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From the album:

Off-Limits!

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20 hours ago, AkenoSama said:

Man, that is What I'm talking about lol masterpiece !!

Hah, I don't know about that! 

 

20 hours ago, Bombality said:

This is a big project isn't it?

I mean it's the third page and we are only like 1.5 hours into the 24 

Yep!  I'm working on it intermittently between my other drawings.

 

16 hours ago, OmarashiLover1 said:

Weve gotta get at least 2 page updates man Haha, this is great.

Thanks!  I'm trying to make these more quickly without sacrificing too much quality... so maybe some day!

 

@Batman007, @lordbardak, @Plug Cryostat: Thanks guys!  This story still has a long way to go, so I hope you guys like drawn-out desperation! 

 

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5 hours ago, Jailor Eckman said:

This story still has a long way to go, so I hope you guys like drawn-out desperation! 

 

That's what most of the omo novels/manga tends to lack. We get 3or 4 pages of desperation before the big splash. The only one I can think of that balances this correctly is ureshon.

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12 hours ago, Jailor Eckman said:

Thanks guys!  This story still has a long way to go, so I hope you guys like drawn-out desperation! 

Ohoho~ do we?! This poor girl was already desperate at the very beginning, now she has a whole team of girls following and watching her every move so that she doesn't attempt having a sneaky pee or even leaking in her panties! (Or I think the conditions cover that as well) Can't wait to see how you (and them) are gonna keep playing with her urgent need to pee!

7 hours ago, OmarashiLover1 said:

That's what most of the omo novels/manga tends to lack. We get 3or 4 pages of desperation before the big splash. The only one I can think of that balances this correctly is ureshon.

You are absolutely right. Another one that did an amazing job at focusing the entirety of the story on the desperation and holding is "Tokonatsu! Hamuko-chan"!

@Jailor Eckman: Forgot to mention, I love that you're underlining some specific words, specifically that psssst! I love teasing like that and it's almost never used!

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On 1/19/2019 at 10:26 PM, Pondera said:

So the LONG wait begins. And, is that already the bulge of a bladder that I see, or just the lines of her tummy?

Oh yeah, it's her bladder alright!

 

On 1/19/2019 at 10:38 PM, OmarashiLover1 said:

That's what most of the omo novels/manga tends to lack. We get 3or 4 pages of desperation before the big splash. The only one I can think of that balances this correctly is ureshon.

Believe it or not, I haven't yet checked out Ureshon.  I'll have to take a look, because it sounds right up my ally.  The desperation has always been my main thing, so I've noticed that too.  It's kind of weird, since you'd think the desperation would be the most time-consuming and humorous part of the entire situation! 

On 1/20/2019 at 5:40 AM, lordbardak said:

Ohoho~ do we?! This poor girl was already desperate at the very beginning, now she has a whole team of girls following and watching her every move so that she doesn't attempt having a sneaky pee or even leaking in her panties! (Or I think the conditions cover that as well) Can't wait to see how you (and them) are gonna keep playing with her urgent need to pee!

You are absolutely right. Another one that did an amazing job at focusing the entirety of the story on the desperation and holding is "Tokonatsu! Hamuko-chan"!

@Jailor Eckman: Forgot to mention, I love that you're underlining some specific words, specifically that psssst! I love teasing like that and it's almost never used!

Yep, the conditions don't allow for an accidental leak.  Even just a drop and it's game-over! (Unless she gets smart...  But is Dakota smart?)

Tokonatsu! Hamuko-Chan is actually one of my favorite omorashi doujinshi from way-back when I first found this site.  I would be lying if I said it wasn't at least somewhat of an inspiration for my art.

And the teasing. Makes. My. Life. ?  I want to try to give each girl a different "brand" of teasing.  We'll see if that ends up working out.

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1 hour ago, Jailor Eckman said:

And the teasing. Makes. My. Life. ?  I want to try to give each girl a different "brand" of teasing.  We'll see if that ends up working out.

Teasing is life, teasing is love..... =3

Man this is great so far, I mean I'm a bit suspicious to talk, your character designer kind of got me xD I really like it, I particularly think your girls are sexy, dying of anxiety to see where this comic will end xD

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