WaityKaty 1,171 Posted May 23, 2018 Author Share Posted May 23, 2018 Who just realized that she didn't actually change the freaking title of this story to something plot appropriate? This girl. Whatever. ? You figure you can just go when you need to. You are at the end of an aisle so you aren't going to be putting anyone out. And waiting till the end of the movie is probably a bad idea. There will potentially be a line and you don't do well in lines when you really need to pee. Going mid-movie should be an easy stroll in and out. You settle back in your rigid chair and go ahead and polish off the rest of your drink. Fizzy and sweet. When the movie has been on for nearly an hour, and since your bladder is now officially bursting, you decide that it is a socially acceptable time to make a quick trip to the restrooms. Just before you get up Burke puts his face near a tank and one of the creatures suddenly slams against the inside wall of the tank. It's a pretty effective jump scare that you had completely forgotten was coming. You jump in your seat and to your horror your full bladder releases for a moment. Your crotch feels a distinct warmth before you regain control. Shit. That's not good. You look down but can't see anything in the near darkness. To go to the restroom immediately turn to page 2 To work out how much damage you've done to your pants before you get up turn to page 17 remos6, Anubis and DsGSilver 3 Quote Link to comment
remos6 22 Posted May 23, 2018 Share Posted May 23, 2018 Oops - this is bad. Better make a proper assessment of the situation before doing anything rash... *turns to page 17* Quote Link to comment
NerqTheMighty 77 Posted May 23, 2018 Share Posted May 23, 2018 Get to that restroom, pronto! Page 2. Quote Link to comment
Manowar 170 Posted May 23, 2018 Share Posted May 23, 2018 Oh no... not again... Shauna will never date with us again... lt is too late anyway so let us check how wet we are now. Turn page 17 Quote Link to comment
hfgghfh 43 Posted May 23, 2018 Share Posted May 23, 2018 10 minutes ago, Manowar said: Oh no... not again... Shauna will never date with us again... SNAP. OUT. OF. IT! It is NOT too late! We can still turn this around! let's check the damage first before we head to the bathroom Quote Link to comment
Pilly 52 Posted May 23, 2018 Share Posted May 23, 2018 Page 17 And maybe we should be honest with Shauna. She is nice, she will understand this, and maybe if we tell the problem now, she will even smile. Quote Link to comment
Anubis 714 Posted May 25, 2018 Share Posted May 25, 2018 *Turns to page 17* Since we've already leaked a bit, maybe it's enough to make it to the bathroom and check the damage beforehand. Quote Link to comment
WaityKaty 1,171 Posted May 30, 2018 Author Share Posted May 30, 2018 You carefully slide a hand underneath yourself without drawing Shauna's attention, hoping for the best. The seat is dry. So are the back of your pants. Thank goodness, the leak mustn't have been that bad. You certainly aren't going to sit around waiting for the next jump scare though. The bathroom isn't hard to find. Though it is fairly small and unisex. There is probably a queue before or after shows. But not now. You shut yourself in a stall, unzip, and pee for what feels like half an hour. It's such a relief you barely want to be finished. After you are done peeing you inspect your pants more thoroughly. Your underwear has a decent wet patch and the area around the zipper of your pants is a little damp. Though since you wore black it isn't at all visible. You know from experience that amount of wetness will dry out in about an hour. Phew. For a moment there you thought this date had gone spectacularly badly. You head back to the movie and enjoy the rest of it in comfort. More or less. By the end you have to pee again. Stupid giant drink! Why did you drink that much? "It never gets old does it?" Shauna talks to you about "Aliens" as the theater empties out into the lobby. You look toward the bathroom, people are heading that way but you should probably pee again. Just to be safe. Though Shauna might think that weird? Actually... why doesn't she need to pee? To pee before leaving the theater turn to page 7 To wait until later turn to page 13 remos6 1 Quote Link to comment
hfgghfh 43 Posted May 30, 2018 Share Posted May 30, 2018 3 hours ago, WaityKaty said: You look toward the bathroom, people are heading that way but you should probably pee again. Just to be safe. Though Shauna might think that weird? Why would she think that's weird? let's go page 7 Quote Link to comment
Manowar 170 Posted May 30, 2018 Share Posted May 30, 2018 It couldn't be weird to go to the toilet. But still - there might be lots of people waiting in queue. If "something" happend - our embarrasement will be doubled. Let's wait... Turn page 13 Quote Link to comment
