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Here it is...the long awaited animation...well not really but yeah its here finally.

So yeah this one was an absolute bitch to make. While Lordbardak's is more challenging in terms of length and concept, this one was more challenging in terms of technical difficulties. During the third scene, a visual glitch happened where all of the physic bones on the models outright vanished entirely; so much so that you could see through the model. I could not fix the glitch; if anything made it worse somehow as then it affected all the other models on screen. Because of that, the whole scene need to be reanimated...which cost a full day of work. And then there were problems with the pee streams operating incorrectly...and finally the video editing program crashed...which prevented me from finishing the video until literally now.

But yeah...it is finally here.

The story is Ruby and Yang are invited to compete in Smash Ultimate for a chance of being on the official roster. On there way to the city where the Smash Arena is centered at, they have to pee. The bathroom ends up being closed, so they are forced to urinate off the road at some point.

So anyway...enjoy the animation. Give me a review and comment and rating...no seriously do it. I don't like working on this shit and getting no feedback.

Japanese credits

Pee effect by E教授
Inkling and Inkshot models by きのさん

Lucina (Marth Version) by Slenderman (Huh...not actually in Japanese)
 


What's New in Version 1.3.0

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This update is merely a small update using a new feature (or an old feature I never noticed because herp derp) from VSDC Video Editor. I merely just upped the framerate on the animation from 30 FPS to 60 FPS. Aside from that, nothing else really changed. 

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   4 of 4 members found this review helpful 4 / 4 members

I have to say the second version is of much higher quality than the first as far as writing goes. While I'm flattered that you would re-do a whole project just based on my own criticisms, I'm glad to hear you say you don't plan to make a habit of it! ^-^

Of course, while there are some things I still don't agree with as far as the writing goes, beggars can't be choosers, and honestly, the effort put in really earns lots of respect, at least from me.

Kudos and keep it up! ?

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   1 of 1 member found this review helpful 1 / 1 member

I know I commented already, but I suppose I could use this to be a little more critical.

There were a couple spots where the characters idled for a few seconds without doing anything. For instance, from 5:24 to 5:30, Yang just stands there doing nothing before jumping away. I don't know if there any technical reasons for that, but it disrupted the video's flow a bit. Ayano and Inkling's scene had a bit of that, too, but that may have been for comedic purposes I would also proofread your captions before putting them up. Spelling errors and the like bring out the grammar nazi in me, which is not something I want when trying to watch a fetish animation. The rest of my nitpicking is just things I know you can't really do anything about, like weird clothing physics and the video quality itself not being the greatest.

But as always, you continue to improve with each video, so the good always outweighs the bad. Keep up the good work!

 

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A lot of time and effort went into this, even more so since you took the feedback and decided to rewrite dialogues and even reanimate entire scenes to be more in line with the characters. That alone, for me, is worth five stars. Let's get down to business.

While I do like both versions, I feel a bit more lenient towards the new edition, simply because I'm a big softie and ended up enjoying the softer tone the new version took over the Ruby-Yang relationship. Now, let's talk about the main subjects: the desperation and the humor. You went all out on both and I deeply appreciate that. I honestly cracked up in the new version when the Heavy showed up again to keep the plot moving now that Ruby wasn't getting left behind. You made the most out of what MMD can offer in terms of "impact", which is what mostly defines GMod humor.

Let's talk desperation. Man, I honestly got nothing to criticize over this. You always aim for a great deal of variety and you always throw us a bit more than what the plot should offer (in this case, it was the side story about Yandere Girl and the Inkling Girl). As a guy who absolutely appreciates relief endings, I was so pleasantly surprised to see that pretty much the peeing here was not a complete wetting... in some way, at least. On a side note, although Ruby's bottomless model, although not showing any lady bits, was really standing out quite a bit, in a good way. Her pink, pale skin suddenly showing up from under her black skirt made for quite the noticeable contrast to capture the eye.

To sum it up, although I may be getting repetitive with my reviews already, it's a great work and I loved every second of it. Love the running gag about Link being the most attractive being in the universe and that sex scene right at the end was absolutely adorable!

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