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I also like the idea of linking Amanda's own story with the stories of the accidents she is exploring with the device.

Here are two more ideas in case you like it:

- While Amanda is busy getting involved with the device she could put off getting to the bathroom for too long and have an accident herself, and then she has to find an explanation for her mother and / or sister (otherwise she can hide it somehow).

- It could be possible with the device to scan a person and get information about accidents they had longer time ago.

 

 

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A mixture is perfect. I like the idea of developing Amanda more as a character in addition to simply watching said device. It ties the plot together well.

 

I've thoroughly enjoyed your story so far, my own are far worse. I also enjoyed the fact it focuses on the desperation and wetting without over sexualizing the characters.

 

Better than five stars in my opinion.

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