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Saril: Mmmhmhmhm~ Welcome once again, my loyal fans... To a series you're all familiar with by now...

Hold it! Saril's Omo-Idol! (Alterna)

Saril: I'm sure you're all thinking 'But Saril! There's already a story for this! Why start a new one?'

Saril: Simple! Because of a certain individual, we've gone beyond just the era of written words... And transcended to illustrated form!

AuthorFaust; Which you can purchase the first chapter of Here

Saril: And, while continuing the plot of the previous one in Text would be quite fun... I feel like the doors should be opened for a different group...

AuthorFaust: Especially given some slight revisions to the rules and standards set by our artist. Things that really fit the theme...

Saril: Of course, it'll still be quite a lovely journey, with plenty of downtime inbetween segments, and it's a general way to keep the excitement for Omo-Idol running!

AuthorFaust: So, to not interfere with the canon of the Previous storyline....

Saril: And to not spoil any surprises for future chapters...

 

Welcome officially, to Hold it! Saril's Omo-Idol! (Alterna)

[10 girls will be selected to join this Alternate setup of Omo-Idol. Characters are to be submitted by the audience, and will be reviewed to decide who to bring in.]

[As with before, each character will have an [Audition Video], involving them beginning in a desperate scenario.]

[Characters that are accepted May become part of another series of Omo-Idol, If the artist desires to continue it. You must accept this, before you submit a girl]

[No girls from the previous Omo-Idol will be accepted]

[Character sheet is to be followed....]

Saril's Hold it!!! Omo-Idol Entry Form

Character Name: [Who are you submitting to fulfill this role?]
Character Appearance: [Please provide an image for your submitted girl.]
Favorite Drink: [What is said Character's Favorite Drink?]
Body Type: [Is the Girl Flat, Shapely, Curvy, Top-heavy, bottom-blessed? Etc.]
Bladder Size: {Small, average, large, or any of the like inbetween? Be warned: Your bladder size is not the only deciding factor for challenges]
Piddle Habits: [Any specific details about their habits when it comes to peeing, including pee-shyness, prominent leaking, etc.]
Strength: [List up to 3 things your character is confident in]
Weakness: [List at least 1 thing that your character is very unskilled at, or even afraid of]

Other: Any Extra Details you have about said character.

By Submitting this character, you acknowledge that they may suffer an embarrassing (and public) fate.

 

[Footnote: Potential comic status is entirely dependent on if Biku still wishes to pursue the series/Isn't sick of Faust by the time the first season of Omo-Idol is finished. No promises are being made of an illustrated sense]

[And, if you've somehow missed it, Check out Hold it! Omo-Idol Here!

And you can see the original story that inspired it Here

 

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I have questions! Does an image need to be submitted or can features be thoroughly described instead? I'll go look for a look-alike if I absolutely have to, but I didn't exactly have anyone in particular in mind. If this character doesn't work, I'd like someone from the Magic: the gathering series such as bouncy.

Character Name: Tanya
Character background: Truly, Tanya has her eyes set on the prize! Her great ambitions and interest in the field of geology has taken her to [remote country] where she spends her time studying at [Insert university]. Nature is wonderful, but sometimes a little cold.

Character Appearance: Red hair, short-medium height, sometimes wears glasses (when she has a test or does something extra important) but mostly lenses, wears plaid skirts and dresses, likes shirts with pockets, and has outdoorsy clothes for outside adventures and excursions. Her eyes are a boring brown and her blood type is AB. One of her weaknesses is laughing at her own jokes - sometimes she has a really hard time holding her laughter in and being the first to laugh at your own joke is somewhat embarrassing.
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Kurisu is her closest look-alike but Tanya doesn't have that same mean stare, nor is her hair particularly long. She's also not quite as skinny - spending time outside has toned her hips and legs a little.
Favorite Drink: She likes all kinds of fruit - though not pineapple and kiwi. So her favorite drinks are anything "fruit-like".
Body Type: Fairly shapely upper body, not anything extraordinary but nothing she's self-conscious about. Her bottom's good-looking, but more toned than curvy.
Bladder Size: She used to think she had a decently large bladder, but the long excursions tend to leave her bursting at the seams. She's not sure if everyone else has a mammoth bladder, or if they are good about discreetly peeing outside.
Piddle Habits: Does not like peeing outside at all. If she absolutely has to, she only wants to tell people she really trusts about it. Will never pee anywhere that's not a toilet if a lot of people know she has to go. Usually never leaks, even when she has to go badly. When she starts peeing, it's almost impossible for her to stop. She tends to pee strong hissy streams if she has to go badly
Latest mishap: While having to go quite badly (though not quite at her brink) Tanya sneezed, causing a big accident. How embarrassing!
Strength: Hiking, playing the trombone and making a tasty-ass Pizza (she also really likes to figure out who the murderer is in television dramas)
Weakness: Fear of elevators, though she tends to downplay it. Getting stuck in one terrifies her.

