Grim 79 Posted May 18, 2017 Popular Post Share Posted May 18, 2017 (edited) Mara Jeez, where is she? She's really late... It was past 12:30, and they were supposed to meet up at 12. If she'd known she would turn up this late, she wouldn't have rushed out in such a hurry this morning. She'd managed to leave her jacket, backpack and wallet behind in the scurry- not to mention her keys. In other words, She was locked out of her apartment. Again; for the third time this week. Honestly, she couldn't even argue when her friends called her the ditz friend anymore. Things like these were rather regular occurances, but her friends were of the reliable kind to make up for it, usually. Charlie was one of said reliable friends. Never ever had Mara experienced that she showed up more than 10 minutes late, and she really and wasn't the kindto show up late without giving a heads up. Today? Not a peep. It was 30 minutes past their rendevouz time, and she was yet to show up. Incredibly inconvenient, in this case. It was the first hot day of the summer, and she practically dove out of her bed this morning. The heat, exertion and time had left her really, really thirsty. Plus, she kinda really needed to pee. She felt a shudder ride up her back. That's it, holding was starting to take a lot more effort than she'd usually let it.... ACTION [?] PROFILE MARA (22) Shyness 80% SETTING: Public park. It's an area Mara knows fairly well, with no public restroom that she knows of. Inventory: Phone, 35% Battery Thirst: High Desperation: Medium (295/??) HOW TO PLAY You, the players come with ideas to what our heroine will do. Her actions is decided partly by popularity, and partly by how in character it is. Example starter choices: [ Bring out phone and call Charlie ] [ Bring out phone and text Charlie and wait ] [ Get up and leave park in hopes of meeting Charlie on the way out ] [ Other ] Edited May 18, 2017 by Grim (see edit history) DerivativeWings, Zorb, HPattern and 5 others 8 Quote Link to comment
SeriousSly 192 Posted May 18, 2017 Share Posted May 18, 2017 @Grim I love the art style! :O I vote to call Charlie! Quote Link to comment
Leaky Bunnie 268 Posted May 18, 2017 Share Posted May 18, 2017 She should try her best to ignore the urge, then call Charlie. (Also this art is gorgeous! <3) Quote Link to comment
Nikeryda 181 Posted May 19, 2017 Share Posted May 19, 2017 I will also vote to call her. Quote Link to comment
Grim 79 Posted May 20, 2017 Author Popular Post Share Posted May 20, 2017 Thank you for the compliments guys! its much appreachiated :) --- Mara Come on, pick up pick up pick up... Mara decided to call Charlie up, but with no luck. She tapped her fingers at her sides as she repeated her call for a third time, only to be met by another automated message. The number you're calling is unavailable. Please try again later. "Noooooooo! Charlie!" She hissed at the empty line. Feeling defeated, she put the phone back in her pocket. She glanced around the park. There wasn't a lot of people aroind, but still enough to make her feel jittery. It wasn't private enough for her to express her desperation without feeling embarrassed, still, she crossed her legs as she scanned the park for a glimpe of her friend. What now? dodedrea, bangboom, HPattern and 4 others 7 Quote Link to comment
randomrobot007 60 Posted May 20, 2017 Share Posted May 20, 2017 Start looking for a bush thats way out of the way so she can pee in privace P.s love the artwork Quote Link to comment
Palloren 239 Posted May 20, 2017 Share Posted May 20, 2017 Sit and watch Charlie Quote Link to comment
Nikeryda 181 Posted May 20, 2017 Share Posted May 20, 2017 Based off our personality I don't think we'd just squat somewhere and pee. I'm gonna say we walk around a bit and see if we can find a bathroom. Quote Link to comment
smilelyjr 2 Posted May 20, 2017 Share Posted May 20, 2017 Sit and wait for Charlie Quote Link to comment
Potty-Polly 128 Posted May 20, 2017 Share Posted May 20, 2017 2 hours ago, smilelyjr said: Sit and wait for Charlie agreed Quote Link to comment
DerivativeWings 1,648 Posted May 20, 2017 Share Posted May 20, 2017 (edited) Checking around for a public toilet seems pretty reasonable. Mara is thirsty, hot, uncomfortable and really has to pee. If she looks around for a snack shop she can use a toilet and eat ice cream. My goal in these kinds of situations is always ice cream. I dunno if Mara agrees. Also; does she know the layout of this park? If so, snack shops may be easier to find. Also, also; her phone seems to be of modern manufacture. Does it have a Google maps equivalent? (I understand if it doesn't, GPS is a plot-destroyer) If so, snack shop finding is even easier. Final also; I am a fan of this interactive! Your characters are always very expressive (and hot), Grim. Edited May 20, 2017 by DerivativeWings (see edit history) Quote Link to comment
Gotta_Tinkle! 10 Posted May 29, 2017 Share Posted May 29, 2017 (edited) Start doing complete splits and pressing on her bladder. She might have an accident, but who cares! Edited May 29, 2017 by Gotta_Tinkle! (see edit history) Quote Link to comment
Harris 74 Posted May 30, 2017 Share Posted May 30, 2017 On 26.05.2017 at 5:26 AM, MaggieZStar said: try to look around for some sort of store or restaurant where she can use the bathroom and drink up. Quote Link to comment
