hfgghfh 43 Posted May 14, 2018 Share Posted May 14, 2018 Urgh... The power of fan art... It's too strong to resist! Phentaiee 1 Quote Link to comment
Phentaiee 1,203 Posted May 15, 2018 Share Posted May 15, 2018 5 hours ago, OmoNinja said: Urgh... The power of fan art... It's too strong to resist! If we’re lucky, someone else will come in too and then we’ll have two different people doing drawings for this! That would be awesome! Quote Link to comment
hfgghfh 43 Posted May 15, 2018 Share Posted May 15, 2018 3 hours ago, Phentaiee said: If we’re lucky, someone else will come in too and then we’ll have two different people doing drawings for this! That would be awesome! Yeah! Just don't ask me to draw it... also on a completely unrelated note, how do I do that "hidden comments" thing? Quote Link to comment
hfgghfh 43 Posted May 15, 2018 Share Posted May 15, 2018 1 minute ago, Jeffery Mewtamer said: And here I am, completely immune to the power of fanart... Now, if some aspiring voice actress were to come along and narrate an audiobook of this story... My god! Make it like an anime! Quote Link to comment
Bees 217 Posted May 15, 2018 Author Share Posted May 15, 2018 3 hours ago, OmoNinja said: My god! Make it like an anime! I approve. OuO Quote Link to comment
PluggedUp_Full 35 Posted May 16, 2018 Share Posted May 16, 2018 I have an idea. Maybe the next room will have a challenge that require one or more girls to be cuffed and spreaded out, and be processed by a machine that torture her bladder horribly in various ways, or endure the torment of her two companions. Quote Link to comment
Phentaiee 1,203 Posted May 16, 2018 Share Posted May 16, 2018 11 hours ago, tmn loveblue said: I have an idea. Maybe the next room will have a challenge that require one or more girls to be cuffed and spreaded out, and be processed by a machine that torture her bladder horribly in various ways, or endure the torment of her two companions. These are all good ideas Quote Link to comment
Bees 217 Posted May 16, 2018 Author Share Posted May 16, 2018 (edited) (I'm sorry in advance, guys, I loved torturing Lauren's bursting bladder, but I felt like I had done all I could with it. Plus, it was getting so big I felt it was almost unrealistic to keep it going for too much longer anyhow. So, sorry in advance, the fanart distracted me and this is what I produced.) Lauren looked at the others. Lynn smiled at her. “I still think you can hold it.” She smiled. Lauren squirmed, but nodded slowly, as they went to the other side of the room. As the girls got the door open, using their combined effort, they all looked around the new room and realized it was a puzzle. About 20 minutes of puzzle solving later, and they moved onto the next room. They were making good time. In front of them were 5 glasses. The sign beside the table they were on read ‘5 drinks, 5 levels of diuretic. Choose wisely.’ After a few minutes of trying to choose, Lynn took the first glass and chugged it. Lola, being overly-bold, scoffed. “Heh, no way they put 5 levels of diuretic in these drinks. We’d see it if there was too much!” And with that, she reached over and grabbed 2, drinking them both down in an instant. Lauren, after seeing the two girls drinking, couldn’t take the pressure anymore. She reached down and tried pulling the plug out. After a few attempts, she got it! “Y-yes! Finally!” she moved over to an empty pot, as it started pouring out of her. “Heh… good job, Lauren,” Lynn smiled. “Enjoy the relief. You deserve it.” Lola chuckled. “Yeah, you did well.” After what seemed like way too long, her bladder was pretty much empty. She sighed happily as she turned to the others. “S-sorry about that… I felt like my bladder was going to tear… I had to.” “I understand,” Lynn said. “You did really well holding that much.” “Yeah,” Lola said, “You looked seriously pregnant!” Lauren picked a glass, but realized since Lola had taken 2 already, she didn’t need to drink any of them, so she put it back down and the 3 left into the next room. What’s in this next room? A. A group of catheters, and a few big bottles that need to be emptied! B. Another freezing room! C. A medical room, maybe with another chair, or a bed, where ‘experiments’ can be conducted. D. More stairs, but it leads into one of the others (specify please! ^_^) E. Other? (Specify please) You can pick up to 2. ^_^ And which ones did Lynn and Lola drink? From a single dose of diuretic, all the way through quintuple. ;3 Edited May 16, 2018 by Bees (see edit history) Quote Link to comment
