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Well, that took a lot longer than I thought it would! I'll probably be doing another Hoard image before I create the next entry.

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Off-Limits!

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Do you have a planned finale?  I would be interested in seeing her use a urinal!

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You’re really good at making these comics, and it’s something I definitely don’t see enough of. Have you ever thought about showing some of your sketches or anything of drawings you’re working on? I love seeing other artists’ sketches because I like seeing what kind of proportion thingies they use. (Sometimes they’re so good they don’t even need proportions, and those people make me very envious)

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*Audible Salivation* you are too cruel, Eckman... you put together this amazing scene with beautiful artwork, and, much like the main character, you're making us wait so long to see the end. 

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18 hours ago, bibibibi said:

Do you have a planned finale?  I would be interested in seeing her use a urinal!

Hmmm...  I have a couple things in mind for the finale, but that might actually be compatible. 

 

16 hours ago, Phentaiee said:

You’re really good at making these comics, and it’s something I definitely don’t see enough of. Have you ever thought about showing some of your sketches or anything of drawings you’re working on? I love seeing other artists’ sketches because I like seeing what kind of proportion thingies they use. (Sometimes they’re so good they don’t even need proportions, and those people make me very envious)

Thank you!  Actually, I have thought of that as a way of keeping you guys updated.  It takes a bit of time between each drawing, and I don't want you guys to think I've stopped or anything.  (Generally speaking, I try to get one done roughly every week to eight days... making this one a bit late ?).  I just haven't come up with a good way of sharing my work-in-progress yet.  It is definitely more technical (read as: 'ugly') than what I think most people would expect on a site like this... though, that's not to say I'm opposed to the idea.

I didn't think the proportions were all that great in these comics, ha!  I've been mixing a bit of a western-cartoony and manga style.  It's a bit easier to more quickly make pages when the style is conducive.  Mainly, there are some important bits I keep in mind, such as how I like to make the hips wider than the shoulders (not realistic, but I find it visually appealing), and the hourglass-ish shape that makes the torso (the points of the triangles need to intersect a bit to create the waist and belly).  Also the hips on girls are canted a bit, and you can more easily create the arch in the back once you have that in place (in profile-view).  It's kind of like, if you were to draw a line horizontally across her pelvis, it would be tilted up at the butt and down at the crotch, even when she's standing up straight.  That... that was a sentence I typed, lol.

Sorry, for rambling!  If I come up with a better way of sharing the technical end of this stuff, I'll be sure to let you know!

 

14 hours ago, Pondera said:

*Audible Salivation* you are too cruel, Eckman... you put together this amazing scene with beautiful artwork, and, much like the main character, you're making us wait so long to see the end. 

Thank you!  And well, you know what they say:  Haste makes waste... and not the lovely, wet, warm, and yellow kind!

 

 

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Man, this is a reaallly lovely comic, You're making me become a big fan of you ?

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1 hour ago, Jailor Eckman said:

Mainly, there are some important bits I keep in mind, such as how I like to make the hips wider than the shoulders (not realistic, but I find it visually appealing), and the hourglass-ish shape that makes the torso (the points of the triangles need to intersect a bit to create the waist and belly).  Also the hips on girls are canted a bit, and you can more easily create the arch in the back once you have that in place (in profile-view).  It's kind of like, if you were to draw a line horizontally across her pelvis, it would be tilted up at the butt and down at the crotch, even when she's standing up straight.  That... that was a sentence I typed, lol.

Sorry, for rambling!  If I come up with a better way of sharing the technical end of this stuff, I'll be sure to let you know!

Well, part of this was pretty useful! (I already knew most of it) but if you’re working on one of your solo pieces that isn’t a comic, just posting the sketch would probably be a great progress update! Sketches are always pretty ugly, but if the drawing is taking a while, then posting a preview of it is a pretty good idea, in my opinion

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2 hours ago, Jailor Eckman said:

Hmmm...  I have a couple things in mind for the finale, but that might actually be compatible.

I'm probably biased, but I would totally love a finale that consisted of the mean girls telling her she can finally pee, but she has to pee like a boy - stand in front of a urinal, lift her skirt, and spread her labia.  This scenario could be made even more exciting if they made her do it in front of a crowded trough urinal. 

Also, thanks so much for considering my idea!  Your art is pretty well-drawn, and the writing/plot is believable yet fantasy-fulfilling. 

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I can only imagine how huge that bladder bulge is going to be after a whole day of holding. Assuming that she can even last the night without bursting like a water balloon.

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On 1/3/2019 at 3:08 PM, AkenoSama said:

Man, this is a reaallly lovely comic, You're making me become a big fan of you ?

Thanks!  It will definitely be getting continued! 

On 1/3/2019 at 5:21 PM, bibibibi said:

I'm probably biased, but I would totally love a finale that consisted of the mean girls telling her she can finally pee, but she has to pee like a boy - stand in front of a urinal, lift her skirt, and spread her labia.  This scenario could be made even more exciting if they made her do it in front of a crowded trough urinal. 

Also, thanks so much for considering my idea!  Your art is pretty well-drawn, and the writing/plot is believable yet fantasy-fulfilling. 

Hey, that's pretty good! Now you've got me debating whether or not this should count as a spoiler.  ?  I guess you'll have to find out!

On 1/7/2019 at 2:14 PM, Pondera said:

I can only imagine how huge that bladder bulge is going to be after a whole day of holding. Assuming that she can even last the night without bursting like a water balloon.

And it's going to be one long day of holding for her!  Filled with a lot of pee-dancing and squirming... and pee.

 

@Phentaiee Yeah, I've got "pencil" layers that might be of some help.  And "notes" layers as Easter-Eggs for whenever I figure out how to share them.  Only recently did I get the option to edit the Hoard gallery... I'm not entirely sure why.  But I noticed that you can make the gallery visible to only select people, which would be fantastic for sharing WIPs.  Can't edit Off-Limits! yet, though.  And I'm assuming that new galleries probably won't be editable for me yet either.   I'm sure I'm being dumb, but if I ever get a clear answer as to what exactly is going on with that, I'll let you know!

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