hfgghfh 43 Posted August 22, 2018 Share Posted August 22, 2018 1 hour ago, Phentaiee said: any advice to advance the plot with the relationship? maybe we should take it easy on Emily and make Olivia a pansexual... Quote Link to comment
Phentaiee 1,203 Posted August 26, 2018 Author Share Posted August 26, 2018 At the pond, the girls noticed that the water was really clear. If they didn’t know better, they would’ve thought they had stumbled across some sort of resort. How ironic would that be though? They had been living in a burnt house with little to eat and almost died, when there was a fancy resort less than a mile away from them? Obviously, though, the lake was just really clear for some reason. “How is this lake so clear?” Olivia asked, very appropriately. “Either something is inaccurate with the code, or something is special about this water.” Emily answered. “Should we drink it? It looks really fresh.” Olivia noticed. “I don’t know… it’s still pond water.” Emily replied. “When it comes to survival, you should take anything. I say we drink it.” Olivia decided. Emily watched as Olivia bent over to drink the water from the pond. She was getting a very good angle and felt bad for looking, but not bad enough to stop looking. “I-It’s fresh!” Olivia declared. “Really?” Emily asked. She took a sip. “Well, let’s go get the empty bottles then, I guess.” Emily said. The girls walked home, then realized that Emily had the bottles in her inventory the whole time anyway, and they both walked back. Emily was starting to need to pee, and bending over while filling bottles with water wasn’t helping. She managed to hold it, for a little while. While they were walking back, Emily was planning a way to secretly release somewhere without having to tell Olivia, but thinking about peeing made her bladder hurt. She grabbed herself in desperation, and Olivia noticed. “E-Emily, are you ok?” Olivia asked. “Y-Yes, j-just a cramp.” Emily lied. “Are you sure? It looked like something else.” Olivia said. “Y-yes I’m fine.” Emily said. Emily felt another wave of desperation hit her and she forced herself to not grab herself. When they got home, Emily was bursting. She couldn’t hold it for much longer. “Hey Emily? I kinda have to pee, can I go behind the house?” Olivia asked. “Y-yes!” Emily said. Olivia walked off and Emily let herself go. While she was peeing, she realized that she could’ve just asked Olivia to pee, and she probably wouldn’t have said anything about it. Part of her wondered why she was so against peeing in front of Olivia anyway, but it made sense that she wouldn’t. The girls had plenty of food and water now, but they still weren’t safe. Sleeping outside is dangerous and cold, and sleeping inside is warm, but more dangerous. They are still going to sleep outside for now, but need better shelter. Should they Try to put up supports in the house Try to build a small room for them to sleep in “outside” Try to dig a hole underground and block it off with something to sleep there Better idea? Mistress26 and Papergami 2 Quote Link to comment
Melificentfan 1,215 Posted August 27, 2018 ✨ Legendary Member Share Posted August 27, 2018 2 Quote Link to comment
Nikeryda 181 Posted August 27, 2018 Share Posted August 27, 2018 3 if they can actually manage to do it. Maybe if they find a cave or something to modify. If that fails then 2. Quote Link to comment
Anubis 714 Posted August 27, 2018 Share Posted August 27, 2018 7 hours ago, Phentaiee said: She was getting a very good angle and felt bad for looking, but not bad enough to stop looking. I can't say I blame her, it's a very good angle indeed! *suddenly remembers that he came here to vote* Uh, I vote for option 2! Emily and Olivia should build themselves a shelter outside, since the house is just not safe. Even trying to support it sounds like a bad idea because the burned remains are too weak to attach to anything. Whatever they use to hold it up might just break through, if the house starts to cave in. There is also the danger of their makeshift supports falling on them in the process. Quote Link to comment
hfgghfh 43 Posted August 27, 2018 Share Posted August 27, 2018 Lol! 69 amirite? anyway, i vote to build some shelter Quote Link to comment
TotallyNotAlic 20 Posted August 27, 2018 Share Posted August 27, 2018 2 and see if anything can be salvaged from the collapsed house in terms of materials. The wood might be shot, but nails, bolts or even pipes could help them build a safe structure. Quote Link to comment
AkenoSama 440 Posted August 27, 2018 Share Posted August 27, 2018 (edited) 2.....a underground build can flood Edited August 27, 2018 by AkenoSama (see edit history) Quote Link to comment
Bombality 2,907 Posted August 27, 2018 Share Posted August 27, 2018 4 hours ago, OmoNinja said: Lol! 69 amirite? anyway, i vote to build some shelter I think you mean sixtynice ? I vote 3 that what I always do on my first minecraft. Quote Link to comment
