Anubis 714 Posted July 17, 2018 Share Posted July 17, 2018 Another great chapter @Phentaiee! It was totally worth waiting a couple days longer to have the pictures, IMO. Anyway, I vote for 3. Poor Olivia is already so freaked out, that we don't want to make it any worse for her, if we don't have to. Phentaiee 1 Quote Link to comment
OmoLem 8 Posted July 17, 2018 Share Posted July 17, 2018 (edited) 3 Edited July 17, 2018 by OmoLem (see edit history) Quote Link to comment
Potty-Polly 128 Posted July 17, 2018 Share Posted July 17, 2018 (edited) 3 p.s love the story and artwork Edited July 17, 2018 by Potty-Polly (see edit history) Phentaiee 1 Quote Link to comment
Maia 360 Posted July 17, 2018 Share Posted July 17, 2018 (edited) Well, we wouldn't want to make Olivia weirded out, would we? So I suggest we just hold it in for now Edited July 17, 2018 by ev99ev99ev99ev Typo (see edit history) Quote Link to comment
Phentaiee 1,203 Posted July 18, 2018 Author Share Posted July 18, 2018 Emily knew this was a lot to take in, and that she was uncomfortable with being naked, so Emily decided that she would just try her best to hold in her pee for now. “So, Emily, why are you so comfortable with being naked in front of someone else?” Olivia asked. “I can’t use my arms if I’m constantly covering myself up, so it’s easier to just accept the fact that I’m naked and live with it.” Emily said. She stood up, and closed her fists tightly to help her bladder. “I think I should prepare you to leave. Which piece of armor do you want?” Emily asked. “Wait, leave? I’m not leaving yet! I still have a ton of questions!” Olivia asked. “Olivia, I probably can’t answer any of those questions. I’ve only been here for two days.” Emily responded. Olivia panicked. “Ok, I’m kind of scared to go out there by myself. Can I stay here for a few days?” Olivia asked. Emily sighed. “We’ll see.” “You should probably get some sunscreen on.” Emily said, getting it out of her inventory. “B-but if I do that, I’d have to move my hands…” Olivia worried. “The only other alternative would be me putting the sunscreen on you. Would you want that?” Emily asked. “N-no…” Olivia said, blushing. “That’s what I thought. I’ll look away for a few minutes. If you want, I can even go behind some trees!” Emily suggested. “No, I want you to stay here.” Olivia said, grabbing the sunscreen. Emily was frustrated at all of her attempts at using the bathroom going to waste, but she turned around and let Olivia put sunscreen on. “Hey, uh… w-why is there so much sunscreen on your, uh, on your p-pussy?” Olivia asked. Emily’s face reddened. “I uhh… I-I had a little too much fun while rubbing the sunscreen in there…” Emily admitted, embarrassed. “Oh! I-I’m sorry I asked!” Olivia apologized. Emily really had to pee. She was having trouble holding it. Olivia was somehow still oblivious to that. “Hey Olivia, how about we search some houses to see if there’s any supplies in them?” Emily asked. “Oh ok!” Olivia replied. “Alright I’ll start here and you start-“ “Wait! No! Why do all of your ideas involve splitting up?!” Olivia asked. Emily’s bladder screamed at her to make a convincing argument. “B-because it’s more efficient if we search two houses at once rather than just one?” Emily said. Olivia frowned, but still needed some convincing. “Plus, if we search the same house then you won’t be any help since you’d have to cover yourself up!” Emily added. Olivia sighed. “Ok, we can split up.” Emily ran to her first house. She went into a corner, and started peeing. “Aaaahhhhhhh!” She moaned. “Oh wait one more thin- OH MY!” Olivia yelled as she walked in on Emily peeing. Emily turned bright red and turned to face Olivia, and stopped peeing. “O-Olivia! I, uh… I had to pee…” Emily said. Olivia stood there with her mouth and eyes wide open. “Was that why you kept trying to get away from me? You just wanted a private place to pee?” Olivia asked. “Yeah… sorry.” Emily said. “No, I’m sorry! I should’ve just let you do your business. I shouldn’t have been so clingy. I’m just… I’m just terrified about everything! I really glad someone else was here to support me rather than just starting alone. I’ll try to be more independent now.” Olivia said, as she put her hands to her sides. Emily wasn’t sure how to respond, but she definitely picked the wrong response. “C-cool…” Emily said, while still shocked at Olivia’s speech and actions. Olivia blushed and walked back to her first house. Emily turned around and finished peeing, then checked the house. Almost everything was burnt, and there was nothing of any use in the whole first floor. (She couldn’t go to the top floors because they would surely collapse) As she stepped into the second house, she realized she had a long day ahead of her. What should the girls find? (Or maybe they don’t find anything?) I did it! I finished this part in one day! Sorry if it feels rushed AkenoSama, Nikeryda, Anubis and 1 other 4 Quote Link to comment
Nikeryda 181 Posted July 18, 2018 Share Posted July 18, 2018 (edited) A really skimpy piece of armor maybe for Olivia or maybe just any armor that doesn't cover her bits. Some actual food and water would be nice too. Maybe another inventory slot too. That might be a little to much though. I really like Olivia's expression btw. Edited July 18, 2018 by Nikeryda (see edit history) Quote Link to comment
