Bulge_Lover 1,909 Posted July 10, 2018 Popular Post Share Posted July 10, 2018 (edited) Hello, readers. Thank you so much for reading my work. Most of you probably know about the original version of this story since it was on or near the front page for ages. It is the longest Omorashi story I’ve ever written, and I never intended for it to become that. It was originally supposed to be a series of short stories in a much simpler location, but once I wrote the first of said stories, I realized how much potential something like this had and I decided to go big with Desperation Dungeon. In this Remastered Edition, you will find: 1: Proper formatting. 2: Fixed typos, errors, and continuity. (Cheers is in Boston, for fuck's sake.) 3: Many repetitive words replaced with more unique ones. 4: A slightly-changed story, fixing what I consider to be bad writing and bad choices. 5: Two .PDF files, containing the following versions of Desperation Dungeon: 5A: A version with Size 12 text, meant to be read on a PC or (very) large tablet. 5B: A version with Size 18 text, meant to be read on a smartphone or smaller tablet. You will find both versions attached to the bottom of this post. I do apologize for not simply posting this as a normal thread rather than a download. Refuckulating it for OmoOrg's crappy formatting would take absolute ages, and I would very likely miss a bunch of spaces or italics, rendering it even more messy than the original version. All stories I write after this will both be posted here normally, as well as include .PDF files, so people can read them however they like. I will also state that this version will be the one that is considered “canon,” so if you are one of the few readers who actually care about the characters and the story, this is the one that you'll want to remember for when I decide to continue it. I will also say that I will never again post a story in parts. Finishing this was a nightmare, despite how much I love it. Everything I upload from this point on will be completely finished. For new readers, I truly hope you enjoy this novel-length story. It contains a couple hundred pages of extreme and consensual female desperation, an actual story with wonderful characters, bulging bladders, lesbian sex, and tons of intimacy and love. For female readers, it's written with great respect for women and with a full understanding of women's anatomy. I really did put my all into it. For returning readers, I'm just super happy that I wrote something that you find worth rereading. Again, thank you all. -B.L. Desperation Dungeon Remastered.pdf DD for Smartphones.pdf Edited July 10, 2018 by Bulge_Lover (see edit history) FilthyPhoenix, LOLC2k, Anubis and 19 others 22 Quote Link to comment
Leaky Bunnie 268 Posted July 10, 2018 Share Posted July 10, 2018 I have always wanted to read this but it seemed like such an intimating length for smut. I'm going to have to now though! I'm in love with your writing and look forward to finally finishing your longest work! ❤️ Bulge_Lover and Anubis 2 Quote Link to comment
LOLC2k 211 Posted July 10, 2018 Share Posted July 10, 2018 Awesome, can't wait to read this. Definitely my favorite story on here, though most of yours are near my favorite or my favorite. Bulge_Lover 1 Quote Link to comment
Anubis 714 Posted July 10, 2018 Share Posted July 10, 2018 Thank you for sharing this! I can't wait to read the final product in its entirety. I thought the original was good back when I first started to read it, so I can't wait to see how much has been improved. Given the formatting issues on this site, there is nothing to apologize for. It's better to share it as a download, in my opinion. This gives me the idea of doing something similar with my "Assistant" story, one of these days. It's broken up into two threads, with a few mistakes here and there that were missed throughout. It would be nice to finish the story and improve on the whole thing overall, before sharing the finished product. Thank you very much for this. It's awesome that you took the time to produce two versions that can be read on both the PC and the Smartphone. Bulge_Lover 1 Quote Link to comment
Sake 340 Posted July 10, 2018 Share Posted July 10, 2018 No, I refuse to believe something this good can exist. Bulge_Lover 1 Quote Link to comment
randomkath 349 Posted July 10, 2018 Share Posted July 10, 2018 40 minutes ago, Sake said: No, I refuse to believe something this good can exist. Amen, brother. Bulge_Lover 1 Quote Link to comment
kenn 49 Posted July 10, 2018 Share Posted July 10, 2018 YOU ARE A SAINT (or at least as close to that as one gets in a place like this) This is without a doubt one of the best omo stories I have ever read, and quite possibly THE best (but I don't like to play favorites :P) and now it's all compiled into one file for easy access? THANK YOU And for anyone who hasn't read this story.. you really should! It's long but stays interesting, and individual chapters are satisfying enough to close out a reading session. 11/10, would recommend. Bulge_Lover 1 Quote Link to comment
mike5666 1 Posted July 11, 2018 Share Posted July 11, 2018 Thanks for writing such an amazing story Bulge_Lover 1 Quote Link to comment
Zedd3 5 Posted July 11, 2018 Share Posted July 11, 2018 Thanks for your work, BL, this is the best story I have read. Unfortunately, I'm getting an OmoOrg is over-capacity error when trying to download attachments. I'm not sure if posting here makes me enough of an active member to be able to download it. Is it possible to upload this somewhere else? Alternatively, have you given any more thought into publishing it somewhere where we can download it for a few dollars (Amazon maybe)? On an unrelated note, do you have any more information to share about the other project you alluded to in your original post? Bulge_Lover 1 Quote Link to comment
Sake 340 Posted July 11, 2018 Share Posted July 11, 2018 6 hours ago, Zedd3 said: Unfortunately, I'm getting an OmoOrg is over-capacity error when trying to download attachments. I'm not sure if posting here makes me enough of an active member to be able to download it. Just make a few posts here and there, it's fairly easy to get out of being introductory. Bulge_Lover 1 Quote Link to comment
