hfgghfh 43 Posted April 16, 2018 Share Posted April 16, 2018 19 hours ago, Bees said: Also, how did I do with the wetting? I've never felt like I was very good at them, so I'm wondering now. And please be honest, I want to improve.) I know what you mean man... It isn't easy for me either, But anyway you still did good! Let's just explore more rooms for now... Quote Link to comment
Bees 217 Posted April 18, 2018 Author Share Posted April 18, 2018 Lynn smiled as the rat-wizard left. She decided to go exploring a little bit. She walked around for a while, checking out different rooms, seeing what buttons did, pressing some switches, and soon she was on the third floor. She looked around, but it didn’t do much good. It was completely dark. She did, however, soon find the switch and turned on the lights. This was… exactly like the first floor, in terms of design. Great, so that was a step down. As for the room design, she noticed a raised pedestal in the center of the room. It had a drink on it, saying ‘drink me’! What was this, Alice in Wonderland? Lynn sighed, realizing she probably had no choice but to drink this… right? Well, she walked to the door at the front of the room, trying to open it. She nodded when she realized it was locked. “Yep!” She sighed, walking back to the drink. What does she do? A: Drink it all down in one gulp! B: Drink it a little bit at a time. C: Pour it on the floor. She doesn’t have to drink it, right? D: Look around, see why she needs to drink it. Bladder fullness: 17% Quote Link to comment
Melificentfan 1,215 Posted April 18, 2018 ✨ Legendary Member Share Posted April 18, 2018 B Quote Link to comment
ola93 415 Posted April 18, 2018 Share Posted April 18, 2018 Let's just get this over with and continue our journey: a Quote Link to comment
Potty-Polly 128 Posted April 18, 2018 Share Posted April 18, 2018 D to get a grip on the surroundings then A Quote Link to comment
hfgghfh 43 Posted April 19, 2018 Share Posted April 19, 2018 If this is exactly like Alice in wonderland we probs shouldn't drink it... Quote Link to comment
Phentaiee 1,203 Posted April 20, 2018 Share Posted April 20, 2018 Hey, look at that. I made fanart. I can’t wait until we can get her to 200% Dealer and Nikeryda 2 Quote Link to comment
hfgghfh 43 Posted April 20, 2018 Share Posted April 20, 2018 14 minutes ago, Phentaiee said: Hey, look at that. I made fanart. I can’t wait until we can get her to 200% Jesus Christ! What kind of bulge is that? still, good fanart! Quote Link to comment
Bees 217 Posted April 20, 2018 Author Share Posted April 20, 2018 19 minutes ago, Phentaiee said: Hey, look at that. I made fanart. I can’t wait until we can get her to 200% Jeez... O.O I love that so much, thanks a lot! :D I'm honoured that anyone would make fanart of my story! c: I'll try to lead us in the direction of getting to 200%, since I'd love that too, but we'll have to see what the people pick. If we do, is more fanart going to come of it? :P Quote Link to comment
Wetboy94 1 Posted April 20, 2018 Share Posted April 20, 2018 59 minutes ago, Phentaiee said: Hey, look at that. I made fanart. I can’t wait until we can get her to 200% Looks good mate Quote Link to comment
Phentaiee 1,203 Posted April 20, 2018 Share Posted April 20, 2018 2 hours ago, Bees said: Jeez... O.O I love that so much, thanks a lot! :D I'm honoured that anyone would make fanart of my story! c: I'll try to lead us in the direction of getting to 200%, since I'd love that too, but we'll have to see what the people pick. If we do, is more fanart going to come of it? :P Hell yeah Quote Link to comment