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22 minutes ago, Faust said:

An image of some sort is mandatory this time for a submission. However, feel free to add little details to the base image.. Such as larger breasts, wider hips, etc.

The closest I could find was Kurisu from Steins;Gate. So Kurisu-like but with shorter hair, less of a cold stare and does not wear a tie. Shall I add a Kurisu-image to my submission?

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Character Name: Asami Nakaoka
Character Appearance: Image result for Asami hotd
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Favorite Drink: Mugicha (Japanese Ice Tea)
Body Type: Athletic & Petite, Small chest (nearly flat/A-cup), shapely bottom & hips (Bottom-blessed)
Bladder Size: Smaller than Average.


Piddle Habits: Good at holding on until the last moment due to her Police training, she's naive & absent-minded at times so frequently forgets to go to the bathroom ahead of time. She always puts on a confidence face & is open about her needs but downplays them. Her Police training helps her keep leaks to a minimum but her petite size & small bladder limit her. During the Zombie Apocalypse she was forced to adapt to peeing outside, in front of others, & even in doors on the floor.

Strength: Excellent aim & marksmanship with small arms,  Hand to hand combat training from the Police Academy, extensive knowledge on guns & other weapons.
Weakness: Despite being a Police Officer she's extremely afraid of shooting at people (Including the Undead), She loyal to her Police code to a fault & will put herself in harms way for others.

Other: She's 19 years old, speaks in 3rd person, & is extremely optimistic.


(I'm Sorry I had to...)

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Saril's Hold it!!! Omo-Idol Entry Form

Character Name: Naruko Morita
Character Appearance:Naruko.png

Favorite Drink: Vanilla Soda
Body Type: Petite, perky bottom
Bladder Size: Moderate-to-Low. The definition of Average
Piddle Habits: Doesn't think about peeing too much, doing it when it's necessary, and having no particular hangups on it. Though, given she doesn't do prolonged holds, any attempts in the matter of going outside the norm are going to be met with...inexperience.
Strength: Her Confident attitude, her phone's camerawork, and her personal genius
Weakness: She gets too overenthusiastic sometimes, willing to dip to extremes over minor slights. Also she sometimes misses the big picture, choosing instead of hyperfocus on something or another. Afraid of fading into a background, and as such, may be a bit too reckless

Other: Has very little idea what she's getting herself into: Coming in as a complete newbie to the potential omo-world.

 

By Submitting this character, you acknowledge that they may suffer an embarrassing (and public) fate.

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Character Name:  Rias Gremory
Character Appearance: 

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Favorite Drink: Black Tea
Body Type: Top-heavy, bottom-blessed
Bladder Size: large
Piddle Habits: Consider an accident the the greatest of shames, as much than getting caught peeing out in public, a EXTREMELY pee-shyness she don't let the others know when she had to go, she can be fine even holding a big load in her bladder, but sure she can't avoid to make a potty dance when the pressure start to rise, 

an interesting note is once she start to pee, everyone next her will know because her loudy moaning and hissing ( which of course cause a terrible embarrassment after the bladder is empty )

due to "lack of control" when she is relieving herself, she is extremely against going outside ... She is EVEN MORE when it is about go in front of another person, she will only do this when there is no other option and to save her panties, more although as humiliating as an accident, because she was proud she would prefer to expose herself than to have an accident .... but despite doing this she hates both equally.

 

Strength: 1 : a really smart girl, can think in a good plan or strategy quick.

2: knowledge about Magic and supernatural things

3: unwavering willpower

weakness: extremely insecure about herself when her lover does not recognize her feelings, she is extremely jealous and always keeps feelings of fear and insecurity to herself instead of asking for help.

 

Other: Rias is a very kind and compassionate optimist like a gente big sis, she want to protect and help anyone ( she will possibly try to comfort any girl who has an accident, sometimes even before she has some relief for herself )

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Faust made it a little harder for me by denying re-submitting characters, but I have pulled through!

