Off-Limits!
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Jailor Eckman
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Just this once.  Just this once, Dakota thought she could get away with cheating on her midterm!  And she did... kind of.  There's a catch: the girl she cheated off of caught her and is out for blood... or urine, in this case.  Despite being very desperate to pee, she must cross her legs and hold it until tomorrow if there's any chance of her saving her full-ride college scholarship.  And Dakota though the midterm was the hardest test she'd ever taken...

Not the most original idea, I know, but I thought it would be cool to turn into a comic / manga.  I hope the art isn't too awful!  I wanted to try a semi-colored style to give the pages a bit more pop.

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5 hours ago, bibibibi said:

will you make the rest?

Absolutely!  I'm planning on making this an intermittent project, and I'm working on the next part now.

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It should be a shame she go through the whole day and all the challenge, only to end in the bathroom being out of order =3

 

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I bet that it will have one of those bad endings for poor girl. Either she doesn't make it and blackmailer tells teacher, or she does make it, but just as she is about to go into bathroom and empty herself, teacher from exam will stop her, her bladder will just release the watefall and blackmailer will "accidentaly" say that she cheated. Never a good ending in one of these...

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I love your comics I can’t wait to see the conclusion

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I wanna see how this ends but also dont want it to end good job

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If I may make a suggestion as to the ending, I would definitely like to see her drench her knickers - especially in front of anyone she has a crush on!

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Great addition with those last few pages. Nice to see the "inner mind workings" draw out like that! Really like that 🙂

Also, would love to see her sneak a pee somewhere, just to lift the pressure a bit. It'll make the hold a bit more realistic as well (If you going for the whole 24hours)

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I'd like to see her sneak a pee in her skirt - and nowhere else!

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