Anubis 714 Posted July 12, 2018 Share Posted July 12, 2018 10 hours ago, Zedd3 said: I'm not sure if posting here makes me enough of an active member to be able to download it. I think you need to have 10 posts first. Once you've done that, you will be a regular member and will have less account restrictions. Bulge_Lover 1 Quote Link to comment
Bulge_Lover 1,909 Posted July 12, 2018 Author Share Posted July 12, 2018 (edited) 12 hours ago, Zedd3 said: Thanks for your work, BL, this is the best story I have read. Unfortunately, I'm getting an OmoOrg is over-capacity error when trying to download attachments. I'm not sure if posting here makes me enough of an active member to be able to download it. Is it possible to upload this somewhere else? Alternatively, have you given any more thought into publishing it somewhere where we can download it for a few dollars (Amazon maybe)? On an unrelated note, do you have any more information to share about the other project you alluded to in your original post? PM'd you the files. As for the other project, don't expect it SOON, but I am actually working on it now. The website I was originally creating it on shut down so I had to transfer it to a program on my PC which I'm still learning how to use. Now that I've properly finished Dungeon though, (or at least the first part of it,) I'll be working on that a good bit more. Edited July 12, 2018 by Bulge_Lover (see edit history) Quote Link to comment
Guest JTeam_ Posted July 12, 2018 Share Posted July 12, 2018 Mmph... I've been watching since the second part, and dang... what a fest. You owe me new noseplugs! Quote Link to comment
AngelNim 79 Posted July 19, 2018 Share Posted July 19, 2018 Thank you so much for this amazing story! I've been reading since the first post and I can't wait to check out this version. What a ride it's been! Bulge_Lover 1 Quote Link to comment
Tensione 8 Posted September 25, 2018 Share Posted September 25, 2018 This is great, I can’t wait to see what you’ve tweaked. This is easily one of my favorite desperation stories I’ve ever come across, your writing is great, and the way you write women’s desperation and sex between two women is better than a lot of stuff I’ve read by actual lesbians! I don’t think I’m ever gonna get bored of this! Quote Link to comment
omolover97 12 Posted December 8, 2018 Share Posted December 8, 2018 Well while I wait to be able to download content for now I comment. I can't wait to download so I can read it again ? a great story that I absolutely adored Quote Link to comment
gottagogoblin 2 Posted January 2, 2019 Share Posted January 2, 2019 i made an account on this forum just so i could comment and say how much i love this story. i come back to it again and again. it is so hot, and so well written, and so GOOD!!! Quote Link to comment
Livewire101 2 Posted February 24, 2019 Share Posted February 24, 2019 Great story, shame I have to wait to download it Quote Link to comment
RagingPython 241 Posted March 3, 2019 Share Posted March 3, 2019 JESUS CHRIST 170 PAGES WHAT THE FUCK 10/10. If you have the talent and patient to write 170-page stories you should porbsblg be using it for something other than this. But it’s up to you. I’d be trying to write a proper novel though if I could write that much. Quote Link to comment
Bulge_Lover 1,909 Posted March 3, 2019 Author Share Posted March 3, 2019 4 hours ago, RagingPython said: JESUS CHRIST 170 PAGES WHAT THE FUCK 10/10. If you have the talent and patient to write 170-page stories you should porbsblg be using it for something other than this. But it’s up to you. I’d be trying to write a proper novel though if I could write that much. Well I am a writer in "real life" so I do use said talent for other things. Omo will always be my biggest passion though and I love writing massive and really good stories about it. I know it'll never get me C A S H M O N E Y but it's definitely my favorite writing subject. Quote Link to comment
Anubis 714 Posted March 3, 2019 Share Posted March 3, 2019 39 minutes ago, Bulge_Lover said: I know it'll never get me C A S H M O N E Y but it's definitely my favorite writing subject. That is quite unfortunate. If you were to ever be able to make money by publishing omo novels, that would be cool as fuck. I would be buying them for sure. Quote Link to comment
RagingPython 241 Posted March 3, 2019 Share Posted March 3, 2019 5 hours ago, Bulge_Lover said: Well I am a writer in "real life" so I do use said talent for other things. Omo will always be my biggest passion though and I love writing massive and really good stories about it. I know it'll never get me C A S H M O N E Y but it's definitely my favorite writing subject. Good for you! You should make use of skills like that if you have them. I can understand why’d you’d want to return to omo however. 4 hours ago, Anubis said: That is quite unfortunate. If you were to ever be able to make money by publishing omo novels, that would be cool as fuck. I would be buying them for sure. I wouldn’t buy them, but it’d be kinda cool. Quote Link to comment
Golden Queen 242 Posted March 4, 2019 Share Posted March 4, 2019 I am very excited to read this! Your stories are very well exectuted, and the plot is fantastic. Quote Link to comment
Bulge_Lover 1,909 Posted June 10, 2019 Author Share Posted June 10, 2019 On 7/10/2018 at 7:44 AM, Lapiiss said: I have always wanted to read this but it seemed like such an intimating length for smut. I'm going to have to now though! I'm in love with your writing and look forward to finally finishing your longest work! ❤️ Sorry to necro a thread but I'm curious, did you ever get around to reading this? I'd love to hear your thoughts on it. Quote Link to comment
chriswonggg1 0 Posted July 23, 2019 Share Posted July 23, 2019 Thanks so much for the story, one of my favourites! Quote Link to comment
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