Saril's Hold it!!! Omo-Idol Entry Form

Character Name: Haruka Kotoura
Character Appearance: 
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(With added Profile shots)
Favourite Drink: Milk Tea
Body Type: Barely an A-Cup and Petite.
Bladder Size: Slightly below average.
Piddle Habits: Very pee shy. Has an extremely hard time going when others could see (or hear) her doing it. She's also adverse to peeing outside of a toilet unless she's on the verge of wetting herself. She's too embarrassed to let others know that she needs to go and will adamantly try to hide it as best she can, which ultimately ends in her rushing off at the last minute, leaking every step of the way to the toilet.
Strengths: 
Smarts - Haruka is able to quickly assess most logical situations and come to a decision on the best course of action to take. This, however, does not necessarily translate to the easiest solution and doesn't work well in situations reliant on Physical Prowess.
Reliable - Haruka is well versed in all forms of standard household tasks, like cooking, cleaning, laundry and budgeting. It's not yet clear whether this will help her win the Omo-Idol Rankings, but at least she'd be able to hide the evidence of any unfortunate shortcomings should they happen.
Empathetic - Sometimes, the best outcome from a horrible situation is learning how it must feel for others in the same position. Haruka's had more than a few close calls, and has sometimes not quite made it as well. Such experiences have made her feel more empathy towards the plight of others as well, leading to a more caring and compassionate response to others who may experience their own tinkle troubles.
Weakness:
Lacking Self-confidence: Being petite, plain (in her opinion) and lacking in any overt 'womanly' features, Haruka can't help but compare herself to the more 'gifted' or 'stacked' individuals. This often leads to her feeling bad about herself and hating that she's not as 'pretty' or 'bouncy' as some others might be. Oftentimes, she tries to not let it get her down, but she can't always deny her inner thoughts and feelings about such things and may come across as reserved or defensive when personal assets are mentioned or compared.

Other: Haruka actually has the ability to read other people's minds! However, the transition from her Home Universe to the Faust and Saril Universe has temporarily stripped her of this power. However, she can't shake the mounting feeling of dread which comes from once being able to read minds, but now not being able to. What do the others think of her? What about the situation they're in? Should she be worried? Scared? Trusting? Only time can tell.

By Submitting this character, you acknowledge that they may suffer an embarrassing (and public) fate.
T_T (Signs name away~)

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8 minutes ago, Keita123 said:

Question. Can the character be not from modern Earth? Like a fantasy world, for example?

The person has to at least be human-like in nature. Faust does not want any unfair advantages, such as extra organs or the like. They won't have access to magic, or likely certain kinds of weaponry.

If it's just a question of someone from distant times, that would be acceptable...

 

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Character Name: Lyrica Archibald
Character Appearance:

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Favorite Drink: Alchemically Made Milky Soda
Body Type: Average in general though she has some rocking wild thighs
Bladder Size: Small
Piddle Habits: Secretly pee-shy, as she's too prideful in telling anyone she might be travelling with for a pee break. That's why she always keeps some hold-my-pee pills around that she made herself, allowing her to hold for a long time even with her small bladder.
Strength: 

1. She's absolutely confident in her capability as an alchemist, so much so that it borders on arrogance at times. "There's nothing that I couldn't make" was her motto.

2. She's also really confident in her capability as a mage, having both an impressive amount of mana and an impressive control over it.

3. She has a vast repository of knowledge regarding everything there is to know about the world, as she could learn and memorize something with just a single reading.

Weakness: 

Her only fear is to have an accident in public one day. She always hates the fact that she has a small bladder, and that she has to compensate with alchemical pills that help her hold.

Other:

Being the court mage of her kingdom, she is widely regarded as the best magic user and alchemist in it, and she obtained the position in a tender age of 17, giving her the moniker of genius as well. She always gives the air that she looks down at you while believing in her own superiority, and she doesn't tolerate any fools in her presence. She's not an evil person however, and she really will help everyone that needs her power (as long as you don't piss her off, that is).

Secretly likes cute things, particularly cats.

@Faust

Is that okay? Naturally, I'm fine with you stripping away her magic (and even her pills, poor her... 😂)

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image.png.e02fe6a9e5d6a17485e5e18b4bffb46e.pngCharacter Name: Honey Kisaragi
Character background: An android created by Dr Kisaragi to protect Japan. When in base form, she works at an office building

Favorite Drink: Not really stated in the series, but I've seen her drinking coffee and beer
Character Appearance: Base form: Shapely, white outfit that includes a top that exposes her stomach with a skirt and matching boots along with the standard blonde hair and blue eyes. She is also seen in a blue office outfit. F-Cup, tall
Cutie Honey form: She has red hair and eyes and is adorned in a red and black outfit that compared to earlier versions covers the chest area more than others but is open midriff and is more revealing when viewed from the back.
Bladder Size: Large
Piddle Habits:  She doesn't have issues with peeing outside and stuff, but she's rather not and she'll do her best not to. Not adverse to showing she's desperate
Strengths: 
Strength: She's well versed in fighting, mainly sword fighting, she fights goons daily
Friendly: She gets along well with other people
Weakness:
Airhead: She doesn't think too much about stuff
Impulsive: She doesn't think too much about stuff and sometimes she gets into fights because of it (not like bar fights, but like good vs evil stuff)

