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Just this once.  Just this once, Dakota thought she could get away with cheating on her midterm!  And she did... kind of.  There's a catch: the girl she cheated off of caught her and is out for blood... or urine, in this case.  Despite being very desperate to pee, she must cross her legs and hold it until tomorrow if there's any chance of her saving her full-ride college scholarship.  And Dakota though the midterm was the hardest test she'd ever taken...

Not the most original idea, I know, but I thought it would be cool to turn into a comic / manga.  I hope the art isn't too awful!  I wanted to try a semi-colored style to give the pages a bit more pop.

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5 hours ago, bibibibi said:

will you make the rest?

Absolutely!  I'm planning on making this an intermittent project, and I'm working on the next part now.

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It should be a shame she go through the whole day and all the challenge, only to end in the bathroom being out of order =3

 

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I bet that it will have one of those bad endings for poor girl. Either she doesn't make it and blackmailer tells teacher, or she does make it, but just as she is about to go into bathroom and empty herself, teacher from exam will stop her, her bladder will just release the watefall and blackmailer will "accidentaly" say that she cheated. Never a good ending in one of these...

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If I may make a suggestion as to the ending, I would definitely like to see her drench her knickers - especially in front of anyone she has a crush on!

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Great addition with those last few pages. Nice to see the "inner mind workings" draw out like that! Really like that 🙂

Also, would love to see her sneak a pee somewhere, just to lift the pressure a bit. It'll make the hold a bit more realistic as well (If you going for the whole 24hours)

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It has all the elements that I enjoy. 

 

The reason: Can’t go because of punishment 

The dance: Very nice

The story: It has a great plot

Please keep it up!

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    • And for the final hour....her friends demanded that she uncross her legs. Least....that's how I see things in MY head canon. 
    • Because you have to drink a large drink for each attempt, and I'm putting that between 330-500ml, 4 attempts would already be 2L which would be quite a lot for a normal person. Of course you can't do one per second, nor would you want to! Also your estimation is wrong, as a inteling player would only do 10 attempts max, one for each number, as they have to tell when a number is in a correct position. 
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    • This came out wonderfully~! I love the art and the description. I absolutely plan on making commission requests when I'm able, though I encourage everyone else to as well!
    • Uff o//w//o I love your desperation drawings!!!!
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