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7 hours ago, jimpix123 said:

I'm surprised you never described her "rock hard bladder bulge" lol

Excellent story though, great job

I was honestly a little surprised about that myself last night when I realized I didn't mention the word bulge once.

That said, the bulk of this story was written several years ago, with a different writing style than I normally use today, as I mentioned in my first post. Aside from fixing a couple of typos in that part, I changed nothing else when I added an ending to this story. I tried to mimic the  writing style from that part in my ending. I wanted to see if people would prefer one writing style over the other.

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