Other: Honey has the ability to transform into various shapes, but she's confined to her base and her Cutie Honey forms due to the transition (feel free to ask stuff about her to prevent fuckovery)

By Submitting this character, you acknowledge that they may suffer an embarrassing (and public) fate.
Coolio

 

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Character Name: Miss Mask
Character Appearance: so she would have the dress of Jessica Rabbit but black and with white gloves and black shoes. She would have a similar body as well, but with large breast for a normal human, black curly hair, regular sized feet, and what would be considered a small waist for a normal human.

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and, as her name might suggest she has a mask, one that she never removes in front of other people

this mask to be precise 

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Favorite Drink: A mysterious red brew that only she knows how to make.

often drunk in a wine glass
Body Type: obviously curvy
Bladder Size: large
Piddle Habits: Like a proper lady of the olden days she never announces her need and only likes to go if nobody will know.
Strength: Manipulation,Persuasion, Getting what she wants, etiquette, sneaking, sceaming, riddles  
Weakness: Putting on makeup (never needed too what with the mask and all), swimming (doesn't like to because shes afraid her mask will fall off in the water), and her only true fear is losing her mask.

Other: Often speaks in rhyme and riddles, enjoys the finer things in life, likes to align herself with powerful people in fact the only reason she joined this show was to get close to the Goddess of Lust, knows powerful illusion magic sometimes used to "revile" her face if its truly necessary this leads to many claiming to know her true face but all of them having different accounts as to what it looks like also has the power to teleport this magic is of course kept a secret and shall not be used here as it is against the rules i guess, shes actually quite beautiful under that mask and only wears it to keep her identity a secret, nobody knows her real name, her past, or her true face but her parents.

By Submitting this character, you acknowledge that they may suffer an embarrassing (and public) fate.

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Character Name: Itsuki Nakano
Character Appearance: 

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Favorite Drink: Tea
Body Type: curvy
Bladder Size: bladder the size of a squirrel
Piddle Habits: pees as often as possible as to avoid embarrassing situations, therefore, she has little in the way of pee-holding experience
Strength: cooking, manners, eating
Weakness: gets nervous about having to hold her pee for long periods of time

Other: She is slightly tsundere until you get to know her

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Character Name: Kozuko Motou!
Character Appearance: image.png
Favorite Drink: Rockstar, Mt. Dew, Various teas both hot and cold, Guinness and Apple Ciders on the alcoholic end
Body Type: Smol, but a cute butt
Bladder Size: Large for her size
Piddle Habits: She often puts it off due to her challenge-tackling nature, thus leading her to have more "incidents" and close calls than a normal girl of her bladder size. If it gets bad she is absolutely a leaker, and the leaks can get bad. Closer to doom she is, the worse they are.
Strength: Determination, planning, and [Secret Ability (Faust knows what is)]
Weakness: Bad at foresight. If something doesn't go according to her plan, i.e a closed bathroom, she probably hasn't planned around that possibility and ends up doing the shocked Pikachu face. Also has an absolute disdain for small critters as they give her the creeps. Kozuko is very easily startled and hates it when things get the drop on her.

Other: In ownership of an incredibly extensive wardrobe.

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Saril's Hold it!!! Omo-Idol Entry Form

Character Name: Zoe Solair

Character Appearance: 

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Height: 4' 11"

Weight: 92 lbs

Favorite Drink: Monster Energy, Rum-based cocktails

Body Type: Immature, borderline flat, cute butt

Bladder Size: Tiny even for someone her size

Piddle Habits: Has no real experience holding, and has quite a number of incidents.  When she tries to hold for more than a few seconds, she leaks rather a lot.

Strength: Zoe is an insanely strong psionic adept, and can see into the minds of others.  Several skills are necessary to make full use of them.

  • She has read enough minds to know how people work.  As such, she is very skilled in diplomatic situations.
  • She has a tight grasp on practical physics.  A necessity for anything involving psychokinesis, but useful for, say, throwing things unassisted.
  • Her grasp of human biology is surprisingly tight.  All the better for if/when things get lewd.

