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This comic is a visual retelling of a story found on the ToiletStool.com forums about a girl who peed herself in terror on a theme park ride called the fear fall, and her twin sister who wet her pants laughing at the narrator's plight. I've made all artwork and the true fun was drawing and coloring these so for a small fee you can enjoy it as well. You get both the original high quality colored scan of my drawing, plus a scaled down compressed version easier for reading. I hope you enjoy, there's more to come!

The story's original text can be found on Old Posts from the Toilet Page #1356.


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It's nice to see your new release! I've mentioned before how much I enjoyed your art style, and I'm glad you were able to expand and add more details/characters to really flesh it out. Something I would have liked to see more of would be streams and puddles. The first wetting was great; it had a shot of the stream and puddle and felt like she had a full bladder. The other two felt lesser in quantity, and not seeing the complete aftermath of the accidents didn't make them feel as complete.  That said, those are things that would only make them better for my tastes, not things that detract from them as is. I just wanted to throw in my two cents.

Overall I highly enjoyed it, and I'm very much looking forward to your future works as well. It's great to see more Western artists pop up, and skilled ones at that.

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6 hours ago, PersonGuy said:

It's nice to see your new release! I've mentioned before how much I enjoyed your art style, and I'm glad you were able to expand and add more details/characters to really flesh it out. Something I would have liked to see more of would be streams and puddles. The first wetting was great; it had a shot of the stream and puddle and felt like she had a full bladder. The other two felt lesser in quantity, and not seeing the complete aftermath of the accidents didn't make them feel as complete.  That said, those are things that would only make them better for my tastes, not things that detract from them as is. I just wanted to throw in my two cents.

Overall I highly enjoyed it, and I'm very much looking forward to your future works as well. It's great to see more Western artists pop up, and skilled ones at that.

Thank you, the main reason I focused on the first girl and her bladder and wetting was being the narrator we only knew the state of her own bladder. That's why her sister's moments weren't as covered inside as they were thru the stains on her jeans. Glad you enjoyed it and thank you for buying and for the feeback!!

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