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On 8/27/2018 at 10:47 PM, Melificentfan said:

That was very good 

Thank you! That warms my insecure heart ...

On 8/27/2018 at 11:33 PM, wedgeantilles said:

Great story, I enjoyed reading it a lot.

And it would be great to read the second chapter, I am very curious how it will continue!

Thank you! Glad to know you liked it! I will try to have the next chapter up this weekend.

On 8/28/2018 at 2:52 AM, Kauen-Stadt said:

Can you make one where she *enjoys* holding her pee? And the almost masturbation-like feeling it creates when one puts their hand into their crotch?

Thanks for the suggestion! I'm honestly not sure if I will be able to incorporate this in to the story, but I'll keep it in mind!

On 8/29/2018 at 7:57 AM, Weasel said:

Nicely done! I don't feel this is all that incomplete -- although you could have done a little more with her finally getting to go (maybe waiting for a bathroom to be free, or having to really fight to get her jeans down). Other than that, it's a good, quite realistic story. Welcome to the story-writers' club!

Thank you for the welcome! :) I do intend to make her wait longer. She's still dreaming of relief, but * evil cackle *  ... 

On 8/29/2018 at 5:40 PM, RedFish3000 said:

Great story! I really enjoyed it. I'd definitely like to read another chapter of this. Keep on the good work.

Thank you! Feedback motivates me a lot :) I'll have the next chapter up this weekend. Hopefully. :)

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Here's the next chapter, earlier than I expected to be able to! I hope you guys like it. Please do leave some feedback

On 8/27/2018 at 8:29 PM, Mickey said:

Ah, the pleasures of the porcelain throne!

She was so looking forward to those pleasures. Which is why it was a rude shock to hear their receptionist call out 'There you are Mary! Your candidate's been waiting for you!' Mary was jolted awake from her dreams of relief, to see a girl of about 20 looking at her, with hands extended. 
Alice. 
The kid she was supposed to interview for an internship. 
At 2:30. 
And she was already late. 

Damn. If only she had used the lobby restrooms! No way can she ask this kid to wait while she goes to pee - she's an adult, a professional, for chrissake! Her bladder protested with a spasm, and she clenched her muscles for all its worth to keep back the flood. Unfortunately, she inadvertently clenched Alice's hand too tightly and the girl looked pained. Damn, get a grip Mary she chided herself.

Embarrassed, she immediately let go (her hands, not her spinchter. Much to her bladder's chargain) and asked Alice to follow her to a conference room. She settled down in to a chair quickly, and squirmed around a little trying to find a comfortable position, while Alice settled down on the opposite side. Luckily her entire lower body was hidden by the big desk, so she gave her crotch another quick squeeze, took a deep breath and started the questions. She'll just finish the interview quickly and then, finally, finally, she'll be relieved.

But Alice was good, and there was a lot to discuss. 15minutes in Mary's bladder started throbbing. While Alice was white boarding an idea, she very gently massaged her stomach, hoping to relieve the throbbing. It did not help. Her bladder felt hard underneath her palms, and she could swear it felt like it was poking out from her slim body. She shuffled forward on her chair, sitting on the edge. That put some pressure against her aching muscles, and made it a little more bearable. As Alice turned back, Mary was able to face her with some degree of composure and continue the conversation.

10min later, sitting at the edge of her chair was no longer of any help. She was constantly crossing and recrossing her legs and jiggling them around in the elusive search for relief. She'll never complain about the unseemly huge desks, she promised herself, as she used its cover to push her fingers directly against her pee-hole, or as near as her tight jeans would allow. She was sorely tempted to pop a button to give her bladder room to expand, but didn't dare. The interview was taking her mind off her agony though, so that was a win.

Another 10min later, her hand was permanently at her crotch. Her spinchter was in agony, and her bladder was rock hard. She knew she had to end this interview, or she would pee herself in front of Alice. In a strange way, she almost found the pressure arousing - her fingers massaging her down there, the force on her spinchter, the rub of jeans against her labia. But she was in too much agony, and continuing the interview while simultaneously keeping the flood in check was taking all her concentration. She gave herself a good rub as she brought the interview to a close.

Soon, very soon, she promised her overworked bladder. As she stood up, she almost lost a few drops, but managed to regain control and miraculously keep her panties dry inspite of the overwhelming urge to just let go.

"Well, it was really good talking to you Alice. We'll get back to you soon. Let me show you out"
"Thanks Mary! Would you mind pointing me towards the rest rooms please? I've a rather long drive" Alice responded nervously.

Mary's bladder sent another spasm. She had to abruptly cross her legs and bend forward to contain it. Oh, how badly she wanted to just sit on a toilet and let it flood out! "Sure thing. Follow me!" she managed to respond in a rather strained voice, as she started walking towards the rest room. Unfortunately for her, they were at the other end of the office - but with a tremendous force of will she managed to walk normally towards them.