Weakness: Zoe's powers are essentially cast from calories.  As a result:

  • She gets hungry and thirsty pretty quickly, especially after diving into her more involved powers.
  • She looks far younger than she actually is.  Her ability to exert herself physically is extremely limited by her childlike build.
  • On a tangentially-related note, Zoe also has a hard time turning off her telepathy without consuming alcohol.
    • Because she can't turn off her telepathy, it's rather easy to fool.
    • The constant reading of people's minds has made her harshly cynical, and rather slow to trust new people.
  • On a completely unrelated note, Zoe is also far-sighted, and has to wear glasses to correct this.

Other: 

  • For the purposes of this competition, you may equip her with a psionic inhibitor if her powers would become problematic.
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Saril: Oh my... I didn't expect so many applicants in such a short time. Unfortunately, we've got to cut two of you, as per the stated line in the outline...

AuthorFaust: If I hadn't been worn out yesterday, I could have saved us the trouble......

Saril: So, with that in mind, I had the Author prepare a random drawing to see who gets cut... So, let's get to the number now.

*Flourish to a random thing picker*

Saril: Annnnnd... we have 9  as our first one out. Which is.....*Scrolls up* Hikari!

Saril: My Apologies. You'll have to sit this one out. And, for number two....

AuthorFaust: Number 11, you're unfortunately sitting out of this one too. Sorry, Zoey Solair. Better luck next time.

Saril: Now, the Author has his actual job to get to, but be ready everyone! For the other ten girls....

It begins....

[Submissions are officially closed. Apologies to those who had to be cut to fit in the 10 limit.]

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Tanya:

"Mm...! Nearly there now...!"

Brandishing a large stick like a support cane, the modestly endowed brunette finally made her long trek up Mt. Struggle, pacing a bit out of breath.... but, finally overcoming it!
She loved hiking... Long, quiet trips along the countryside... Exploring the vastness of nature.... The serenity of the earth itself....

Frankly, she couldn't get enough of it. Although...

"N..Nnnn.."  the girl grumbled, shifting her hips as she glanced over the horizon, a large waterfall out of earshot... but, very much in sight. "Been at this for hours... De...definitely time to head back."

She had to stay hydrated her whole trip up... but, it was coming back to bite her now. She had to act quickly, before....

 

Asami:

"Uwahhhh.... Asami's finally done!"

Things had been rather quiet, after dealing with an incredibly unusual situation.... And, having to put up with otherworldly encounters..
Before she could properly evacuate the area, she had to finish the necessary paperwork to transfer out. So what if her boss wouldn't see it? If this situation resolved itself before she made it to the next town, she didn't want to be punished for not doing her job! She was an officer of the law! She HAD to do this!

"Nnn... Ohhh... But, now Asami has another problem.." the petite Asami cooed to herself, bending over in her office chair, as various groans and scratches filled the hall. "Asami's gotta tinkle.... but... she has to make sure it's safe before she goes..."

There were still monsters out there, after all.. If she wasn't careful, this trip could be her last! ...but still....

Naruko:

"M..Mmmm... Hopefully, this'll be a good enough spot.."

The petite, black-twintailed girl lightly shifted from foot to foot, digging into the pockets of her jacket to pull out her phone.
Putting on a proper smile, and hitting the record button, she quickly held it up to affix the lighting, her other hand giving off a peace sign.
"Mmm! Hello followers! Or rather, that-one-follower-that-likes-all-my-posts... It's Naruko Morita, and I'm doing my 100 views request! Even if it is just the one guy, it's a milestone, and I'll take what I can get!"
The girl gave a small peace sign with her hands, before turning the camera down to a table... A few empty glasses set atop them.
"The winner of my 100 view request giveaway....Has requested that I... do a bit of a...challenge.."

She spun the phone back around to face herself, as she buried a hand in her skirt.

"S..So, I drank a few glasses of water, and have..put off peeing. At least for a bit! I promised I'd upload at least a two minute video, thanking you all for what you do and stuffs... but, I'm honestly kind of blanking here. So...um..what can i even.."

Oh no, she was hitting the worst thing! A drought of topics! There had to be SOMETHING she could talk about!
"Well, i mean...Uhh.. I don't know why you wanted to see me kind of... wiggling back and forth... Bending at the knees and stuff.... B.But.. I suppose that I hope you like what you see! Sorry I don't have a slammin' body, or like.... Much to uh... Say... I'm just... trying to....You know..."

She shifted her weight from one foot to the other, still blanking on a topic. Sure, this was her face-reveal too, in a sense... but, she was still totally blanking..

"I..I mean, I guess I could kind of talk about how it feels...." she started, absentmindedly. "B..but, I don't know if you wanna know about me having to pee! I mean.. I'm sure someone's into that, and stuff... but uh... It's... a bit rough...! I've never really tried to wait too long to go, So it's...Different? Kind of tough, but also kind of....nice? I mean, I don't think it's like... Dangerous...or anything..But..Um.."