Melificentfan 1,215 Posted May 30, 2018 ✨ Legendary Member Share Posted May 30, 2018 *Turns to page 13* Quote Link to comment
Anubis 714 Posted May 30, 2018 Share Posted May 30, 2018 I imagine that if I choose page 7, then our character might get stuck waiting in a line, but if I choose 13, he will just be waiting in general. I think I'll go with possibly being stuck in the line. *Turns to page 7* Quote Link to comment
remos6 22 Posted May 30, 2018 Share Posted May 30, 2018 (edited) *Turns to page 7* I love the little titbits that suggest a depth beyond the bounds of this story - "You know from experience that amount of wetness will dry out in about an hour". Reminds me a bit of the "Less often than I've brought a tin of tuna. More often than I've bought a tin of snails." line from 'Felicity'. Edited May 30, 2018 by remos6 (see edit history) Quote Link to comment
hfgghfh 43 Posted May 30, 2018 Share Posted May 30, 2018 38 minutes ago, Anubis said: *Turns to page 7* 10 minutes ago, remos6 said: *Turns to page 7* Why is everybody copying Melificentfan all of a sudden? Come on guys! That was HER original idea! Quote Link to comment
Anubis 714 Posted May 30, 2018 Share Posted May 30, 2018 25 minutes ago, OmoNinja said: Why is everybody copying Melificentfan all of a sudden? Come on guys! That was HER original idea! Because... we want to be cool too! Quote Link to comment
hfgghfh 43 Posted May 30, 2018 Share Posted May 30, 2018 @Anubis you better stop copying her or i will LICK your pages! Anubis 1 Quote Link to comment
Anubis 714 Posted May 30, 2018 Share Posted May 30, 2018 Just now, OmoNinja said: @Anubis you better stop copying her or i will LICK your pages! *wrings the saliva out* BAM! Now I'm on page 7, whoo! Is that better? Quote Link to comment
NerqTheMighty 77 Posted May 30, 2018 Share Posted May 30, 2018 Execute Order Thirteen. Yes, my lord. It will be done. I AM the Senate. *Sigh* Yes, my lord. We are aware of that. Anubis 1 Quote Link to comment
hfgghfh 43 Posted May 30, 2018 Share Posted May 30, 2018 1 minute ago, NerqTheMighty said: Execute Order Thirteen. Lol! Star wars reference! XD Quote Link to comment
Pilly 52 Posted May 30, 2018 Share Posted May 30, 2018 Page 13 - Shauna has to go too, I think, so we will have to wait until she goes Quote Link to comment
WaityKaty 1,171 Posted June 13, 2018 Author Share Posted June 13, 2018 Sorry for taking ages guys. I’ve been a bit busy. :( I think 13 won... we’re going with that. You can just pee back at Shauna’s place. You wonder if she’ll invite you in. It’s still early, not even 9, but there are certain expectations when being invited in after a date. Not that you expect anything. This is barely even a date, really. You leave the cinema together and start to walk back to her house. The cold night air hits you like a mace. You instantly regret not peeing at the theatre. “Ugh!” Shauna complains, “I’m instantly regretting not peeing at the theatre!” ”Are you alright?” You ask. ”Mrmm.” She responds non commitially, “Do you mind if we stop at a bar on the way home? There’s a decent one about halfway I sometimes go to. Though not this late. I’m not really a bar girl, you know?” The school librarian doesn’t club? Not a shock. And you certainly don’t mind the opportunity to pee earlier than you had been expecting. The Red Baron was at one stage a German themed establishment, apparently, it seems pretty generic to you walking in. Generic but busy. ”If you’re going to the bar can you get me a glass of Malbec?” Shauna asks and bobs on the spot, “I’m off to the restroom real quick.” You do need to pee rather noticeably, you could probably just go now if you wanted, or get a drink (and Shauna’s) and pee later. To go to the bathroom now turn to page 5 To go to the bar turn to page 18 On 5/30/2018 at 6:09 PM, remos6 said: *Turns to page 7* I love the little titbits that suggest a depth beyond the bounds of this story - "You know from experience that amount of wetness will dry out in about an hour". Reminds me a bit of the "Less often than I've brought a tin of tuna. More often than I've bought a tin of snails." line from 'Felicity'. You know, I do actually plot out a fair bit of stuff that only makes it into the story in little asides like that. Or not at all. Iceberg theory and all that. :) And ‘Felicity’! Dang that one was a while ago. I never really worked out why people liked her, I wrote her as a woman I didn’t like much. :p I did like that line though! On 5/31/2018 at 1:47 AM, Pilly Christal said: Page 13 - Shauna has to go too, I think, so we will have to wait until she goes Uh huh. But good plan? *shrug* remos6 1 Quote Link to comment
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