Bees 217 Posted April 20, 2018 Author Share Posted April 20, 2018 (edited) Lynn decided she had no choice, and picked up the drink, looking around a bit, then chugged it. She downed the whole thing in one tremendous gulp. She then stopped and, realizing it had no effect and she just drank it for no reason, sighed. “Dammit…” Oh well. She had been thirsty anyway. However, she did notice that while it had no effect on her body, it did have an effect on the room. Once the glass was empty she heard a distinct 'click!' sound. She smiled as she realized that she had inadvertently unlocked the door! As Lynn opened the door to the next room, she saw something she didn’t expect. A person! Oh my god, an actual person! The other girl, also naked, gasped as she saw Lynn who, upon realizing she was naked in front of this girl, quickly covered herself with her hands. “Um… h-hello…” Lynn said, blushing. “Hey,” said the other girl… That’s right, BIG decision time! I decided (with the help of one of my readers – thanks BTW, you know who you are ?) to add another character, to help mix things up a bit, and make things not as stale! :P So, first, why don’t we choose an age for this other girl? (again, loli’s fine if you want.) Secondly, her hair colour/style. Eye colour? Skin colour? And, of course, we’ll need the girl’s name. c: Plus, we need to choose some stats for her. Same as for Lynn, she’ll have 30 points to spread among them. HP: Attack: Defense: Speed: Mana: Holding: And finally, how full is she when Lynn meets her? On a scale of 1-100 (or further beyond, if you feel so inclined :P), how full is her bladder? Is she bursting, or is she fine, or what? :D Sorry for the long string of questions, but I felt it was better to include you all in this decision. ? Edited April 20, 2018 by Bees (see edit history) Quote Link to comment
hfgghfh 43 Posted April 20, 2018 Share Posted April 20, 2018 44 minutes ago, Bees said: Lynn opened the door to the next room, Quote Link to comment
Bees 217 Posted April 20, 2018 Author Share Posted April 20, 2018 1 minute ago, NinjaGamer said: Right, this was a hallway. Well, there were a few doors she could've opened. :P sorry, I was tired when I wrote that. xP Quote Link to comment
hfgghfh 43 Posted April 20, 2018 Share Posted April 20, 2018 How could she open the door... if it was locked?! On 19 April 2018 at 7:02 AM, Bees said: she walked to the door at the front of the room, trying to open it. She nodded when she realized it was locked. Quote Link to comment
Bees 217 Posted April 20, 2018 Author Share Posted April 20, 2018 Just now, NinjaGamer said: How could she open the door... if it was locked?! :P Right. I had a thing for that, but I forgot to explain it. Fixing it now. Quote Link to comment
hfgghfh 43 Posted April 20, 2018 Share Posted April 20, 2018 Just now, Bees said: :P Right. I had a thing for that, but I forgot to explain it. Fixing it now. Please add that in your testimony... Quote Link to comment
Bees 217 Posted April 20, 2018 Author Share Posted April 20, 2018 1 minute ago, NinjaGamer said: Please add that in your testimony... :P There, fixed. Can we please work on the other girl now? Quote Link to comment
hfgghfh 43 Posted April 20, 2018 Share Posted April 20, 2018 3 minutes ago, Bees said: :P There, fixed. Can we please work on the other girl now? Sorry! Couldn't resist! XD Quote Link to comment
ola93 415 Posted April 20, 2018 Share Posted April 20, 2018 Ooh, another character :D How about Lauren for her name? She's somewhat younger than Lynn, 18 years old. She has brown hair and eyes and a sun tanned skin. HP: 5 (50) Attack: 4 Defense: 5 Speed: 6 Mana: 4 Holding: 6 As for her current bladder's status: she didn't come from behind Lynn so she probably hasn't seen that toilet in a while and as a proper young lady, that means she hasn't relieved herself for that time. Her bladder is an uncomfortable 75% filled, but with her (slightly) over average control that's nothing to be too worried about yet. Quote Link to comment
Bees 217 Posted April 20, 2018 Author Share Posted April 20, 2018 Just now, NinjaGamer said: Sorry! Couldn't resist! XD It's fine. xP Quote Link to comment
hfgghfh 43 Posted April 20, 2018 Share Posted April 20, 2018 I have no idea what the hair style and her eye colour should be sorry! as for the skin colour, I would say white but that might come off racist... anyway! For the stats, let's put them all on holding so she can hold MASSIVE AMOUNTS!! finally, the desperation! i would put it on 200% already, but I'm worried she'll explode the second we get right back to the story. So I reckon we'll do 100% Quote Link to comment
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