The girl felt her thighs tensing up as she mentioned it, eying the timer. She was fumbling.... She was fumbling this hard! Dammit, what kind of name could she make for herself if she couldn't even manage a two minute video thanking her follower? Maybe it was that little need that was distracting her..
"Nnn..Maybe...maybe I should go prett..pretty soon... but... I don't know if that's ToS...."

This was... a difficult position.

Rias:

"Hrnnnn... Nnnngh..."

The shapely red head grit her teeth, and tensed her thighs as she slowly made her way down the building...Eyes darting around nervously for a certain figure.
"Can't let anyone see me...but.." the girl muttered to herself, a hand moving down to the front of her outfit for an encouraging squeeze. "Nnn..Issei'd think so much less of me, like that... And...And Akeno'd never let me hear the end of it.."
Truthfully, she had been waiting for a bit longer than she wanted to, purely because she knew that Akeno was cleaning the area up, and she didn't want to be spotted. She'd avoided the girl, mercifully....But, as she came to the door leading to her salvation...
Clk...clk.
"Ah..?! L..Locked..?!!!" the girl thought to herself, now starting to writhe more prominently. "It..It can't be... Akeno, are you in there?! Open up already!"
This was bad....

 

 

Haruka:

"U...Uuu..."

The petite, orange haired girl sprinted as fast as her little legs could, making her way down the hall at breakneck speeds. She'd sat through the rest of her English class, fighting with every fiber of her being to not grip at herself...To not cross her legs...To not wriggle and writhe in her seat....But, no matter how much she tried,
She couldn't fight the urge.. The fact she desperately needed to pee....

Her hands lightly rested against the front of her skirt as she finally made her way into the bathroom, starting to breathe a sigh of relief.
'Just...a bit more and I can..' she thought, as she saw two girls in front of her, loudly talking.

"So, Ms. Sugimura was going on and on about Vladmir Teepes.."
"It's like, ugh, it's not like vampires are a real thing, yeah?"

They were girls in a different class....but merely hearing their voices made Haruka tense up, and flinch... Even if she didn't know them personally...If they knew how fit to bursting she was.....
'I..I gotta... But I cant'..!' she thought, internally debating loudly as her body wriggled from side to side. With any luck, they'd be out and she'd have her privacy....
She just hoped it happened soon...

Lyrica:

"Phew.... that went on longer than it should have.."
The young, alchemist had to bring a shipment of some of her best potions to the local apothecary, It was good money, but tiring work.... Moreso, when she had to get them properly labelled, and sorted.
"And the shopkeeper... he didn't seem too experienced at this.." she added, grumbling. "Hope he doesn't try anything foolish with my potions..."
As she walked though, a familiar pang resounded in her lower belly...making the girl flinch..
"Nnn. Looks like it's time for one of my special pills.." she called, fishing about in her bag. "Got a lot more to do, after all. Can't take a break to tinkle..."

At last, her fingers captured one of the small pellets, moving to try to bring it up to her lips. Feeling confident, the girl tossed it up high, aiming to catch it in her mouth. Soon as it would be ingested, she wouldn't need to worry about relief for another hour...
But...

Honey:

"Phew..Organization complete." the shapely blonde affirmed, carefully placing the document in yet another folder, pulling out the file cabinet to finally put that chore to rest. She'd been stuck with the busywork all day, Organizing files, documenting the financial records, sorting absentees....
"Hey, could you help me get this book off the top shelf?"
"Sure thing!" the perky blonde called, moving over and taking advantage of her height to pull a thick tome of old records for another person in the office.
"Thanks, honey. Dr. Kisaragi really outdid himself with you."

"Ahhh, it's nothing~" the blonde mused, a warning being issued to her processing unit..... "Ah...'Scuse me for a bit."

It was time to void waters, so as to avoid anything untimely. Though she didn't quite consider herself human, she wasn't entirely robotic either..Having a few, necessary biotic components.

Yet, as she nearly skipped down to the bathrooms, a loud ruckus outside demanded her attention.

"Help! That man just robbed me!"

"Ah, never fear! I'm on the hunt!" she called out, the thought of relief passing from her mind as she bent at the knees. Such reckless behavior, so close to her station.... She'd have to teach the evil badman a lesson....

...Yet, it almost felt like she was forgetting something..

 

Ms. Mask:

"Mmm... I take it the contract is acceptable, Mr Director?"
"Well, your terms are steep.... But, I think we could arrange this, Miss Mask.." an older gentleman called, looking over some written drafts, glancing up and down. "You certainly will stand to benefit greatly from this...If i sign this."

