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I'd also love to see more of this - I much prefer magical / high concept stories like this to the real-life situations. I feel like the author has written themselves into a bit of a corner though with those last two paragraphs.

If it was me, I'd rewind a bit and make the loss of control play out over three or four chapters, with more incidents and hypnosis sessions. Happy to see any continuation though!

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alright you degenerates that keep asking, I just started writing a new piece for this story. yes it's been a long time, inspiration is a fickle thing. but upon coming back and reading this again I realized how incomplete it actually felt, like the way Evangelion ended. So expect Hypnosis Coin 3.0+1.0 Thrice Upon a Time 358/2 Days and Knuckles featuring Dante from the Devil May Cry Series and a New Funky Mode sometime in the near future.

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On 3/11/2021 at 2:56 PM, zimw00t said:

alright you degenerates that keep asking, I just started writing a new piece for this story. yes it's been a long time, inspiration is a fickle thing. but upon coming back and reading this again I realized how incomplete it actually felt, like the way Evangelion ended. So expect Hypnosis Coin 3.0+1.0 Thrice Upon a Time 358/2 Days and Knuckles featuring Dante from the Devil May Cry Series and a New Funky Mode sometime in the near future.

Can’t wait 🎉🎉🎉

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