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Megan smiled into her webcam, her left arm held over her naked breasts and her right hand covering her vagina. Countless messages flooded the chatbox on her page. “put the arm down bby” “sho

The Final Part- ***** Emma moaned and gasped as the two women continued to drag her. Every few seconds, another tiny spurt of wee filled her panties before it soaked into her fatigues. She d

Here we go, everyone. This is a very, very long one. When I finished writing it, I tried to see if there was a way to split it into two parts, but there really isn't. I'll try to keep future parts mor

Amazing.

And might I add: There are loads of women who had a really good time when losing their virginity. Especially those who do relative late in life, probably already had quite a range of objects inside of them. We do try out different things on our own, you know?

Even if not, tearing your hymen is (for most girls) not like getting stabbed in the chest or anything. Not enjoying yourself is often either your partner not knowing what they are doing, our a purely mental thing because you are so nervous.

What I'm trying to say is: No, Vee having that much fun is not particularly unrealistic. Your storytelling and world-building is great, stop putting down your own work. IF you are indeed looking for things to beat yourself up over: Cece changed hair color, didn't she? :tongue:

Also, yes, I'm going to bug the living daylights out of you for the next chapter.

 

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2 hours ago, holdit247 said:

Haven't read Chapter 11 yet, but am eager to.  I wanted to pick you up on your earlier comment that you've seen a woman pee 2,400ml.  You can't leave us hanging like that!  Please God man tell us in intimate detail the circumstances, why she held so much and why you got to see her measure.  Was she into it or just massively endowed?

Lol it wasn't in-person. She was a member on the old holdingit.minuteboard, username of Moonlight Magic. She just had a freak of nature bladder. Had a video where she did 2400, but it was only once. She always did 2000-2300 but that one time she just pushed it that much further.

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On 28/10/2017 at 5:23 PM, Bulge_Lover said:

Lol it wasn't in-person. She was a member on the old holdingit.minuteboard, username of Moonlight Magic. She just had a freak of nature bladder. Had a video where she did 2400, but it was only once. She always did 2000-2300 but that one time she just pushed it that much further.

Aww shucks.  I never got to see any of hers before they were taken down

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On 28.10.2017 at 12:23 PM, Bulge_Lover said:

Lol it wasn't in-person. She was a member on the old holdingit.minuteboard, username of Moonlight Magic. She just had a freak of nature bladder. Had a video where she did 2400, but it was only once. She always did 2000-2300 but that one time she just pushed it that much further.

OMG! Are any of her videos still possible to see or download anywhere?

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24 minutes ago, Dexholder said:

OMG! Are any of her videos still possible to see or download anywhere?

Not that I'm aware of. She sadly had a lot of mental health issues and would often say she's leaving the fetish forever and take all her videos with her. Then she'd show up two years later with a few new vids, then vanish again. This happened like six times over the past ten or so years.

All I could dig up are some pics of her bulge and her measurement.

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She was definitely magic, and I really hope she's alright. The poor woman couldn't seem to find any peace.

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I used to know Moonlight Magic myself, too. She definitely had an amazing bladder, aided by a quirk of anatomy where she was physically incapable of wetting herself; no matter how full she got, even if she actively tried to, she could not get any urine to come out while she was clothed and/or in a place that her body knew was not safe to pee in. This was also helped by her having an incredible fetish for a full bladder, not even being able to orgasm unless her bladder was at least a little full. And personally, that's probably the hottest combination in the world to me; a woman blessed with an enormous bladder, a physical inability to involuntarily urinate, and a lust directly connected to being full. Just sayin' Bulge_Lover, hint hint :P

Sadly, as mentioned, she suffered from some serious psychological issues, mostly related to social anxiety. I haven't seen her active anywhere for at least 6 years myself, though where ever she is, I wish her well. She was a miracle of a holding queen and a dear friend.

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"I am sure you can tell by the colour of my skin..."?

As a pale-as-a-bedsheet Persian infidel, I call shenanigans. :tongue:

 

Not gonna lie, some of Maisha's backstory hits far too close to home for comfort. But I love how Meghan introduced Maisha into holding it for pleasure, so I'll just skip ahead to the holding and the sex in future reads, if you don't mind. :wink:

I'd normally argue that Meghan being so amazing at pleasuring other women, despite the fact that she doesn't have any previous experience before cum coming to the dungeon, messes with suspension of disbelief. But within the context of the story, it really doesn't. Like Vee enjoying losing her virginity. It just feels natural. This is a place that turns every woman into a little sexbomb, and most of them into connoisseurs of muff, anyway.

Excited for more, and especially for the big finale.

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5 hours ago, randomkath said:

Not gonna lie, some of Maisha's backstory hits far too close to home for comfort.

I'm truly sorry about whatever you've had to deal with in the past. I've always been a loud and proud advocate for women's rights, feminism, and freedom from religion. As such, I've met many women with similar or worse backgrounds than Maisha through various events and forums. If you ever need someone to talk to, I'm here. Not as a random on a pornographic forum, not as a useless dickpic-slinging letch, but as a friend who will never say anything to make you uncomfortable.

On a lighter topic...

5 hours ago, randomkath said:

I'll just skip ahead to the holding and the sex in future reads, if you don't mind. :wink:

No need to worry about that. I can promise now that the rest of this story will feature no more "heavy" topics. We're getting to the endgame now.

5 hours ago, randomkath said:

I'd normally argue that Meghan being so amazing at pleasuring other women, despite the fact that she doesn't have any previous experience before cum coming to the dungeon, messes with suspension of disbelief.

I have a whole lot of lesbian friends that I've met at the previously-mentioned events and from my discussions with them, I've gleaned that women usually just sort of naturally know what to do to other women because it's just what they would want done to themselves. Have I been misinformed? If so, please enlighten me, I'm always looking to improve the realism of my character's sexual encounters.

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You are a gentleman and a scholar. Your offer of support is greatly appreciated, but it is, thankfully, unneeded. I have never personally suffered abuse, and I wasn't fishing for sympathy here. What I was trying to say was: I feel sorry for not being able to fully appreciate your story, and give it all the attention it deserves, because the framing device gets in the way. Through absolutely no fault of yours , it's all in my head. That's too bad, because the fetish part is, as always, top-notch. Consider me your greatest fan.

 

As for the realism of your characters' sexual encounters: They are great. And I don't mean "... for a lesbian scene written by a straight man", I mean "they are great."

Being good in the sack usually takes practice. Physically, women are more straightforward than a lot of people, including other women, seem to think. The mechanical basics are simple enough. Kiss here, touch there, rub this, squeeze that. A clit is easy to figure out, too. I'd wager most women like a medium amount of pressure, and either up-and-down rubbing, or circular movement. Oral sex is not really difficult either. The perfect ratio of suction to tongue action varies, but that's easy to adjust on an individual basis, once you get going. Finding another girl's g-spot on first try? That's more for advanced users. Maybe it doesn't even do that much for her, you need to find out first. Being mind-blowingly amazing to the point where your partner is reduced to a clitoris connected to a brainstem? I mean, like, the first time you are with her? That's pro level. Certainly not impossible, just rare for inexperienced women. If you're a natural at reading other people, especially physical cues, that might just work.

The thing is: In the context of your story, it's still believable. Vee enjoying her first time is okay, too. It works, because the reader accepts that the chemistry between the girls is just right for that kind of thing. The safe, erotically charged, fetish-fueled enviroment doesn't hurt either.

 

P.S.: I still call bullshit on the skin color statement. :tongue:

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