"You mean, both of us will.." the shapely woman mused back, leaning forward with her arms pushing up a considerable bosom... A healthy amount of cleavage being on near-full display. "Both in riches, and in... other means..."

"M..Mmm.. Yes, yes I believe we could come up with something that makes both of us happy, Ms. Mask.." the man called, making no measure to conceal his line of sight... A flush appearing on his face. "More wine, dear?"

"Mmm... just a bit..." the woman called, pressing her legs together tightly as the man poured the beverage into a glass... The trickling, splashing noises of liquid meeting glass making her flinch under her mask...
She'd been at this for several hours now, running over the terms that would set her for life... That would provide her an insane amount of wealth, and control over a company. She had ensnared the man near-completely with her charms, and could tell his mind was focused on what he could do for some time with her....
Yet, despite all of this, she fought hardest to conceal the several hours worth of pent-up distress inside her.. Determined not to let it show. No.. She couldn't excuse herself, at such a crucial moment... This was her future on the line....
'I've almost got him... just a bit more, and..'

Itsuki:

"Ohhh, ohhh....Can't believe this.."

She'd been to nearly three bathrooms already, all blocked...Barricaded....Or filled to the brim with people. No matter which way the girl turned, there was no escaping the issue...

She had to pee. N-Not that badly, but with all of the stories and such she'd seen, people would always brush this kind of thing aside, and pay for it later.
"N..not me. I'm not gonna fall for that trap.." she told herself, rounding the corner to the fourth bathroom, and seeing another massive line. "Nnn..Stupid..crowds..."

It wasn't bad... It wasn't bad... But, what if her next class had a long test? What if her next class was a lesson on water sciences? What if someone else had an incident, and she felt phantom pangs of their distress? No.... No, she couldn't risk it...She couldn't risk any of it...!
"I'm not gonna wet myself... I won't..."

...Of course, worrying would only make it worse... and given she couldn't stop thinking about it.....

Kozuko:

"Mmm...I'll bet... two drinks this time."

The confident, dark-haired girl hit the enter button to deliver her message... Looking to the screen expectantly. It was an...unorthodox challenge, sure...But one she'd meet with every bit of enthusiasm, and energy as her others.
The premise was simple enough. It was a poker game, with her own continued continence, and level of strain on the line. She'd gamble on hands in a value of drinks or time, versus a set amount of money on the other end.
Each win got her closer to a goal... but each loss cost her the promise of a drink, or a delay. She'd been a touch reckless, and downed several glasses already in penance, but she'd also made a fair chunk of her total, lady luck giving her the lightest of favor. Kozuko lightly adjusted the sporty shorts she'd worn for the challenge, as the cards were revealed....

"Oh, full house. Looks like that's two more drinks for you."

The message gave her a bit of a grumpy scowl, but she picked up the glasses, and tilted them back.. one after the other.
"Hope you're still able to sit still... You've got 20 grand left to earn, and half an hour on your timer."

"Mmmn... Bring it on!" she stated back, getting her virtual cards dealt, as she pressed her legs together...
Sure, she had to pee.. but she wasn't going to give up now! She'd never relented on a challenge before, and she wasn't going to start now!

...
Though, with her current delay timer, she wasn't entirely sure she could take it unless she ended the game now....
'Gotta go big, or go Home..' she thought, gazing over her cards with a glint in her eyes. 'Mmm... I could REALLY bet high on this one..'

She went to type in a firm rebuttal, a confident all in... An utter domination proclamation.. Yet...

 

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As each person would start to hit their points of desperation.. As they would start to hit their own personal breaking points... An essence seemed to ensnare each of them in turn, pulling the girls from their worlds... And into an entirely new one.

"Welcome, my lovelies." a familiar, sensual voice called out...A hand extended in a sweeping flourish. "New guests and old... Old viewers, and new arrivals.. To Saril's Special Show: Hold it!, Omo-Idol, Season 2!"
The dark haired, shapely woman in a professional business-suit looked over the cameras, and the new arrivals, in varying states of need.