Grim 79 Posted August 14, 2017 Author Share Posted August 14, 2017 Hey guys! sorry for the wait! I had to spend my few drawing hours doing commission this summer. Hope some of you guy are still with me :OO --- Mara She waited for a few minutes by the bench, bouncing her leg impatiently. Glancing at her phone on regular intervals, she waited for a message from Charlie. She had messaged her several times, even on facebook and snapchat (she had even tried to dig up her position from the snap map, but she hadn't been active at all today, appearently...), but there was no sign of her friend. 12:35 12:40 12:45 45 minutes since they were suppoed to meet up. That' it, something had definitely come up. Waiting any longer couldn't possibly be reasonable, right? If she waited any longer, she was sure she was going to wet herself! They would have to meet up somewhere else. She left the meeting spot. --- The park was on the west side of town. They'd chosen it because it ha this remote, yet homely feeling to it. It wasn't too big, and the other park goers were usually just the neighbourhoods group of kids and some elderly couples. A perfect place to feel the spring sun on your face and listen to the songbirds. The only big drawback of the place was that they didn't have any restroom facilites, Mara noted, as she made her way down the pathway. She wa going to have to go somewhere else if she was to relive herelf. No way she'd squat down in there! What if people saw her? plus he hadn't exactly mastered the technique it required... Mara was a city girl, born and raised. It only took her a few minutes to get to the edge of the park, and found herelf in the middle of suburbia. She took a moment to consider her options. She came here by bus, so she knows where the bus stop is, and it takes about a 15 minutes walk to get out of the residental area and get to the first stores and cafés. Other than that, she really didn't know a lot about the area. She only really came here for the park after all! ------ Profile MARA (22) Shyness 80% SETTING: Edge of park Inventory: Phone, 30% Battery Thirst: High Desperation: Medium (300/??) HPattern and DerivativeWings 2 Quote Link to comment
Harris 74 Posted August 14, 2017 Share Posted August 14, 2017 Quote a 15 minutes walk to get out of the residental area and get to the first stores and cafés And your drawings are awesome, nice to have you back. I knew I followed this for a reason. Quote Link to comment
Grim 79 Posted August 14, 2017 Author Share Posted August 14, 2017 (edited) On 20.5.2017 at 3:31 AM, randomrobot007 said: P.s love the artwork Thank you very much! I'm hoping to improve as it goes on. I'll hope it'll keep being to your liking :))) On 20.5.2017 at 9:51 PM, DerivativeWings said: Final also; I am a fan of this interactive! Your characters are always very expressive (and hot), Grim. Hehehe are they? I mean, the expression and body language is the best part of desperation! Not putting some time into them would be such a waste! I'm really happy you appreachiate their design. -- @Harris :OOO Thank you very much! I hope not to abandon you all again anytime soon! It usually depend on the amount of work I have to take on to scrape by. Please continue to follow my interactive. We are going places. Also. Also. To everyone who i interested: I do commissions! Yes, it was time for some shameless self promotion. Current rate is at 10EUR-30EUR. Just saying ;) Edited August 14, 2017 by Grim (see edit history) DerivativeWings 1 Quote Link to comment
Bismiris 320 Posted August 14, 2017 Share Posted August 14, 2017 Great to see your art again, Grim! Quote Link to comment
DerivativeWings 1,648 Posted August 14, 2017 Share Posted August 14, 2017 Always a treat when interactives return unexpectedly! Stoked to see the continuation. Are we making a choice here in regards to the interactive? In that case I vote for "head towards residential area and cafés (Destination: Toilets and Ice cream)" Maybe double check map function on phone first. Quote Link to comment
smilelyjr 2 Posted August 15, 2017 Share Posted August 15, 2017 Please continue Quote Link to comment
Grim 79 Posted August 15, 2017 Author Share Posted August 15, 2017 Nice to see some enthusiasm even after this long! Yes, this is where you guys come with suggestions of what she might do next! Seems I accidentally neglected to mention it in the last post :o so, basically; What now? Quote Link to comment
Canopy 54 Posted August 15, 2017 Share Posted August 15, 2017 Find a bench. sit down and do the heel thing and try to figure out what to do. But sit there for half an hour. Quote Link to comment
Svetlanoff 4 Posted August 16, 2017 Share Posted August 16, 2017 Seconding going through the residential area. Also, text Charlie to let her know she left the park. Quote Link to comment
Bismiris 320 Posted August 16, 2017 Share Posted August 16, 2017 Call ol' Charlie and tell them about our situation. Maybe they can meet at a different location. If not, pop a squat somewhere, it's never too late to learn how. smilelyjr 1 Quote Link to comment
Nikeryda 181 Posted August 16, 2017 Share Posted August 16, 2017 Go to a cafe and get a drink. Shoot Charlie a text saying that we left. Quote Link to comment
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