hfgghfh 43 Posted July 18, 2018 Share Posted July 18, 2018 Oh poor Olivia... maybe we could at least get a bra for her? Quote Link to comment
Potty-Polly 128 Posted July 18, 2018 Share Posted July 18, 2018 4 hours ago, Nikeryda said: A really skimpy piece of armor maybe for Olivia or maybe just any armor that doesn't cover her bits. Some actual food and water would be nice too. Maybe another inventory slot too. That might be a little to much though. I really like Olivia's expression btw. agreed Quote Link to comment
ashishgamer 209 Posted July 18, 2018 Share Posted July 18, 2018 How about a lightsaber? Phentaiee and Anubis 2 Quote Link to comment
hfgghfh 43 Posted July 18, 2018 Share Posted July 18, 2018 5 minutes ago, ashishgamer said: How about a lightsaber? XD Quote Link to comment
Bombality 2,907 Posted July 18, 2018 Share Posted July 18, 2018 (edited) So we can chose whatever we want? hmm, they find the triforce! Just kidding I agree that Olivia at least needs something to cover her partially maybe something like a partially burnt crop top Edited July 18, 2018 by Bombality (see edit history) Quote Link to comment
AkenoSama 440 Posted July 18, 2018 Share Posted July 18, 2018 Ohhhh man, poor Olívia ='( Look for the How house is the best and safe and camp ( Only me sugesting a cg with the scene when Oliva find Emily peeing?!! Lol ) Quote Link to comment
Axnar 23 Posted July 18, 2018 Share Posted July 18, 2018 Food and water is always important but perhaps a comfy place to sleep? Quote Link to comment
Maia 360 Posted July 18, 2018 Share Posted July 18, 2018 1 hour ago, Axnar said: Food and water is always important but perhaps a comfy place to sleep? I agree, they should find sleeping bags Quote Link to comment
Phentaiee 1,203 Posted July 19, 2018 Author Share Posted July 19, 2018 15 hours ago, ashishgamer said: How about a lightsaber? Well, obviously. Quote Link to comment
Bombality 2,907 Posted July 19, 2018 Share Posted July 19, 2018 (edited) Um... how do I delete a comment?, I just accidentally pressed "submit reply" on accident but actually have nothing to say Edited July 19, 2018 by Bombality (see edit history) Quote Link to comment
hfgghfh 43 Posted July 19, 2018 Share Posted July 19, 2018 3 hours ago, Bombality said: Um... how do I delete a comment?, I just accidentally pressed "submit reply" on accident but actually have nothing to say Unfortunately you can't, the mods REALLY need to implement that... Phentaiee and OmoLem 2 Quote Link to comment
ashishgamer 209 Posted July 19, 2018 Share Posted July 19, 2018 9 hours ago, Phentaiee said: Well, obviously. Is that a yes? Please tell me that means a yes ? Quote Link to comment
Anubis 714 Posted July 19, 2018 Share Posted July 19, 2018 (edited) 19 hours ago, Bombality said: Um... how do I delete a comment?, I just accidentally pressed "submit reply" on accident but actually have nothing to say 15 hours ago, OmoNinja said: Unfortunately you can't, the mods REALLY need to implement that... We used to be able to delete posts, but that doesn't seem to be available anymore. I'm not sure when that became the case. The good news is we can still hide posts: When you choose "Hide" from the options, then you will have to type in a reason for it and then it will be hidden (but not deleted). I'm not sure if it works for regular members though, since it might only be an option for Contributory members and above. If it's not available, then I'm not sure what you could do, aside from asking a moderator for help. @Phentaiee, for this, I think they should find some underwear for Olivia and some sleeping bags. They should be inside of a fireproof box of some sort, maybe in a basement of one of the houses, that is just stashed away, so the underwear and sleeping bags are not burned. Edited July 19, 2018 by Anubis (see edit history) OmoLem 1 Quote Link to comment
Phentaiee 1,203 Posted July 20, 2018 Author Share Posted July 20, 2018 3 hours ago, Anubis said: I'm not sure if it works for regular members though, since it might only be an option for Contributory members and above. If it's not available, then I'm not sure what you could do, aside from asking a moderator for help. What is a contributory member? Is it a paid thing or a populatity thing? Also guys I’m kind of an idiot because I had been writing the part for a few minutes before realizing that I had completely disregarded everything you guys said and took it in a completely different direction. don’t worry though I fixed it Quote Link to comment
Nikeryda 181 Posted July 20, 2018 Share Posted July 20, 2018 (edited) 1 hour ago, Phentaiee said: What is a contributory member? Is it a paid thing or a populatity thing? Also guys I’m kind of an idiot because I had been writing the part for a few minutes before realizing that I had completely disregarded everything you guys said and took it in a completely different direction. don’t worry though I fixed it I believe a contributory member is when someone gets enough upvotes and has a certain number of posts. I don't know the exact numbers though sorry. Edited July 20, 2018 by Nikeryda (see edit history) Quote Link to comment
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