Nikeryda 181 Posted May 16, 2018 Share Posted May 16, 2018 A, C Lynn drank a level 1 and Lola drank the 4 and 5 Quote Link to comment
NerqTheMighty 77 Posted May 17, 2018 Share Posted May 17, 2018 55 minutes ago, Nikeryda said: A, C Lynn drank a level 1 and Lola drank the 4 and 5 Same but not A. Quote Link to comment
SpaceWonderer 699 Posted May 17, 2018 Share Posted May 17, 2018 I will choose A for the first question. For second, Lynn got 4 and Lola got 3 and 5. Quote Link to comment
hfgghfh 43 Posted May 17, 2018 Share Posted May 17, 2018 (edited) The medical room sounds interesting... A and C please! and for the duretics, Lynn drank a 5 and Lola drank a 3 and 4 so hopefully both Lynn and Lola get desperate at the same time! Edited May 17, 2018 by OmoNinja (see edit history) Quote Link to comment
PluggedUp_Full 35 Posted May 17, 2018 Share Posted May 17, 2018 (edited) A and C. I suggest experiments that need catheters and water bottles to be performed. Lola drank 4+5. She gets desperate, but who will contain all her pee is another story. Edited May 17, 2018 by tmn loveblue Bonus idea. (see edit history) Quote Link to comment
Phentaiee 1,203 Posted May 17, 2018 Share Posted May 17, 2018 Yep. 19 hours ago, Nikeryda said: A, C Lynn drank a level 1 and Lola drank the 4 and 5 Quote Link to comment
Bees 217 Posted May 18, 2018 Author Share Posted May 18, 2018 (edited) In this next room was a chair, looking like the one Lauren got strapped to before, and there were a few implements to help bladders along. There were drinks, packets of diuretic, some huge bottles of some sort of clear liquid, and some catheters. There were a lot of options, but the instructions were clear… at least one of the bottles needed to be emptied. Lauren went over to the door and tried to open it, but with no success. “Yep, looks like they locked us in!” Lola smirked and cast a spell on the door… but after it did nothing, she sheepishly walked back over to the chair. “So, who’s getting in?” “No way am I doing it!” Lauren said. “I’d rather not go through that this soon after I last did it.” Lynn looked at Lola, who shook her head. “Nope! My body’s smaller than yours, and so is my bladder! It’s… under-developed!” “So you *are* a kid?” Lynn asked. “No!” she pouted. “Well, I can’t do it either,” Lynn said, “I’m worried about how much diuretic I took in. Plus, I seem to be the most focused one… no offense… so it’s better if I’m not bursting when we leave!” “Ooh…” Lola felt her diuretics starting to take effect. She wasn’t at a point where it was uncomfortable to hold, but she could tell she was going to regret her decision. So, who gets in the chair? A. Lauren. Her punishment for taking the plug out early. B. Lola. She hasn’t had a desperate moment yet, it’s only fair. C. Lynn. She’s the most full already, why not just make that worse? And, whoever’s in the chair, what should the girls do to her? A. Fill her up with the catheter. B. Make her drink. C. Fill her and then drink in front of her! D. Fill all of them up, not just her. E. Something else? Get creative here. :3 Bladder Fullness: Lynn: 35%^^ Lauren: 2% Lola: 12%^^^^^^^^^ (The arrows mean they're filling quickly, each arrow is a level of diuretic. Since Lynn had one already, her one added to it. Lola, as you can see, has 9, meaning she got the 5 and the 4. ;)) Edited May 18, 2018 by Bees (see edit history) Quote Link to comment
SpaceWonderer 699 Posted May 18, 2018 Share Posted May 18, 2018 A for the first one. A or C for second question. Quote Link to comment