Phentaiee 1,203 Posted August 27, 2018 Author Share Posted August 27, 2018 (edited) 5 hours ago, Bombality said: I vote 3 that what I always do on my first minecraft. If you guys keep comparing this to Minecraft then I’ll make a brand new interactive Minecraft omorashi story just for you 5 hours ago, Bombality said: I think you mean sixtynice ? 9 hours ago, OmoNinja said: Lol! 69 amirite? I’m glad people notcied Also, one more thing! (The replies were merged but this is three different messages) I want to know what my general audience prefers. Normal desperation, or extreme desperation? Normal would be how it’s been, but extreme could take their bladders to unrealistic, very full proportions. Edited August 27, 2018 by Phentaiee Last part was worded incorrectly (see edit history) Quote Link to comment
Bombality 2,907 Posted August 27, 2018 Share Posted August 27, 2018 2 hours ago, Phentaiee said: If you guys keep comparing this to Minecraft then I’ll make a brand new interactive Minecraft omorashi story just for you I want to know what my general audience prefers. Normal desperation, or extreme desperation? Normal would be how it’s been, but extreme could take their bladders to unrealistic, very full proportions. I this a voting thing?, because then I vote no on the minecraft interactive (and sorry for mentioning it, I'll stop ) but yes on the extreme desperation one. Quote Link to comment
Phentaiee 1,203 Posted August 28, 2018 Author Share Posted August 28, 2018 3 hours ago, Bombality said: I this a voting thing?, because then I vote no on the minecraft interactive The Minecraft interactive was a complete joke, and you don’t have to stop mentioning it, it’s pretty funny Quote Link to comment
Bombality 2,907 Posted August 28, 2018 Share Posted August 28, 2018 (edited) 3 hours ago, Phentaiee said: The Minecraft interactive was a complete joke, and you don’t have to stop mentioning it, it’s pretty funny Hmm... it's so weird that someone like me who likes to joke a lot can't identify when other people are. Will we be able to vote about going with extreme or normal desperation or was that a joke too? Edited August 28, 2018 by Bombality (see edit history) Quote Link to comment
AkenoSama 440 Posted August 28, 2018 Share Posted August 28, 2018 9 hours ago, Phentaiee said: Normal desperation, or extreme desperation? Look at her face, she is already holding a lot, and you want make she hold even more?!?! I love de idea hahahag extreme os my vote. Quote Link to comment
TotallyNotAlic 20 Posted August 28, 2018 Share Posted August 28, 2018 I’d vote for extreme desperation, would that include going past 100%? Lumiere 1 Quote Link to comment
Nikeryda 181 Posted August 28, 2018 Share Posted August 28, 2018 I think that the current level of desperation the characters are experiencing is good. I wouldn't like if it was too extreme for the entire story because then it just becomes boring. I prefer things to be a little more random. Maybe they get into a situation that requires them to hold a long time and maybe they get into one that forces them to pee without the audience saying anything. Quote Link to comment
hfgghfh 43 Posted August 28, 2018 Share Posted August 28, 2018 4 hours ago, Phentaiee said: The Minecraft interactive was a complete joke, and you don’t have to stop mentioning it, it’s pretty funny Aw... 10 hours ago, Phentaiee said: I want to know what my general audience prefers. Normal desperation, or extreme desperation? Normal would be how it’s been, but extreme could take their bladders to unrealistic, very full proportions. Anubis 1 Quote Link to comment
Potty-Polly 128 Posted August 28, 2018 Share Posted August 28, 2018 2, but maybe they only find enough material for the one room so they still have to spoon eachother Phentaiee 1 Quote Link to comment
hfgghfh 43 Posted August 28, 2018 Share Posted August 28, 2018 15 minutes ago, Potty-Polly said: 2, but maybe they only find enough material for the one room so they still have to spoon eachother Lol! Quote Link to comment
AkenoSama 440 Posted August 28, 2018 Share Posted August 28, 2018 9 hours ago, Nikeryda said: I think that the current level of desperation the characters are experiencing is good. I wouldn't like if it was too extreme for the entire story because then it just becomes boring. I prefer things to be a little more random. Maybe they get into a situation that requires them to hold a long time and maybe they get into one that forces them to pee without the audience saying anything. Yeah, look good.... That extreme holds when they hold for days is good, only in the first lines Quote Link to comment
Phentaiee 1,203 Posted August 29, 2018 Author Share Posted August 29, 2018 21 hours ago, Bombality said: Will we be able to vote about going with extreme or normal desperation or was that a joke too? That part was serious, I do want votes for that Quote Link to comment
Random Dude 3 Posted September 1, 2018 Share Posted September 1, 2018 On 8/27/2018 at 9:31 PM, Phentaiee said: If you guys keep comparing this to Minecraft then I’ll make a brand new interactive Minecraft omorashi story just for you I’m glad people notcied Also, one more thing! (The replies were merged but this is three different messages) I want to know what my general audience prefers. Normal desperation, or extreme desperation? Normal would be how it’s been, but extreme could take their bladders to unrealistic, very full proportions. Id preffer extreme desesperation. Quote Link to comment
Anubis 714 Posted September 4, 2018 Share Posted September 4, 2018 On 8/28/2018 at 2:55 AM, TotallyNotAlic said: I am in agreement with this. Quote Link to comment
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