic!  And, as for the making the Dakotalets share the desperation of the body that they metaphorically operate... I think popular demand has necessitated it!  (I'll see what I can do in later sections!)

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