bugyi 1 Posted November 10, 2013 Share Posted November 10, 2013 I also like the idea of linking Amanda's own story with the stories of the accidents she is exploring with the device. Here are two more ideas in case you like it: - While Amanda is busy getting involved with the device she could put off getting to the bathroom for too long and have an accident herself, and then she has to find an explanation for her mother and / or sister (otherwise she can hide it somehow). - It could be possible with the device to scan a person and get information about accidents they had longer time ago. Quote Link to comment
orbgon 34 Posted November 10, 2013 Share Posted November 10, 2013 This is one of the best stories on here and it has a lot of potential. It makes me wish I had access to the device. I'd have made some different choices. Anubis 1 Quote Link to comment
Sullen 3 Posted November 21, 2013 Share Posted November 21, 2013 More please! Like seriously, this is amazing!~ Quote Link to comment
adriangache 257 Posted December 15, 2013 Share Posted December 15, 2013 Wow this concept is ridiculously creative, can't wait for the next chapter Quote Link to comment
Shadowx996 0 Posted December 19, 2013 Share Posted December 19, 2013 This is a great story and I would love to see more of it. Quote Link to comment
Unbeknownst 197 Posted January 4, 2014 Share Posted January 4, 2014 A mixture is perfect. I like the idea of developing Amanda more as a character in addition to simply watching said device. It ties the plot together well. I've thoroughly enjoyed your story so far, my own are far worse. I also enjoyed the fact it focuses on the desperation and wetting without over sexualizing the characters. Better than five stars in my opinion. Quote Link to comment
Guest KTV Posted November 21, 2014 Share Posted November 21, 2014 Hi everyone - after a lot of agonising over whether to resurrect one of my stories lately, I've decided to continue this one. Planning to post the next chapter this weekend :) Quote Link to comment
bugyi 1 Posted November 21, 2014 Share Posted November 21, 2014 Hi Kelli, that's really wonderful news. I can hardly wait. Quote Link to comment
Lunx 23 Posted November 22, 2014 Share Posted November 22, 2014 Awesome. You have a wonderful story here. Quote Link to comment
lalilola 81 Posted November 25, 2014 Share Posted November 25, 2014 more stories please... i beg you.. Quote Link to comment
TheMarcher 40 Posted November 26, 2014 Share Posted November 26, 2014 Yesssssss, I will be waiting for this with bated breath. :3 Quote Link to comment
myaso2005 12 Posted December 6, 2014 Share Posted December 6, 2014 Still waiting... :) Quote Link to comment
Bedwettingchik12 322 Posted June 20, 2016 Share Posted June 20, 2016 On June 18, 2016 at 4:26 PM, mattso800 said: dead ... Yes. So why do you insist on bringing it up? Quote Link to comment
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