The sporty hiker, Tanya.... Caught mid-stride, with her hands pressed firmly to her side...
The bewildered officer, Asami, whose eyes glanced around the moment she arrived.... Her gun missing from it's holster...
The petite blogger, still half-shifted in a pose for her phone's camera... Hands slowly falling as she took in the area around her...
The Shapely red haired girl, whose hands had previously been holding herself, snapping to her sides as she stood rigidly...Wide-eyed...
The petite, shy girl, whimpering as she'd been caught mid-tense.... Her eyes opening to find herself not in the bathroom anymore...
The Alchemist, chomping down on something that was no longer there, blinking quietly as she glanced around worriedly..
The blonde girl, caught mid-stride, having halted in an action pose, as she looked around...
The masked woman, from a sitting position, to a standing one... Perplexion evident, despite her concealed face...
The red haired girl, mind racing a mile a minute as she hastily tried to process what had happened....
And the dark haired girl in a pair of sporty shorts, and a t-shirt.. Looking around the area with a raised eyebrow. A strange situation... Yet...

"Don't worry, you've been plucked from the time frame you were in, and will be returned when the show is over.." Saril's voice came musing over the crowd, glancing over each girl in turn. "Mmm... plus or minus a few things, depending on how good you all are.."

"Wh..where are we?" Tanya called out first, the Goddess grinning as she turned... A finger lightly at her lips.
"You're in my realm, sweeties." Saril cooed, gesturing about the wonderfully-lit arena. "It may seem barren, but that's just because we've gotten started.."

"A..Asami isn't sure this is anywhere she knows!" the police-girl called out hurriedly, a shaking hand moving to her side.."O..Or where her gun is?! Ahhhh..! Asami'll be in BIG trouble if she doesn't have that!"

"You're safe, don't worry." the woman called, flourishing her hands again. "No need for anything dangerous like that. We're all friends here... Or at least, we will be, soon.."

"Um...but, what are..we doing here?" the petite, twintailed grl called... Saril grinning ear-to-ear.

"Oh, we're just about to kick off a new season of a hit reality show." Saril mused, turning to the camera. "A series of challenges, destined to push our girls to the limit, and beyond!"

"H..Hey... What do you mean... Limit?" the shapely redhead started, quivering with every step, as Saril gestured over her shoulder.
"The Author can explain it better than I can...If you may." she mused, a grumpy-looking figure pacing forward with a politely-averted gaze from the wriggling ladies.

"Long story short.." he started, a faint flush on his cheeks. "Challenges to overcome. Big Prize for winner. Hope you like holding your piss. People are watching."

"A..Aaaa?! W....whattya mean by that?!" the petite girl stammered, quivering as she stood... yet fought from holding herself openly.

"Y.You don't actually mean.." the Alchemist started, visibly tensing and shifting as she stood...Glancing up warily at the camreas...
"Ah... Sounds simple enough!"  the blonde girl called out with a light shrug, barely seeming to register the inanity of the situation...

"Mmmmth.. A big Prize.. you say?" the masked woman called, as the grumpy figure gave an offhanded glare at the girl, twirling a hand that seemed to shimmer slightly.

"IF you can behave and control yourselves." the Author called, Ms. Mask's Mask actually starting to change.. The expression taking on a thinner smile... And some visible sweatdrops appearing on the side of it.

"B..B-b-b-but what if we can't?!" the red headed girl stammered. "Y..You're not the kind of person that'll make us do embarrassing things for your own amusement...r..r..right?"

There was an almost painful silence from the Author, as the girl bent over slightly.

"RIGHT?!"

"A challenge, Hmmmmmmm?" the dark haired girl called, striking a confident pose, with a small grin. "I think I'll be up to that. What's up first?"

"Well, First, is the most important one.." Saril started, clearly amused by the batch of contestants. "We're starting with a classic issue: The Line challenge!"

"Aaaaa..! You're gonna make us walk a line, and punish us if we fall?"

"No, nothing draconian like that.." Saril stated, gesturing behind her... The area shifting and turning.... A door with a sign most familiar to anyone with toilet urges would recognize. "We're going to line you up, and see how well you can all hold your urges. For the sake of your modesty, our cleanup crew, and any potential artistry by our dear friend Biku whoillustratedthefirstchapterofouroriginalstorywhichcanbeboughthere ,I suggest you all cross your legs, and HOLD IT!

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Saril: And with that, Omo-Idol Alterna has begun! I'm sure you all have LOADS of questions, comments, etcetera, but for now.. I need something from the audience....
Saril: I need you to decide on the order in which our lovely new girls may go. From first to get relief, to the one who has to hold the longest, please arrange them as you see fit...

AuthorFaust: And while you're at it, feel free to throw some questions at our girls in turn. You get 2 questions, and can offer encouragement to two girls. This may or may not affect their eventual fate, so try not to think about it too hard.

AuthorFaust: (Whispering) And if you drop a #followNaruko in your post, you may ask an extra question, or encourage an extra girl.

(As in, two questions/Encouragements per commenter, not 2 questions per girl. Gotta keep it remotely under control for now)

 

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