hfgghfh 43 Posted May 18, 2018 Share Posted May 18, 2018 Let's put Lynn in the chair and use the catheter on her to even her up with Lola so hopefully we can have two-way desperation! (also if you see Lauren, tell her that I'm sorry and that I was only making her hold for fanart) Quote Link to comment
ola93 415 Posted May 18, 2018 Share Posted May 18, 2018 I'm voting for Lola as she will have to get used to being bursting given the amount of diuretics she had and the size of a bladder. I agree with combining A and C. Quote Link to comment
hfgghfh 43 Posted May 18, 2018 Share Posted May 18, 2018 1 minute ago, ola93 said: I'm voting for Lola as she will have to get used to being bursting given the amount of diuretics she had and the size of a bladder. I agree with combining A and C. C is pretty much A and itself anyway! Quote Link to comment
UnDefined_404 30 Posted May 19, 2018 Share Posted May 19, 2018 5 hours ago, ola93 said: I'm voting for Lola as she will have to get used to being bursting given the amount of diuretics she had and the size of a bladder. I agree with combining A and C. I agree Quote Link to comment
Phentaiee 1,203 Posted May 19, 2018 Share Posted May 19, 2018 How Lola goes in the chair, but the other girls drink before they fill her up with the catheter? Quote Link to comment
Bees 217 Posted May 21, 2018 Author Share Posted May 21, 2018 Lauren and Lynn had no trouble getting their smaller associate into the chair, where it strapped her in automatically. “What are you doing!?” Lola asked. They picked up a bottle each, as Lynn prepared the catheter. “Oh no!” Lola called out. “You’re not doing that to me!” she closed her legs, even crossing them, but Lauren held them open, making her pout a little. “Hmph…” After that, Lynn knelt down and looked at her. “Take a deep breath.” Lola did as she was told, and soon the catheter was inserted. Lola looked at Lynn as she attached the other end of the catheter to one of the bottles, quickly releasing it, letting the liquid flow into the smaller girl’s (presumably) smaller bladder. Lola, weirded out at first, was now squirming, trying to get it out, but it was no use. She sighed as she let it fill her up. As Lola’s bladder filled, she squirmed. Soon the bottle was empty, and they put in another one. She looked up at them, worried. One was more than enough, but she couldn’t handle two! Could she? As the small girl’s bladder filled past capacity, she gasped, crossing her legs tightly. As Lynn pulled out the catheter, Lola squirmed, trying to keep it all in. To add insult to injury, Lynn slowly poured herself a drink, letting it hit the glass from above. Lauren smirked and did the same, before the clinked glasses and started drinking. “Aah… s-s-stop!” Lola shook and shivered, her bladder feeling like it was on the verge of popping. However, even though she had never, ever been that full before, she wasn’t peeing. She wasn’t even leaking. She kept trying hard to keep it in, and surprisingly it worked. Lauren poured some water on the floor. Hearing and seeing it all happen made Lola gasp and shake. So, what happens now? Does Lola lose it, or does she manage to hold on? Does she try to hide how desperate she is? And, what else do the girls do? Do they let her go from the chair? Sorry there’s no multiple choice this time, I couldn’t really think of any. Bladder fullness: Lynn: 36%^ Lauren: 10% Lola: 115%!^^^^^^^^^ Quote Link to comment
Phentaiee 1,203 Posted May 21, 2018 Share Posted May 21, 2018 I’ve never been this early for anything. she holds on She tries to hide it (but fails miserably) and the girls let her from thr chair but plug her (if they have a plug) The door is open now, right? Quote Link to comment
Nikeryda 181 Posted May 21, 2018 Share Posted May 21, 2018 I vote for her losing control and peeing. Quote Link to comment
goldlatias 20 Posted May 21, 2018 Share Posted May 21, 2018 She manages to hold on She doesn't try to hide it The others let her up from the chair Quote Link to comment
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