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She pointed Alice towards the ladies room and motioned for her to go in the door first. Even though she was desperate, professionalism (and pride; and her natural shyness) made her loath to show any sign of needing a pee. Barging in first would have definitely given the game away! And there are 3 stalls inside, so not like relief is far away.

Mary's heart dropped (along with the first few drops from her bladder) as soon as she entered the washroom. There was a frigging queue! Apparently all the women in the office had needed to go at once. All the stalls were in use, and there were 4 women waiting around the spacious restroom. Oh gosh, why hadn't the designer added more stalls rather than keeping all this space empty, Mary wondered in dismay.

Mary managed to contain the leak to a few drops, but she knew her lacy panties wouldn't hide much more. See, she had plans to meet up with Josh, her boyfriend, after work. They were planning to go grab a bite to eat and then drive to the beach outside town. Enjoy a nice relaxed dinner date on the reasonably isolated beach, and then go to his place for the weekend. Hence the lacy panties, which might now prove to be her undoing. The thought of the beach and water caused a few more drops to leak out of her bladder, and she involuntarily crossed her legs.

"Oh damn all these long meetings" Mary heard someone behind her. It was Megan, one of Mary's team mates. "My bladder's about ready to pop". Yeah, just like Megan to be brash, Mary thought, blushing. She heard a toilet flushing, and that made her predicament worse. She pressed her thighs close together, twisting her legs in to pretzels to keep from leaking more. Being this close to relief, hearing the flush and the taps, it was pure torture for her poor bladder. 

Suddenly her smart watch beeped on her wrist. "What was that?" Megan asked. 
"Oh, I have a call with a client in 5mins. That was the reminder. I totally forgot about it! I can't afford to be late", Mary responded in a somewhat panicked voice.
"Oh dear! Well if you're as desperate as I am you should probably ask to cut the line. Or use the men's room. They never have a queue"
"Oh, no, I'm fine. I was just here to escort Alice actually - she came in for an interview" Mary started blubbering without even thinking about it. She couldn't believe Megan was actually talking to her about such private needs, and had automatically started the response before her conscious mind caught up.
Megan gave a doubtful look at Mary's crossed legs, but shrugged. "Well, in that case I can see Alice out! Don't you worry about it"
"Are you ssure?" Alice asked, voice quivering from the sheer effort of not breaking in to a pee-pee dance. A woman was releasing one hell of a gusher in the nearest stall. Her bladder throbbed in sympathy and she lost a few more drops, though she was pressing her thighs together for dear life.
"Of course! Alice, is that all right for you?"
Of course Alice agreed. Mary had no choice but to give up her position in the queue, and shuffle back to the conference room pretending like nothing was wrong.

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On 8/31/2018 at 11:04 PM, Melificentfan said:

That was excellent I'm loving this

Thank you! Glad to know you're enjoying it :)

On 9/1/2018 at 12:22 AM, jimpix123 said:

This is so fucking good bro we need a conclusion tho asap I'm dying haha

Thanks! I thought I'll post two more chapters, but combined them in to one long one. So not much longer to wait ;)

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Very nice. A sequel would be appreciated 'though I'm personally not into male desperation and I'd enjoy something on e.g. Mary's idea to experiment with holding it more than something about her boyfriend getting desperate, but that's just me.

As for feedback, I think a little more detail on what her desperation makes a person feel, e.g. a pulsing bladder, a burning peehole etc. could improve your writing further, but really, this was great already.

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On 9/4/2018 at 7:26 PM, Melificentfan said:

That was excellent 

Thank you! I really appreciated your prompt comment on each installment - it has encouraged me to write a sequel ?

On 9/4/2018 at 10:01 PM, ola93 said:

Very nice. A sequel would be appreciated 'though I'm personally not into male desperation and I'd enjoy something on e.g. Mary's idea to experiment with holding it more than something about her boyfriend getting desperate, but that's just me.

As for feedback, I think a little more detail on what her desperation makes a person feel, e.g. a pulsing bladder, a burning peehole etc. could improve your writing further, but really, this was great already.

Thank you for the suggestion - will keep in mind in the next story.

On 9/17/2018 at 3:52 AM, Bangarang said:

The desperate boyfriend is a great idea! I wonder how she will react to it, will she be encouraging, teasing....only you know for now!

Thank you for saying so ? I have started writing a sequel, will post something by the weekend.

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Also, for the next part, I am trying to work in both a desperate boyfriend, and Mary growing in to her kink. May be holding her own pee to encourage her boyfriend? 

I don't know how it will work out - but I really want to write a multi-view point story, so might as well as try and hope you'll enjoy it!

 

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On 9/21/2018 at 11:20 PM, luckymon2 said:

Hey you did an amazing job with this! I'm actually really picky with omo stories but you're style really did it for me! You're a great writer and I love the length of the story as well because I love prolonged desperation. Can't wait for the sequel and more of your stories!!

Thank you for letting me know you liked it ?I was afraid the length might turn people off - glad to know the prolonged desperation worked for you! The first part (or may be better to call it a teaser?) of the sequel is now up here! Let me know your feedback on that ...

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